Innocence #2 REMOVED NOTE PG72

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

have faith on u dat u ll never disappoint us...

magar twist hi aisa hai k humarein dil hi toot gaye...wohi toh humein lage k agar maan geet ko sindoor aur mangalsutra pehnane k time pe touch kiya usse pata nehi chala k she's not his geet...his love...his life...phir maan kaisa pyar karta hai geet se...aur sindoor k time toh kamse kam sakal dekha hoga uski...

hum ko ina bura lage k i was thinking abt dis d whole day n i thought of not reading dis story again...i was really heartbroken...thinking wht geet ll do nw...bad things were coming in mind...was sooo upset...

but got back life with dis note of urs...thank u very much dear...

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 11

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

EDITED LAST PARAGRAPH OF INNOCENCE!!!

Tried my best to go to sleep, but it seems I can't, all I have in my mind is this FF, what response I've received...So till I've written the next update and posted it I wont be able to sleep. So next part is on its way soon, started typing it already.

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lena

@lenageorge

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

wah wah it was awesome.update.feeling bad for geet.but maan vl tk care of here.us nikki ko😡

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Thank U for changing it. I was not at all prepared to read PART 23. Now I am happy.

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mraj

@mraj

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

thanks for the change... Nice update.

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-eiya-

@-eiya-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

us nikki ki tho mein😡...poor geet😭...awsm di..do continue soon...

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Wow lovely update..te way geet was in shock and scared was so painful..maan heart piercing seeing his geet like tis..lovely

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Sia

@lovesia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

yeppiee yeppiiee

only 3 pharas were taken

nd at right moment everyone got to know that geet in not in her place

nikki is there

iss niki ki toh mein

but poor geet is still in fear

that she would have lost her maan

thank u to that person who opened the door on correct time

now maaneet are married legally as well as with all ritual

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Shraddha Sinari

@SHRADDHA2102

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Di lovely updte..., thx 4 dis updt... But geet is scared 4 lossing maan... hope ke maan apni bubly mishty ko jaldi vapas laye :D

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Rumana Begum

@Chahhat4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Woww...wowww...Awesomeee...update...😊 😊 😊

I loved it...finally Maaneet marriage happened...😊

Thank u for the change...😊 😊

Waiting for next update...post it soon dear...😊