Pt13'Forbidden Fire'Thrd7 Pg1

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sridevi

@sridevi_n

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

awesome update. maan had already arranged the blood but he didn't inform geet till she told him the lie that she will do what ever maan want after donating the blood.

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

awesome update
really this maan is an enigma
loved d story turning more nd more interesting nd very intriguing
do cont soon
please do update other ff of urs too
love thm all

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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

waoo ..

me to all the more curios to know what next ...

but maans parega iss devil mien kuch tou baat hai ..😉 every time a step ahead ..

u know what di ...in ur novel the scene of LIE BY OMISSION ..
where Maan says ...geet was a fool to believe if he will ever make such video of hers in that condition n even bigger fool to think he will let any one see it ..⭐️⭐️

that was the exact point a loved ur devil ..😳😳

n here as well the slight tint of goodness in hi devilish acts makes me fall in love with this side of MSK all over again ..

but poor geet kabhi nahi samajh paayegi iss riddled MSK ko ..

but i seriously didn't get one thing here ...

Y HE WANTS TO SEE FEAR IN HER EYES ..?

for once i can swallow he wants to accept his lust ...but Y FEAR ..

guess its related to the 2yrs wali mystery ..

n then ...what is in his mind ...whts the plan by saying ..

YOU WILL LOOSE NOTHING IF U AGREE TO DO AS I SAY ...???

me again in soo much curiosity ...plss update soon

n me double happy for the fact ...u r giving DIL in ur Blog again ...

yuppiee

i was soo much eager to re-read it ...😳

but to tell u the truth ...my college mates will be more than happy ..😆

all were mad behind ur novel ...

n i had a grt time teasing them ...

devil me ..😉

thank u for this awesom n fab intriguing update ...👏👏

well what else i can expect here ...😛😛

still madly in love with ur devil ..😳

but still i love u more 4 giving me this master piece ...⭐️⭐️

plss update soon ..

me waiting v.v.v.v.v.v.v... eagerly ...

Luv ya 🤗

Sobia ..

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 12 years ago

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 31

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

superb upd.

loved it so much.

This devil maan is my all time fav.

& its only bcoz of u annie.

thanky so much for this devilish upd.

& for ur buddy req. too.

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PujaShree

@PujaShree

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

ohhh this Man is unpredictable ...dont knw what is playing in his Mind...
but sumthing is quite serious which makes him like that...
N whn Maan dialed a numbr i was shocked ki He had alredy made arrangemnt for blood...
haha Maan tussi kamaal k ho...
N waiitng for next...:):)

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

wow lovely lovely my devilish update...te way my maan asking his and geet ki refusal was so lovely, but my devil gets wat he wants.. te way he arranged blood and making his geet to accept him was so lovely.. oh he want to see fear but want to make love to her with her full responds..wow tis is my devil..i love te update so much...te way he is carrying his geet to his room was so lovely...

Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago