*MY INNOCENT SURRENDER pt 11 pg 118 28/2/2013

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radhika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

nice part...

maan still in love with sam... and where is she??????

and hw come maan and geet got married at first place... waiting continue soon

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: PujaShree
awsmmm update Devrji...:):)
But why Maan didnt wear that clothes which Geet select for him...Aakhir aisa kya ho gya inke relation mein jo maan aisa behave karing...me very curious to knw bout their whole truth...
Mwaahhh for the update jaani..:*:*

muuuhhh bhabhs and dont worr he will b fine soon

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: abinash079
<div></div> hello richu😛😃

o meri chat queen waha aaja fb pe yaha pura time nahi hoti... :)

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: radhika.winx
nice part...
maan still in love with sam... and where is she??????

and hw come maan and geet got married at first place... waiting continue soon

u wil get to know evrythng as story unfolds

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

May ur world be filled with warmth and good chear. This Joly season,and throughout the year.
Wish ur Christmas be filled with Peace and Love... <3 :)
MERRY X-MAS

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sumaiyariya
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">hmmm maan neglect kia geet ki chioce ko..maan abb tak sam ko like karta hay.😒.hmmm geet kissi aur ko pasad karta ta tha😲.hmmm wating to see whAT happen between maaneet that make maan aisa.😔</font>

hmmm

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

<font size="5">PART - 4</font>

MAAN get ready came down 4 b.fast. Wen he is gona sit on hs chair Pratham scanned him from tip 2 toe.

'wat happned?y r u scanning me like dis?',Maan enquired.

'nothing spl,just wanna ask r u selcting ur clothes at ur own?',Pratham sw hm wid narrowed eyes.

'yes but y u asking bhaiya?',Maan sw at his clothes.

'wo pata chal raha tha,bas isliye.Geet bachhe cm out and hv a luk of ur bestfrnd cum hubby',he said wid laughing silently.

Meanwhile Geet came out of kitchen and stare d combi he wore.she 2 laugh frst,bt den she realize dat he dont wore d clothes she choose 4 him. She wants 2 talk 2 him,but not now. Gauri odred all 2 ate b.fast. She serve all. Both maan nd Geet sit silently without uttering a word or changing a glance. Pratham broke d silence atlast.

'Maan abi muh dikhai ki rasam hone wali hai',Pratham told Maan wat he hav 2 do now but b4 he cmpletes Maan cut him in btwn.

'so wat 2 do?its 4 her den wats my role in dat?',Maan voice contain frustration.

Pratham dont like d way he talk but he handle it wisely and dont react.'relax i m just telling dat u took her 2 hospital. I consernd d doc nd they allowet her 2 meet him.isi bahane pagphere ki rasam bhi ho jayegi.'

'nai bhaiya aap tension mat lo i'll go myself',Geet kno he is upset so she dont want 2 disturb him more. She is his best frnd and bing an expert she can able 2 hear his silence. Maan may b realize later about himslf bt Geet knows what he want and when.

'geet its a ritual so be boyed wat we said 2 u both.i kno u r frnds nd care 4 each other,but now ur realation take a new face so followed d rules of dat also.',Gauri intrpts and told her decision in commanding voice.

Gauri made all mouth shut. After dat no1 make any argue. Parth finish frst nd kissed his parents frst den Geet,his girlfrnd,as he consider her,and in last Maan b4 he left 4 a school. Meanwhile women start coming 2 sw d face of newly wed bride. All come,sw her angelic ace nd gave her blessing and gifts. Maan ws in his room dat momnt,helding his frustration inside him. Dis ceremony tuk almost 3 hours,but he cant raise his voice as his bhaiya bhabhi alredy orderd him 2 follow d rituals. Wen all ladies left aftr festing and gossiping,Geet cm inside d room. Maan ws stud up nd cm closer 2 her.

'dont u know we have 2 reach hospital?den y u take so much time?',he showerd his anger on her at once.

Geet want 2 snap bak but she cntrolled,realizing y he react like dis. She know him frm childhood. He always react like dis wen situation not work 2 his accord.'Maan main apni marzi se nai baithi thi.bhabhi ne bola tha baithne k liye.'

'sb to unhi k kehne se ho raha hai right?now dont waste my time and get ready fast',he fumed and bang d door behind,b4 he leave d room.

Maan's behaviour pierced her little heart and made her feel guilty more. She cried silently but nvr drop her tears. Geet changed and wear simple embroidered pink colour suit. She come out and went wid him. Maan sat on drivers seat and she sit on next 2 him. She smiles heavy heartedly 2 show Gauri dat evrythng is alright. Maan drove at very high speed it seems as he spit out his anger and frustration. Geet scared from high speed but she dont voice her thots. She just glancing him wid her wet eyes nd turned her face 2 anothr side. She know Maan is aware of her evry fear still he dosnt care den dere is no need 2 show her tears 2 hm. Maan stop wid a jerk due 2 whch Geet's head met wid a dashboard of car. He gave d gift of his marriage in form of wound on her 4headGeet moaned in pain and hold her 4head in her small hands. Her moaned grab his attention and he immediately turned 2 her. Maan hold her hand nd scann her wound carefully. At dis momnt he 4got evrythng except her pain.'geet how many times i told u wear seat bbelt properly but u cant hear me.now let me check what happnd.'Maan rubbed his rough palm on her wound and gave his warmth 2 her.den he blew hs warm breath 2 sooth her pain.'feeling better?',he askd softly.

'kya fark padta hai Maan.seatbelt lgna to main hmesha bhulti hu,lekin aajtak chot nahi lagi,coz u r always wid me.'her eyes wet and voice reflects her pain.d pain her heart feel not d pain occured due 2 dis smach.'anyways u go now.coz papa se milne k baad main daima se milne HM jaungi.'She tuned her bak 2 hm and walked off frm dere.

Edited by richa_kapoor - 12 years ago

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Mitu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

love the update

u made me cry with geet pain

maan is a realy jerk

for god sake maan

u r her best friend

and here u r hurting her

and last dialogue made my heart cry more

khete to humesha the but aaj tak chot nahi lagi

love it continue soon

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-gurtimaniac-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

awesome update dear

so maan is in a very frustrated wid all the rituals which he had been forced to do by his bro n bhabhi

Geet know tht maan is not in a gud mood

Geet is very hurt by maan behavior when he is driving his car roughly

Maan u thinking of ur self only u were her best frnds once upon a time... how could u not understand her fear of speed 😡

Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago