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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju


Aa jaon milke poori icecream khatam karenge... Halla bol..😉 Hii I m tejal.. What's ur name?😊

tab to pakka khtm ho jaegi...😆😆
myslf deepali...hello...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Choti jaldi aa ja... Nahi toh khatam ho jayegi...😛


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Posted: 12 years ago
oyee nani shoo meli ice cream pe muh na maro, ni toh me u k muh ko marunga
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti

oyee nani shoo meli ice cream pe muh na maro, ni toh me u k muh ko marunga

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Posted: 12 years ago



very cute teaser...

I never comment on teasers but this teaser made me comment and request for update...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran





very cute teaser...

I never comment on teasers but this teaser made me comment and request for update...

aoww thts so sweet of u di, am happy u liked it
will try my best to update tonight
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayee loved it muahh muahh my maanu is so caring & love my hwa hwai too sweet :) + want update chukti plzo plz
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .bloom.

hayee loved it muahh muahh my maanu is so caring & love my hwa hwai too sweet :) + want update chukti plzo plz

Yeh ummah ummah kiske liye tha ha?? 😉 Mere ya maanu ke?
Update 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
(c) 16anyaa.gurti 2012. All rights reserved





(credit for these superbb banners goes to Sobia di 🤗)

I am really sorry guyzz that the prcap no. 1 is'nt in this update, showwiee, but pakka will add it in next part for sure.
Please bear this part till then


PART-6



He was coughing badly, while his face filled with tears. Rano immediately wiped his tears while daadi shouted for Nakul to bring some water for maan. Maan, hugged Rano tight while she patted his back and consoled him. Geet was stunned looking at him as she never thought that her prank could become unbearable for Maan, a sudden guilt started enpowering Geet's childish mind as her eyes started moistening slowly.

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Daadi made maan drink some water, and Maan hardly after taking few sips again hid himself in Rano's embrace... Rano and Daadi both were getting worried due to Maan's silent sobs and him not answering them. While Rano was busy comforting Maan, Daadi's eyes went to silent Geet sitting there with downcasted head and teary eyes, she got confused seeing the lively Geet suddenly so calm and teary, she thought maybe she was little shaken up due to maan's condition, so she said to Geet,
"Geet, app kyu udaas ho rahi hai? kuch nahi huya beta" but Geet just looked at her once and then again her lowered her eyes, she wanted to confess her deed lekin was unsure how to do so, it was soo strange k a girl who did'nt think once before speaking non-stop was here all shut...


Rano's eyes too went towards Geet and one look on her face was enough to convey the entire story, she understood that Geet was somewhere behind Maan's condition as she knew her daughter pretty well. And thus she said "Geet, yaha dekhiye." But poor geet got more scared this time, she started shivering a bit due to fear, and as she didnt raise her head still Rano this time sternly called out for her "Geet" and now Geet directly faced her with those shivering lips and big big teary eye.

"Geet, baat kya hai? Hume batayengi?" "Woh..w...oh Maa..n ko M.maan ko shard..i nee thi" "Toh phir?" Rano asked a bit loudly this time making Geet jump a little.. her patience breaking with the passing time.

"Rano, araam sey... bacchi hai wo. Wo pehle hi bohot sehmi huyi hai" Rano turned towards daadi to answer her when they heard Geet speaking in a go "humne maan ki naak mei pankh ghushaya tha, unko shardi nahi" and shut her eyes tightly after saying this. Rano and daadi were quiet for a while hearing to it while Maan was stunned, he didnt expect this coming.. as much as he knew Geet, he thought she would again cook some story but this was somehing unlike her. Maybe there are many faces of her still to be discovered.


Rano was really angry listening to this, she almost moved ahead towards Geet in anger but Geet jumped in daadi's arms sobbing and crying in fear. Maan was little taken back by Rano's sudden anger and somewhere he felt bad for Geet. coming out of Rano's arms he sat there quietly. While Rano's full attention was on Geet.


"Rano, app shant ho jayiye, hum araam se baat karte hai Geet se." "Kya baat maaji, mazaak bhi ek hadd tak hota hai, par yeh hai ke humari baat maanne ko tayyar nahi... yeh bhi kaisi masti huyi inki? Maan ki kya haalt thi appne dekhi na" "Haa Rano, hum samajhte hai lekin dekhiye Maan bilkul thik hai abb, ghabrane ki toh koi baat nahi... Aur waise bhi humari Geet ne kuch jaan bujhkar thodi kiya, haina?" she sweetly asked a shivering Geet who was'nt ready to face them.. she just stayed in Daadi's arms, as her sobs subsided down a bit.


Once ensured that Maan was all fine, Rano left the hall along with him to prepare for lunch while Geet sat there all gloomy with Daadi, her eyes puffed up due to crying and face fell. The whole day Rano kept ignoring her making her more and more sad.

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It was time of night in KM, everyone retiring to their respective rooms but one person among all of them was there roaming in corriders of the huge palace, and then she stopped at one specific room. Since the door of the room was open she stood at the doorstep peeping inside. Inside she saw her maa sitting beside Maan who was layed on his comfy bed ready to sleep while Rano made him sleep by slowly patting his head tellling him a bedtime story while Maan cutely kept asking asking her several questions to which Rano asnwered all patiently.


Suddenly Rano sensed Maan's eyes fixed at the door and turning she found her Geet there standing all nervous and scared holding her ever so dear covering sheet in her tiny hands. She called her inside and questioned her why she was out of room this late, to which Geet quietly replied that "me..koo akel.e darr lagg lah.a th.aa" hearing to it Rano once felt bad for her as she knew that leaving Geet alone in this new place was'nt right but now Geet too need to be mentally prepared that Rano have other priorities now which is Maan as he is her responsibility now. But she also have to maintain her stern and strict composure to make Geet realize that her mastis are too limited and that they should never get overboard like today.


