MG 'Tu Mila To Mili Aisi Jannat Mujhe/Prologue Pg1

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

new concept,

sounds interesting

but dont have a sad ending

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suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

awsome concept

please update part 1

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nahtani88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Lovely Start

Thanks For The PM

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kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

interesting title

nice prologue dear

waiting for updates'

thanx for the pm

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sona rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

omg JASS muahhh,

congrates on new story dear.

awesome prologue yar,u always wrote amazingly.

eagerly waiting for updates.

loved this banner a lot.

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Sonia KN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: sona-rai
omg JASS muahhh,
congrates on new story dear.
awesome prologue yar,u always wrote amazingly.
eagerly waiting for updates.
loved this banner a lot.

I m third class yaar don praise me

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sona rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Jass.KN
I m third class yaar don praise me

wattt😡r u out of ur mind,i'll give u a tight slap if u ever say that again for urself😡

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rashi_jain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Good start...luk who is talking here, u r already such an established writer n here m telling u if u r doing good or not😳

Anyways i liked this first person narration n really think its gonna b very nice emotional story😊

DO CONTINUE!!!❤️