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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful story...i loved the sequence of the party - quite different from the original story. the dhaba scene was also well done showing Maan as a sensitive and down to earth guy if he visited these places during his college days...

there are hints about Geet's past and if this is the case, I feel very sad for her. this is another very common problem in rural areas. being a young widow is such a curse !
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one...
Appreciation scene was nice...
Raining scene has penned down amazingly with lots of emotions
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Happy New Year

part 12
awesome part...
so sweet...
this chudail Sasha...
she should be demoted...
poor Geet...
but their moments together were so nice...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow what a part dear

ye sasha to such mn maan k haathon mary gi pakka

oye hoye maan babu apko to pyaar ho gya hai socho mat zyada

i think geet's past is more painful then i think

poor girl suffer so much

please cont soon

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear...haayee how maan tried to comfort her by hugging...lovely dear...and the nightmare was so saddy...and maan declaring that he have to be far away from her...awesome update dear do continue soon...👏🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
ok this is a shocking update i would say
loved the way maan was trying to help geet as much as he could
argh this sasha she seriously needs a reality check as she thinks herself to be some big shot while all are petty small people in front of her

loved the way geet was trying to say sorry n thank u to maan

the rain sequence part was very beautifully written
loved how geet described the small happiness we feel bcoz of rain n the way maan tried to comfort geet n take away her pain

glimpse of geet's past n that was rather shocking i would say
geet is married n her husband is no more i think bcoz that sentence told chote bete ko kha gayi n teji is her BIL i guess who has used geet to satisfy himself n broke her to no extends

maan's decision to stay away from geet waiting to see if he is successful in keeping it or not
n waiting for more of geet's past
Edited by hinal_maaneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome, amazing, brilliant part
loved it
maan is really drown in geet's innocence , beauty
the way he is praising her work, and acknowledge her talent , work
well it's natural
uff maan blown away by simple yet beautiful pure divine geet with white salwar suit
but how can a cruel woman like sasha will understand it
she is so much J and dreaming or day dreaming about maan
huh
sasha is real evil first she didn't help geet then taunt her
poor geet
but she is doing and adjusting with all odds bravely cause of KC and maan
behene de mujhe behende well the lyrics it self describe the passion flowing and how much it'll making maan helpless in front geet and her innocence
geet is feeling embarrassed over the situation and try to say sorry but maan make her feel normal and calm and relax, both had dine in another place
loved thought of geet over rain
so touchy and beautiful
but her tears between the rain drops make maan alerted ..
geet find solace , peace in maan's arms
both find peace and lost in each other
but soon geet calm down and gained the conscious and realized the moments and left from there
dadi ma found maan wet and find he is changing
here geet is again visiting those horrible phase through her night mare
guess there is terrible in her past but she fights against all odds
maan want to stay away from geet
but really is it possible
nope
love is strong emotions and it only can make u drown in love more, how much u want to run and deny that much u will fall
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
few lines from maan point of view

her smile as bright as the sun
never fails to make my day
every time
i lose my self,when i look in her way
world seems to vanish, as i look in her way
need to stop my self,before i start move towards her way


i can't stand to see her down
her tears destroy me from in
i do my best to make her smile
and remove every reason from earth
which can try to make her fail


to see her happy,is all i want
nothing more
and nothing less
but still i can't have her
and allow to her to change me

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb one, waiting to know geet's past and maan falling for geet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it the part
maan is so sweet towards geet

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