Thus she gave just one nod to her and asked to sit there quietly till she's done with Maan, and Geet settled there at the far corner of the huge bed cuddling her lovely sheet closer to her chest and kept gaping at the lavish room and mainly the toys and games, which she can only desire of. Rano continued with her story telling and Maan unknown to both kept glancing at Geet in between. The way she kissed and cacooned that shabby piece of cloth, it was proved that she had some kind of special bond with it and surely she had. Geet was busy in her own little world where only she and her sheet named Mushy existed. She kept talking to it "Mushy, apko bhi ninni ayi? Meko bhi, hum chote chote baccho ki toh koi kadar hi nee, Abhi bash tholi der aul, then hum ninni kalenge, thik hai" She kept convincing her Mushy, as if it was listening to her.


After few minutes Maan observed that Geet's head kept falling due to tiredness as she was feeling too sleepy, but she was trying really hard to stay awake. Maan knew that Rano wont leave untill he's slept and thus he faked sleep to Rano so that they both could leave and Geet could sleep peacefully. Dont know why but he secretly started caring for this sleeping beauty inspite of her tortures on him.

Thus he said to Rano that "Maa. abb mujhe nind ayi," he said rubbing his eye. "Accha, toh phir app so jayiye, hum yahi baithte hai tabb tak" she said closing hs eyes wiith her palm but maan convinced her saying "Maa, app jao mei so jaungaa" and thus he succeded in sending her out along with a sleeping Geet.
Rano after pecking Maan's forehead picked up a sleeping Geet and retired towards their room.


Rano entered their room and switching on the lights she found that the dinner plate she sent for Geet was still untouched. Thus she decided to wake her up and feed dinner as Geet never ate her food unless her maa feeded her with her own hands, and thats why as Nakul sent her the dinner she waited for her Maa to come but as she did'nt geet had to go search for her.

As rano called out to her she frowned cutely while rubbing her droopy eyes with the back of her small palm, and as her eyes met her Maa's she immediately sat up at once. She still feared her anger.

"Geet, yeh kya... khana nahi khaya apne?" Rano asked her... "Wo.. wo app nahi they" Geet said in low tone. "hmm, abb toh hai hum, abhi dono khana khayenge" Rano said while putting her down on the bed. Geet kept gaping at her maa wondering if she was still angry with her. As Rano brought some food for her Geet's question made her halt, "Aap humshey guccha ni?" geet asked cutely with a teary voice, Rano's heart contracted this time with her broken voice and she just took her in her motherly embrace. "Sssh, geet maa appsey ghussa nahi baccha, rona band kijiye app" Rano tried calming her but Geet kept sobbing and said while holding her ears "wo, wo Geet sholly Maan ko tang kalne ke liye, pakka ajj ke kabhi hum kishiko tang ni kalenge, Plomish" she ended while pinching her throat cutely "Hume pata hai humari pari ne kuch jaan bujh ke nahi kiya, parr Maan ke saath jo apne kia wo bhi toh galat tha na?" Rano said to which Geet nodded and again said "Sholly maa, pakka hum aisha kabhi ni kalenge" "Geet, maafi app humse nahi, Maan sey mangiye.
Pata hai na unki haalat kitni kharab ho gayi thi? Babaji na kare, agar unhe kuch ho jata toh?"
but Geet shooked her head strongly at it. "Nahi maa, hum pakka kall Maan shey maafi mangengey aul unko mana bhi lenge" "Hume pura bharosa hai k humari Pari Maan ko zaroor mana lengi, accha abb baate band, khana khayiye" and then both mother daughter finished their dinner, feeding each other lovingly, and slept hugging and cuddling in their new home.

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The next morning was a verry special one for the entire KM, instead of chirping of birds, they all welcomed the new morning with their little baby doll Geet's voice who was jumping from one part of mansion to other. Since she was a early bird, she was all fresh and ready in morning 7 only. She was running here and there in the corrider when she reached outside Maan's room... her Maa was there inside trying to make him awake while he slept onto his tummy all covered in his cozy quilt. She peeped a little inside the room and something wierd caught her attention at which her eyes widened in horror and next moment she dashed in his room looking at the creature with anger...

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PRECAP-

Geet manaofy Maan
&
Fluffy returns 😎

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phew* finally updated part 6... tried making it as good and readable as possible. Pweasee tell me kaisaa hai. bacche ko niraash na karnaa dosto 😭

And am really sorry that the precap isnt in this update, sho showwiee couldnt put that part in it. 😭

But Thanx to all those lovely readers who commented and liked, Ummaahhh love u all. 😃 Abhi sabb batao kaisaa tha update 😃


PS- for PMs add 16anyaa.gurti to ur buddy list 😃


Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally i m here wid comment...

yaar it's all cauz of stupid bijli...
uska mann dol jata tha n wo nikal leti thi...

4 tyms...i mean 4 darn tyms...gosh i was so fed up wid dis nautnki k... i quit writting comment...but aaj phir yaad aa gaya k i didn't commnt so me here wid my commnt...

gosh kitna bakwaas krti hun...

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ok now about update

geet is really sweet...
she had honestly accepted her mistake...
such a cute n brave girl...

dis girl had done sumthing which was least xpected...
a tight hugg to my sweet geetu...



pta hai i jst luv'd mushy part...
such a cute...


maan's care n unsaid love for geet was jst wooow...

bechara mute rehkr b kitna cute hai...
truly luved both...


rano maa's n cutie baby's convo was awesum...

ummm...mumma jada hi naraz ho gai cutie se...


d whole update was awesum...
luv'd it...
n mushy tooo...!!!

fluffy is back...

me waiting...!!!!













Edited by deepali1022 - 12 years ago

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