OS-pyar ka ansh dec 14th!!!

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PYAR KA ANSH


Pregnancy reports?? Woh bhi geet ke room mein?? and then palak's sight fell on the name Ms. Geet handa!! GEET HANDA!! Time stood still for palak. Her baby sister is pregnant, that's the reason geet wasn't talking to her since a day as the report held the same date when geet slipped into depression. She didn't know what to do, legs got paralysed, she couldn't move for a while. Both of them lost their mother at a very tender age, it was their father brought them up all alone. Mohinder handa holds a respectful position in the society. They are one of the richest people in india. His name would be tarnished, the mere thought made palak to shiver. Giving a step to the thoughts palak looked back into the drawer to know about the person who is responsible for her sister's pregnancy, but nothing came into hand and the her cell buzzed, MESSAGE FROM GEET, palak's hand shivered to open the message. She wiped the sweat beads with hands muffling the cries with great difficulty


Di, I know you love me more than I love you. Maa ka pyar hum dono ko nahi mila, even then you loved me more like a mother rather than a sister. Isme aapne kabhi maa ka pyar mehsoos nahi kiya. And with you I realize how much a mother is necessary for every kid. Aapse yeh kehne ki waise jaroorat nahi hai phir bhi kehna hai kyunki I wont be able to tell you the reason for me leaving the house. Haan di, I am leaving the house, all I hope is please maan ke saath khush rehna!! Love you


Her heart sunk reading the message, I know what do you mean geet iska matlab hai ki you want the kid issi liye tune mujhe aur dad ko chodne ka faisla kiya how could you geet?? ek baar mujhse keh toh deti!! What I am to tell dad??


FLASHBACK:

Maan bent on his knees I LOVE YOU GEET!! In every sense I want you to be mine. Main tumse bohut pyar karonga poori jindagi waada hai kya tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho?? He asked knowing the answer of geet. Both of them love each other since their childhood just that they never confessed each other. Maan's and geet's parents have been family friends and held a great partnership on professional front. Mohinder handa always wanted maan to be his son-in-law as he was a man of little words but he is a great person, a son every father wishes to have and he knows how idol he can be as a lover or a husband. That's the reason he always wished for maan to be the husband for palak just that he could think of geet's marriage after palak's. Nobody knows what's in future today maan was proposing geet and she was on cloud nine hearing to his honest confession. How much she wished to be maan's only maan's sirf maan ki geet!!

Geet: I LOVE YOU MR. KHADOOS!! She couldnt do much than kneeling down and hugging maan like a mad person. She is madly in love with this khadoos man. For maan geet has always been an angel and for geet maan is like her babaji.


Maan: hmmm toh kitna pyar karti ho mujhse?? He said playing with the dori of her blouse squeezing the flesh of her back while geet understood what was he expecting.


Geet: toh issi liye mere liye yeh special treat tha?? Yaha in the city outskirts?? Woh bhi saaree mein and you know how difficult it is for me to manage it she complained cutely, but her voice got choked feeling maan's hand running on her spine


Maan: seriously misti I want to know are you ready for this?? I mean you know what I want to do right now agar tum chahti ho jab tak hum apne baare mein sabke saamne nahi kehte tab tak I can wait with that maan left geet and stood up, but geet did not fail to observe the desire maan had in his eyes. But for her maan is the meaning of the word WORLD. She got up and went towards the bed removing the saree pallo pulling maan holding his collar with her palm and pulling along with her on the bed... jo aapko chahiye woh mujhe bhi chahiye maan and I want to be yours in every sense. Now I want to make an honest confession jab bhi tum unn ladkiyon ke saath dikhte the college mein itna gussa aata tha ki lagta jaise something burns inside me phir lagta ki main... Geet stopped saying and closed her eyes in embarrassment which maan understood, bolo jaan tum?? ... Aap mujhe tease toh nahi karenge na?? she looked back into his eyes which were expecting some shameless answer... mujhe laga ki aise hi collar pakad ke aapko woh sab doon jisse aap kisi aur ko dekhna dur baat bhi na kare and then turned her head sideways and cheeks red, but maan held geet's chin and brought back making geet to look at him, why do you had to feel so insecure geet?? humne toh bus ek dusre se nahi kaha ki we love each other but we always did, toh phir apne aapke baare mein itna galat sochne ki kya jaroorat thi?? Love is not just a physical thing haina?? She nodded feeling guilty for having saying that top secret of hers but maan came back to his naughty naughty mode again kya woh sab mujhe abhi milega?? He asked while geet blushed, he didn't needed anything more to listen to. Geet's lips curved into a smile when maan started to undress her completely followed by his the most awaited moment was this always. He kissed her lips wildly making them to bleed relishing the copper taste while his hands pulled geet more close to him squeezing her waist and geet's hand guided his hands to her curves, he pinched her nipples and cupped her full mounts making her scream with the torture. Geet's voice died down inside her throat when maan entered her with a thrust and then his mouth replaced the hands on her breasts biting her nipples making them sore. Going back to her throat he nipped her skin with the lips, fingering her core. Both of them entered into a world of pure love making enjoying this new found relation of them the physical aspect!! This is something maan never expected to happen, his years of craving for geet ended finally and he decided she would be with him always this way. He got turned on again in the late night and the passionate lovemaking session started this time touching the souls. All maan could do was to love every inch of her body, he could even spare the feet and the palms of hers just made a carnal love to every contour of her body. This has become a part of their love everyday maan and geet sometime managed reaching to the farm house of maan and spend their time on bed for hours!! For time unknown!! For moments till eternity!!


