Ek anjani dor PT 17 PG 138 AUG 18 - Page 27

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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice lovely parts

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: drrose31

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Posted: 12 years ago
~EK ANJAANI DOR~




PART 9


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Here geet didn't take a second to take leave as she knew that right now her baby might have woken up .. she was anxious and worried….

Tiny and small tears formed in his eyes.. he was weeping .. nidhi was getting tensed seeing dhruv… he was already weak and having slight breathing problem and now she don't want him to suffer ….

Nidhi: shh baby mumma will be right here.. chup ho jao….


The two souls were so deeply connected In these months that even they can sense the feelings that were going on with the other… here a small two month old baby knew who cares for him… who is there for him.. he knew that someone is there for him .. he knew that someone close to his relation is there just waiting for his one glimpse.. what an irony the baby is having both mother and father showering their love on him but unfortunately he is not able to get it…

Here maan couldn't find any clue else SHIMLA to find the whereabouts of his heartless wife who was hard as a rock.. she was so cruel that she left her new born to die…. And here the baby is having who is ready to sacrifice all the benefits of hers just for his sake…. Just for his one smile she is ready to give up all her dreams….

Geet came out of the cabin… and looked here and there to find her baby.. she was feeling restless .. like knew that her baby was crying just for his mother's warm embrace…. The protective feeling that geet was giving him was making the baby restless….

Geet quickly called nidhi who told her to came to the nearby caf….

Geet: nidhi where are you… baby toh theek hai na…. she heard soft whimpering… geet knew that her boy was in the need of her mother….

"Ek maa ka ehsaas uske zehan me aise bas chuka tha jisne uss nanhi so jaan ki becaini ko ek pal me ek aahat se pehchaan liya…."

Nidhi: geet come to nearby caf right now… office ke bilkul saamne hi hai… baby chup nahi ho raha hai….

Geet hurridly left the office and immediately crossed the signal… she could see nidhi taking a stroll with dhruv on her shoulder and her baby was hitting her with her tinny hands… his eyes were red.. and cheeks were filled with tears… her heart ached seeing baby's tears…..

Nidhi: dhruv mujhe maar mat.. teri mumma aa rahi hai….but our baby was not ready to listen.. he did a lage burr on her face..making her face wet… and with much arrogance turned his face….

Nidhi made a face… before she could give see him… geet snatched her baby…and cooed him laughing…

Geet: haww ye kya kiya baby … dekho nidhi masi ko kya kiya hai… nidhi ye le clean your self.. she hand over a soft wet cloth to nidhi to wipe off the little saliva that was on her face due to her naughty baby… and she in mocking anger tried to scold dhruv…

Baby bahut naughty ho gaya hai.. dekho this is not right… .. but baby was in super angry mood….

( akhir MSK ka beta hai…) and hugged geet possessively.. trying to wrap his tiny hands around his mommy..saying complianing… where were you…

She felt the small smile that was coming straight from her heart …geet snuggled dhruv to her heart…. When she felt his tiny hands on herface and two little tear drops in his eyes.. her heart ached seeing her precious life crying…. She imediately apologised to her baby….

Geet: aww baby don't cry.. mumma is sorry…. Chalo now don't cry.. you know mumma cant see his baby crying.. please don't baby…. She softly wiped those perals and kissed his nose.. he gave her a soft crying look that he usually give when he is hungry… geet quickly took his milk bottle from her bag and layed him in her lap to feed him.. he immediately took her one finger in his one hand to assure himself that his mumma is near him and start sucking her milk slowly slowly…

Nidhi saw the bonding between the two and asked the agenda of the meeting….

Nidhi: so why did they called you here… everything is fine na geet…

Geet smiled a little still looking at her baby.. she tickled his toe that he was swaying and answered her….

Geet: I have been transferred to delhi for the new project… and entire responsibility is mine…

Nidhi: that's a good news …. Geet.. aisi oppurtunity baar baar nahi milti so when are you going…

Geet slightly frowned… she was not at all going leaving her baby…

Geet: how can I go nidhi leaving baby…

Nidhi looked at her like she has lost her mind… the protectiveness the love that she could see in geets eyes her gestures cannot be explained by mere words… the bonding these two strangers are having she couldn't deny but now geets words are making her insane …

Nidhi: are you mad or what baby bhi toh tere saath jayega na… wo yahan kahan rahega aur tere bina… wait a minute geet are you thinking of sending dhruv to any orphanage …

Geet was flabbergasted at nidhi's words.. she was stunned these words were like poisonous arrows to her soul…

Geet: ye tu kya keh rahi hai.. ye mera beta hai..and he will live with me for ever… he will not go anywhere.. she was shivering with the mere thought of sending baby away fro m her.. she couldn't even imagine her lif e without her tiny life…

Nidhi smiled a little and assured her …

Nidhi: toh phir ….

Geet: wo toh baby ki medication aur treatment chal rahi hai and sudden climate change mere baby ko affect na kare me isliye keh rahi thi….

She was indeed not a normal human..

Nidhi st: geet itna toh iski sagi maa ne bhi kabi nahi socha hoga jitna tu soch rahi hai… babaji aapne ise kis mitti ka banaya hai.. please ise kabhi bhi baby se alag mat karns she wont be able be live ….

Yes it was true there were some chances that may be the real parents can claim dhruv .. but she never wanted that happen….

Nidhi suggested making geet calm a bit…

Nidhi: meet his doctor and ask her if it is fine with him to go to delhi….

Geet nodded slightly…

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww so cute update
Loved it
How much geet loves little dhruv nd vicr versa
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update

Aww baby was angry on Nidhi as he want her mamma

Geet is worried for Dhruv health

Geet - nidhi convo was gud as she made Geet understand
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Posted: 12 years ago
Saw heart touching update.
The feelings of baby & Geet for each other was well portrayed.
Can't wait for Geet to move to Delhi.
Pls pls pls continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
baby missing mama
geet cares 4 him lot..
superb
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
both dhruv and geet are restless without each other
maan cannot find his baby in simla
waiting for maan to meet geet and dhruv
please update soon

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