INTEZAAR - EPILOGUE 18/2/2013 Page no - 73 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Prabh.DDian

awesome update
sweet and emotional story
next update mai tu zaroor ko bomb phodegi tuje ache se janti hoon twist queen



hahahaha 😃
1 bar nahi 100 baar hai tuta 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
PART - 3

GEET had many doubts while leaving him. She doesnt understand the reason behind her restlessness. She only thinks about him in her whole journey. Both reached to her house. Her parents gave warm welcom to both. She forgot everything after coming here. All enjoyed and make Pinky comfortable with them. She got to know that finaly Brij is succeded in setting his business in Delhi and after his marriage all were staying in Delhi permanantely. Geet celebrate like a kid coz now she hav no need to stay at hostel any more plus her big bro going to get married soon. Most of the time of Geet and Pinky is going to spend in exploring the markets of Lukhnow for the shopping of marriage. Pinky realy loved her company and now she also strt live life joyfuly. Geet's family love her like their own daughter. Time passed fastly and her b'day came. All wished her and shower their love to their only princess. Then she reminds that Maan gave her gift and told her to open on her b'day only. She quickly jumped off fron her bed and open her drawr. She quickly searched the gift and opend it and found small box having silver anklet and one piece of paper. He wrote somthing for her. She start reading:

Like a star you came into my life
You filled my heart with joy
You took my pain as if it was yours
You provided me with love that no one could give me
You gave me a shoulder to cry on
You were my pillar when I was falling
You were my strength when I was weak
With your smile you made my living on earth worthwhile
With the soft words you whispered in my ear
Made me realize that I was in Love indeed
Without you next to me my life is meaningless
Every day I sit and pray that you will remain as sweet as you
are
And that is why I will always...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY GEET


he leave last line unfinished. Geet tossed the paper sevral times may he wrote last line some where,but it was uncomplete. A weak smile creapt on her plum lips,but her thumping heartbeat raised more,bcoz of this uncomplete poem. A strange fear occured in her. She crushed it tightly near her heart and saw blankly outside. She realized that almost one month is passed and she even dont talk to him for once. She immediately pick up her mobile and called him,but no.is out of service. She dialled madly to boys hostel,but he was not there. She calmed herself that may b he called her today. With every ring she hope its may b from his side,but she gloomed every time when she saw name other than him. All her friends wished her and she only ask about him. No1 had any info about him and this makes her more worried for him. She immediately wanna go Delhi to search him. Her parents arranged party for her but she only pretending of enjoying. Next month of their holidays are started but she wanna go back to Delhi but she cant as Brij's marriage date is near. With a grant ceromany Brij's wedding is done and 2 months passed. Geet hurridly done her packing. All thakhur's shifted to Delhi. As Brij alredy buy banglow for them. Results r out all scored top marks. Geet rushed to collage hurridly in a hope she met him. All students r there except him. Geet searche him in whole premises,canteen,classes everywhere. She went to his hostel's room which is locked. She enquired from reception and found that he leave the room after 2 days the day she leave from there. He was in so much hurry so dont tell any1 where he is going. There is no contact no of him. Geet felt shattred. Pinky supports her,coz only she is aware of their silent feelings. Second semister stared. She focused on her studies and indulger herself only in books to get rid of his thoughts. Many new students joined collage. Adi one of a brilliant student joined them in sec semister. He bcom good friend of them. One day she got to know that Maan is back in collage. She madly run to see him. He was coming here to collect his papers and do some formalities. Geet ran to catch him but it was too late,when she reached near principal's office,Maan leave alredy. He was in a car whch rush fastly from collage. He look outside suddnly and saw Geet standing. Both exchange glance for a sec and his car took him away frm her. She raised her hand to stop him but it was too late. He is far away from her. Geet wants to ask many thing from him,want to tell him many things,but destiney not allowed her.

4 years passed. Geet,Pinky and Adi all r doc now. Geet & Adi r appointed as Doc in XYZ Hospital,while Pinky do private.practise.

Pinky:tu aaj b use miss krti hai.hai na?

Geet:tu kiski baat kar rai hai Pinky?

she asked coldly.

Pinky:u know whom about i m talking.

Geet's eyes were blank and cold having no feelings.she is dead frm inside.
Geet:Pinky meri aaj pehli surgery hai or main late nahi hona chahti,catch u later.Adi upar first floor pe hai.

she walked off away from her sight...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Yehi dar tha yaar... Y dint maan say anything to her... God bichari ka dil toot gaya... Loved the update where is the precap yaar...?
Edited by ar_art - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
lovely part...poem is good
patha nahi update padthe aankon mein aansoon aagaye..hope maaneet will meet soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
awesoem update
very emotional and lovely poem
so what i thought happened maan really left
why he never tried to meet geet
there must eb some reason why woudl he not talk to geet
is it ki he understand his feelings and didnt want to destroy hsi frndship ith geet so he decided to go away from her or something happened

and now after 4 years also maan didnt contact her and thsi made geet all hard and stone i m dam sure ki now maan woud be MD of KC and he woudl have left MBBS

tu jaldi se update kar yaar kam se kam yeh to jaldi kar 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
geet missing her maan alot.pata nahi maan ne aisa kiyu kia.par i knw he did it for something.4 years they didnot meet each other.hope they will meet soon.i knw 😛..me feeling bad that geet miss her love😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
why maan did dis to her...wht will happen now...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
Nice update

Wht happened wid maan tht he left so suddenly widout informing anyone the reason

Geet is totally heartbroken

4 yrs had passed n geet is cold to any emotion
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
awesome update
but too short
yeh maan chala kyun gaya😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
wait why did he leave like that
and whats was with the incomplete poem
what the hell happened
and he didnt contact her either
they havent seen each toher for four years now
they saw each other just briefly when he came to collect his papers he saw her and yet he didnt speak to her
why did he do that
gosh this seemed so sad naa
what ever she may have said to pinky but she is still waiting for him aint she
she might have become cold but i guess with his arrival back in her life things could be better again
or is it too late for that
cheers for pm cant wait for more
oh and please accept my buddy request please

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