After a month geet came to know of her dad's intention that he wants maan to marry palak and the great shocker was palak was in love with maan. How couldn't geet notice it till now?? Her sister loves maan!! god she felt like a cheapo having to come in between maan and palak. But to add to her misery geet made a grave mistake of trying to avoid maan but he was sharp enough to understand her plight. Finally geet could do much than giving into maan's passion and he knows geet was hiding something from him but what?? Both were lying under the spread naked, maan caressed her arm, kya hai jo tum mujhse kehna chahti ho geet?? please stop it for now mujhse aur nahi hota tumse main dur nahi reh sakta jaan!!! he said with a low tone, but geet was determined to tell maan what's running in her mind... papaji chahte hai ki aap di se shaadi karo maan... aur ... Woh aap. Maan's hand automatically held geet's hair kya kaha tumne?? Hamari shaadi hui ya nahi mujhse iss baat se koi fark nahi padta rahogi tum sirf meri do you even try saying lets sacrifice coz my sister loved me as a mother. Tum bhi toh apni behen se pyar karti ho?? haina?? Tumne palak se koi dushmani nahi nibhaya so stop all this


Geet: aap samajh nahi rahe hai maan main aapki nahi ban sakti please di se shaadi kar lijiye ... right after all what happened between us haina?? It is simple for you to say this for me its difficult, agar main shaadi karonga toh sirf tumse nahi toh kabhi nahi of all i am not a characterless guy geet get this!! saying this maan left back to home dressing himself up


Geet tried many times to make maan understand her stand but he was nowhere to listen. He even started being aloof from her, that made geet break her insides. Then geet started to miss her monthly cycles, she feared that she might be pregnant and the doctor she has gone to for check up was their family doctor. A blunt mistake she did was approaching her. No other option she will have to leave the house geet thought realizing her pregnancy, and then she recollected how excitedly palak said she loved maan since a long time but never had the guts to tell him and now her dream is coming true mohinder decided to talk to maan about the marriage proposal. Geet gathered all the money she had in the house and decided to leave the house for her sister.


Geet(st): agar main yaha rahi toh maan shaadi ke liye kabhi raazi nahi honge and knowing about his child which is growing inside me, he would never agree to marry di. Duniya ko agar pata chala iske baare mein toh papaji ko main bacha nahi paongi mujhe ghar chod dena chahiye


PRESENT:

Palak: pinky geet has left the house pata nahi kaha chali gayi she is pregnant ussi wajah se chali gayi tu bol sakti hai woh kaha gayi?? Did she tell you anything?? Jaldi bol palak said in one go calling pinky on the phone


Pinky: palak jaha tak mujhe pata hai geet ke baare mein maan hi jaanta hai agar geet pregnant hai toh woh maan ke alawa aur koi nahi ho sakta. I should have told you this earlier but I am sorry I just couldn't as geet locked me from saying anything


@RAILWAY STATION:

Geet sat on the bench on the platform looking at a mother feeding her child with food. She smiled caressing her stomach already dreaming about her little life inside her. Somebody sat beside geet she didn't notice who the person was but got up when the train arrived in the station to reach to her berth


Toh tum mujhe mere bache se bhi alag kar rahi ho?? and then a strong grip protectively wrapped around geet's abdomen from behind. She didn't have to turn back knowing it to be who the person is. She shivered as she knows how angry maan can be but breaking her thoughts maan picked geet into his arms and walked out of the station, geet did not protest as she knows if she had been alone she would have tried but it's the for the baby she remained silent, maan did have equal rights on the baby. He is the father now not just a lover of geet!!


AFTER 8 MONTHS,

Maan and geet held their just born baby in the hands, inviting him into their lovely world entering into the parenthood. Maan kissed the little one's tiny miny palms and feet, completing their existence. ANSH of maan and geet's love. ANSH MAAN SINGH KHURANA!!


i donno how it is but gave a trail girls happy bday to our jr. khurana!! love you all geetians. This is not a unique story but i wanted this one to be a light hearted story so that you can enjoy hope you did leave your comments yaar me waiting like a despo as it is my first attempt of OS

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Remya_Pillai thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was a lovely os...
i m missing maaneet more now..
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Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
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Congrtulations on your 1st OS dear....



Congratulations!! With Lovely Flower Basket









And Happy B'day to Jr.MSK




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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice os yaar
geet as always ready to sacrice herself for her sister
glad maan find out nd took her back
thanks for the pm
will be waiting for the updates of ur ffs especially aatishein ishq

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It was a lovely OS👏 Phew, I am glad that Maan came to the station on time and stopped Geet from going. It had a nice happy ending too. Very well written😊
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wow
amazing os
missing my jr msk n geet
lvd it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi thanks 4 da pm n fab emotional OS! Awesum end ! Wonderfully written! ⭐️
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Congratulations on your first os...
Well it was very very nice...maan and geet loved each other from childhood...but did not tell about their love to their family...
Geet's father arranged palak's marriage with maan and they did not know about it...
So geet wanted to sacrifice her love her maan for the sake of her sister...so nice...
Good that everybody got to know about the truth even before anything happened...and now maneet are a happy family with their little ansh...
Loved the os very much...

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