MAANEET FF - INCOHERENT FLAMES Part18 pg61

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rashi_jain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: vanshi_maaneet
Nice prologue...Intersting...CS kab milega...
n think its gonna be saddy saddy ff..

Dear dnt worry...its not gonna b dat saddy ff...vil try to keep d fun element alive in it
CS not required as d characters r well explained in d parts like in part 2 it was all abt adi n maan relationship n their CS😊

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rashi_jain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: preethia
loved the update
can u put the pg no of the update in the title line along with date of update

thanx dear😊
plz guide me n give suggestions like this in future also😃

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rashi_jain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39
The past is interesting saying that he started fm scratch and reached d highest.

But today his life is missing fm his life.

Loved d update.Thanx for d PM.

As of now there is not much interesting in present...vil add those parts where ever necessary😊
first u need to know past else u'll feel d present is messed up

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rashi_jain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Jass.KN
Smooth flow...rite language u justified to put emotions into words... suspicious start as u told me about concept looking forward to it.

One thing to add ...put index on first page otherwise it also gonna be hard for u also to search the chapters in thread as u proceed...happy birthday to u also

Waiting for more

Sonia 😃

thanx for d suggestion dear n thanx a lottt to help me put pics in d update😊

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Sonia KN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

loved to read as previous part u r really born writer even if its ur first attempt

waiting

lov

Sonia😃

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vrinda22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

i love maan adi friendship onscreen n offscreen also..they r gud friends..

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nehakapoor7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

wow.. superb FF yaar

nice start... Maan is missing his Angel badly.. hope she is Geet only

add me in ur pm list..

do cont. soon

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Ash1991

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

adi is a true friend...

loved the update...

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CrazyMaaneetFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Its really vry interesting n also seems ti b diffrnt.

Plz conti soon.

Hav snt u buddy request.plz accept it.

Sry Like tab doesnt work frm mobile.

Also can u plz highlight page links of updates in Index so dat it will b easy to connect d link.