Is first love last love? Epillogue - Page 26

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Posted: 12 years ago
part 6
nice part...
hope Maan tells them now and gets rid of this guilt and goes on with the engagement...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thanks For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohoo maan chup karke bait ja.. geeet i hope geet doesnt overreact.. cont soon hun. nice part
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! Well written! Y did Maan do dat! Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
MAAN REFUSED TO EXCHANGE THE RING AS HE FEELS GEET LOVES DEV
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
liked a lot
sorry for the late reply, had exams
continue soon
waiting
HAPPY NEW YEAR😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan has gone mad...is this something to discuss in front of everyone? He could have just told her the truth by telling he needs to discuss somethign with her...
seriously dhakkan Maan...now Jeevika will also feel hurt and don't know what will happen next
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Posted: 12 years ago

Is first love last love?Part 7

Geet:Maan?
Maan:You yourself told me that your first love is Dev.
Everyone was shocked.Dev,Indira and Jeevika could not believe it.
Geet was embarrassed.
Dev:Maan,what nonsense are you saying?
M:I am telling the truth.Geet loves you.
Dev was shocked.
M:She would not have accepted me if you had proposed to her.
G:Maan,stop it.Don't hurt Dev.
M:No Geet.I am not hurting him,I am making him happy.Because he himself admitted that he loves you.

Geet was shocked.Dev was embarrassed.Savitri,Indira and Jeevika were extremely shocked.They were numb.
M:Yes Geet.That day when i told him about the proposal he told me that you are his first love.
Geet could not digest it.
M:I became so selfish that i hid the truth from you both.I did'nt even want to imagine losing Geet.So I hid the truth.But now i understand the mistake i did was not just a mistake,but a sin.I can't cheat you guys.Because of my selfishness you both should not get separated.Sorry...please forgive me.
D:Maan,what nonsense are you saying?
M:Dev,you are Geet's first love.
Maan looked at Geet:And Dev's first love is you Geet.First love is the best.I know that.Because you are my first love Geet...my last love also...
Geet went towards Dev.She stared at him.
Her teary eyes looked sharp.Dev felt that he is melting in her hot eyes which is full of red fire.

G:Dev...is it true that I am your first love?

Dev shivered.He was nervous.
Geet raised her voice:I am your best friend.Right?Then at least now please tell the truth.
Finally Dev managed to get courage to tell her the truth:Yes.What Maan said is true.

Geet could not believe that she is hearing this from her best friend Dev.She did not know how to react.She was going mad.
G:Dev...I can't...I can't believe it.

D:I am sorry Geet.I was scared if you hate me if tell you that you are more than a friend for me.But please don't hate me.I can't live without your friendship.I don't want to lose my best friend.
G:Dev,I have only one thing to ask you.Do you love me now also?

Dev said blindly:No.I love only Jeevika.She is my only love.My last love.
Maan was shocked.
Savitri and Jeevika were relieved.
D:I am thankful to Geet.If She was not my best friend I would not have realized my love for Jeevika.It was Geet who made me realize that I am in love with Jeevika.It's only because of her that i got the courage to propose to Jeevika.

Dev looked at Geet:Geet,you are my best friend.No one can take over that position in my heart.
Geet became emotional.

Geet stared at Maan:Did you hear this Maan?I am Dev's first love,but not last love.And Dev is my first love.But not my last love.You are my only love Maan.My one and only love...my last love.
Geet's tears were flowing down while talking.

Maan became emotional:Geet!
G:I am your first and last love.I know that.Jeevika's first and last love is Dev.But for everyone first love may not be the last love Maan.For me and Dev first love was not the best.Our second love is our best.Did you get that Maan?

M:Geet!
Maan could not control himself anymore and embraced her.Both of them cried.
All others felt emotional watching it.
A waiter was serving juice.His hand shook and juice fell on Dev's shirt.
He:Sorry sir.
D:It's ok.
He looked for Jeevika,but he did'nt see her around.
D:Jeevika?
Dev's mother Radhika:Your shirt is spoiled.Today is your engagement.So go and change your shirt.
Dev wore another shirt and came.He was restless and he could'nt find Jeevika anywhere.
He peeped into a room.He saw Jeevika there.She looked upset.He did'nt know how to face her,but he had to take the initiative to break the ice.
D:I know that you are upset about what happened now.I am sorry Jeevika.I never intended to hurt you.I hid everything from you thinking that it will hurt you.
She kept silent.
D:Are you still cut up with me?Please Jeevika...don't be so silent.Please talk to me.
She did'nt say anything.
D:Jeevika...i love you.I can't live without you.


Jeevika suppressed her pain.
D:I promise you that i will never repeat this again.I will shower you with happiness.


Won't you forgive me?
She looked at his face.
J:No need of apologizing Devji.You have not done any mistake.I just became emotional hearing from you that you love me a lot.
Dev became emotional:You talked to me.This is more than enough for me.












When you did'nt talk to me I became motionless.It was a terrible feeling.


J:My heart beat will get stopped and I won't be able to breathe if I don't talk to you Devji.
They both smiled at each other.

Maan-Geet and Dev-Jeevika reached the platform for ring exchange.
G:Maan...today is Dev and Jeevika's engagement too.
Maan was surprised.
Both the couples exchanged rings.


Maan removed his coat.
Geet giggled:Feeling hot?
M:Ya.Now I am relieved.
G:You can't changec Maan.
He was embarrassed.

Maan and Geet went to a lonely area of the house.Maan wrapped his hands around Geet's waist and looked at her deeply.She was shy.
G:Maan...you...
M:Now we are officially engaged.No barrier.Nobody will question me.
She blushed.
Slowly she raised her eye brows and looked at his eyes which were glowing due to his love for her.
They both got attracted to each other sparkling romantic eyes.Their eyes spoke in the language of love.
Mahi...mahi...
He held her hand which made her blush again.They walked together holding their hands with a smile.
She lost her grip and her hands fell on his shirt.But she was not able to catch his shirt quickly and so she was about to fall down.But he caught her hand very fast.
M:You won't fall down anymore when I am with you.
She smiled.They both were lost in each other for a few moments.
Then she giggled.
M:What happened?
G:As usual now also you did'nt understand my trick.I was pretending to fall down,so that you will catch me and bring me closer to you.
He smiled:Naughty girl,i like it.
She smiled.



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Posted: 12 years ago
maan spill the beans, but geet manage maturely
hope everything goes smoothly
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally all MU is over
there is no secret nd guilt
awesome update

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