Is first love last love? Epillogue - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh God !! I'm reading 1st chapter now !! It was a nice start !!

Let me read others too !😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update, happy to see dev got jivika.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loo G !! Why Dev did this? 😆

*Off to read part3*
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww !! Nice Match for Dev !!

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Dev loves Geet! Maan lies to Geet abt wat Dev sed! Dev meets Jeevika! well written! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, nice part
loved it
so maan know about dev and geet loves but never confessed
but kya maan iye accept kar payega
kya hoga maan ka reaction
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Is first love last love? Part 4
I thank Ratna for this beautiful banner.

Indira showed the photographs of some boys.
I:Who is the best guy?
Geet got irritated:Dadima...why can't you allow me to live peacefully?
I:Geet...are you planning to remain single till the end?
G:No.
I:Then?
G:I will marry someone i love.
I:Then tell me whom do you love?
G:Me in love?Dadima...what are you saying?
I:You have been rejecting all proposals.So it' sure that you love someone.Then tell me who?
Geet was nervous.
I:Tell Geet.
Geet shivered:Maan.
Indira was surprised:Maan?Then why did'nt you tell me before?He is a nice guy.Very helpful.
Geet was happy.She hugged her:You are so sweet Dadima.

Geet rushed to Maan.
G:Maan...there is a happy news.Dadima gave us consent for our marriage.
Maan was excited:Really?
G:Yes.
M:How did you get the guts to present the issue before her?
G:What do you think of me?I am very smart and courageous.Not like you who hides facts.
Maan's heart was pricked.
He thought:Geet is right.I am not courageous.That's why I am hiding a big truth from her.
Geet was walking and talking:Now we are free and can roam around like love birds.
Suddenly her leg got slipped and was about to fall down.
Suddenly Maan held her.They shared a sweet eye lock.
Mahi...mahi...
They broke the eye lock.Geet tried to walk.But her leg pained.
M:What happened Geet?
G:I think it's sprain.
M:Then you don't walk.Take rest for some time on my sofa.
G:But how will I walk to the sofa?
He smiled.He carried her in his arms.
Again their eyes got stuck up to each other's.

He placed her on the sofa.
G:Maan...you sit here.
M:There is no space.
G:You sit here.I will lie on your lap.
They both smiled.
He sat on the sofa and Geet lay on his lap.
They both kept looking at each other.They never knew that 2 hours had passed.
Suddenly Geet saw the clock.
G:My God!It's late.I have to go now.
She stood up fast.
G:I don't feel like going away from you Maan.But I have to go now.Bye.
Still Maan craved for her.
Geet walked fast surprising Maan.
M:Your leg is ok now?
Geet turned back and smiled at her.
G:My leg did'nt have any problem.I just pretended to have pain,so that i can spend some intimate moments with you.
They both smiled.

Dev was not able to forget Jeevika.But he was confused.He rang up Geet and told her everything.
G:Wow!
D:What wow?
G:You fool.You are in love with Jeevika.
Dev smiled:Geet...are you sure?
G:Ofcourse.Now go and confess your love to her.
He smiled.
He went to the temple.He did'nt find Jeevika there.So he waited outside with his bag which had musical instrument.As he expected Jeevika landed up there.
She was surprised:Devji!
J:Do you come here regularly?
D:No.But today i came here purposefully.
J:Why?
D:To see you?
She was confused.
D:I realized that I am in love with you.
Jeevika was shocked:What?No...
D:Why?You think I am a celebrity who flirts with women?
J:No.I know that you are not that kind of a person.
D:Then what's the problem?
J:You will get a better girl.I don't deserve you.I am an ordinary middle class girl.

Jeevika started walking away without even entering the temple.
D:Jeevika!Can you deny that you have not loved me even for a second?
She did'nt know what to say.She became very emotional.

He walked towards her:First time when i saw your eyes itself I felt that your eyes were expressing something.Was that not love?
She did'nt look at his face.Tear drops decorated her eyes like pearls.
D:When I saw you on the first day itself in your autograph book i wrote unknowingly 'Your Dev'.I did'nt know why.But now i understand that it was God who made me write so.Because I was destined to be yours.I am your Dev.
She looked at him unbelievingly.
D:Can you look at my eyes and say that you don't love me?
J:You asked me if i have ever loved you even for a second.Right?I fell in love with you since I saw your first stage show.Then onwards i have been loving you every single second.
He held her hand.They both became very emotional.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
geet confessed to her dadi abt her love for maan
maaneet romance
maan feeling guilty
dev proposing jeevika
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet confessed her feeling for maanu to daddi
lv maaneet moments
bt my maanu is guilty hate this chodo😭
waiting 4 next part
Edited by tiakashyap - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
liked a lot
continue soon
waiting for more
waiting

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