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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

finally caught up to it
sure has come long way this story

thank you so very much for all the comments... it really means a lot...
i had started this long time ago but in the mid lost the whole concept.. so you see it was really a mess.. i just dint want to stop it so i continued to write it... so there would be difference in between... the first set and the second one..
anyway i like to think i have the story in control now...
the next update will be up on Wednesday or Thursday.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Teaser:

Geet gulped as she looked at Maya. The woman was really beautiful. Her striking blue eyes and that flawless skin made Geet burn in jealousy.

Geet.. she heard Maan call her and she looked at him.

What the hell are you doing here? He glared at her.

Wo me.. Geet stammered as she dint know what to tell. When Pinky told that Maya was coming to Shimla branch Geet just came here without thinking of anything.

I'm waiting Maan said still glaring daggers at her.

Wo Maan... Geet again stammered making Maan lose his patience

How could you be so irresponsible? I left Dadi with you so that I can work in peace but I guess it was my mistake. You are so immature Geet and knowing this I should have never given this responsibility to you. He snapped at her making Geet's eyes sting with tears

Oh great now you are crying?? Pehle galthi karo bath me start crying all will get well no? He mocked her

Geet furiously wiped the tears from her eyes. She was not angry that Maan yelled at her. She was hurt that he yelled at her in front of someone else. She looked disappointedly at Maan and then turned and glared at Maya as she left his cabin as fast as she could.

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I love you Riddhima.. Armaan whispered into her ears as he gently swung her to the music.

I am the only one who could love you like this he continued as he gently kissed her ear lobe making her shudder. She felt disgusted by her body. How could it betray her like this?

Tell me love, do you love me? He asked her in a husky voice as he gently and sensuously licked her ear lobe making her heard beat increase.

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That is all. Update on Wednesday or Thursday for sure.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply brilliant
loved it

Thank you😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really maan
First you lied to her that you are her hubby
Now this
Damn this Maya
Amy dude be careful she is pregnant

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

Really maan

First you lied to her that you are her hubby
Now this
Damn this Maya
Amy dude be careful she is pregnant

yaar😆
naughty thoughts...😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...arghh this maan ...how can he insult geet in front of maya...
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Posted: 11 years ago
sup0erb teaser
can't wait for the update
thabks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
teaser
nice...
stupid Maan...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 19 - lovely part...liked adi saving geet from maan besides he was his boss and did not care about his job...maan started falling for geet...oh...so maya is coming bet maaneet...
hate this armaan ...trapping poor ridzy
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you yaar

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