OS-FRIENDSHIP,MISUNDERSTANDING AND LOVE

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Posted: 12 years ago
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HII GUYS
I M BACK WID NEW OS

Maan nd geet study in the same college nd dey are bestest friends...always stays wid each other in bad nd happy times...dey share true friendship wid each other...always stays together...nd even dere family are also good friends nd dey want to turn deir friendship into love...
Geet always love maan from very long time..but she didnt tell him nd not even want to tell him as she fears rejection...
But maan always consider her as a friend...one day a new girl nd boy...the girl name deepali is totally cheap..she always uses boys for her benefit...when she sees maan her next target is maan..nd takes all the information abt maan..she cumes to know dat maan belongs to rich family nd close friend or best friend of geet..her 1st step is to win deir trust...nd den to break maaneet friendship...
On the other side the new guy named ARJUN(assume KARAN TACKER)gets totally lattoo over geet by seeing her angelic face...nd from dat day arjun uses to flirt wid geet but healthy flirting as he respects every girl nd women feelings...soon dey become good friends...bt she never let him to come inbetween maaneetfriendship...sometimes maan used to get JEALOUS...bt used to ignore dis feeling...
On the other side deeps is able to win trust of maaneet...nd all 4 used to enjoy deir time..by roaming here nd dere...nd deeps is able to win maan trust the more...nd she always uses to say see maan arjun nd geet friendship..dey r becumg soo close to each other..i think dey like each other or say love each other...nd lastly she says dat due to dis geet is even ignoring u...maan becomes very hurt nd den angry on arjun nd geet...

From dat day he used to spend more time wid deeps..nd used to ignore geet..nd even used to taunt geet...
maan family is also noticing his changed behaviour towards geet...nd seeing how much he is hurting her...so both family decided to get dem married...

Dya by day maan nd deeps r cumg close...deeps is happy in her victory as she totally break maaneet friendship/...mb is totally hurted when maan said dat he dont want to continue his friendship wid such a cheap girl...who uses boys ...first he used him nd now arjun...
Arjun is also sad by seeing geet sad...as he always treated her as a sister...REASON FOR CHANGING HIS FEELINGS TOWARDS GEET
FLASHBACK
geet nd arjun becomes very good friend...dey used to study together in geet house...one day when he is going back to his house...suddenly his car collided wid tree...nd he is badly injured nd nearby people took him to the hospital...nd dey called geet from his phone as last dialled number was her only...geet went to the hospital nd take care of her...nd after discharging him she took him to her house...nd took proper care of him nd her mom tooo...from dat day he started considering her as his sister...nd always possessive towards her..nd want to keep her happy...
PRESENT
Arjun knows dat deeps did all dis...bt when he tried to tell maan he comes angry nd said to get lost from here...nd never comes in between dem...

Today is maan parents marriage anniversary..nd geet family also comes dere...whereas by seeing geet..maan becomes sad by seeing her pale face..nd her health as she becomes totally wornout..dark circle around her eyes...nd becomes more thin...maan even invited deeps...during the party maan not even talked wid geet..but see her pale face nd ignore dis...geet becomes more hurted because of his behaviour...now after the cake cutting ceremony...maaneet parents announces dat today is MAANEET engagement...deeps is shocked nd angry nd said to maan dat its geet plan...nd goes from dere...whereas maan becomes angry wid geet more...bt to keep his and her parents respect he gets engaged to geet...nd geet thinks dat atleast maan still carries for her...

Next day in the college when geet entries the college..she got tight slap from maan...nd said dat he didnt see such a cheap girl lyk her..arjun tries to interfere..bt geet said no..nd deeps said...waah waah geet first maan nd den arjun now back to maan...nd when geet tries to slap her maan comes in between nd throws her...nd she just rolls on the floor wid bad impact...her elbow grt bruised...nd her side of the lips also bleeds...all goes from dere...no one tried to help her...only arjun is dere...arjun wants to tell maan parents abt his behaviour...but geet requested him not to...from dat day geet becomes aloof from everyone...she requested her parents dat she wants to complete her grad from LONDON...her parents are shocked..but at the end dey said yes...nd she goes to london widout informing neone in the college only arjun knows...

Maan not even cares abt geet now...engagement is just a formality for him...nd by seeing his behaviour arjun becomes soo angry on him...
so he decided dat he will tell everything to maan parents/...he goes to his house nd tell dem everything...dey become soo angry on him nd feels soo bad for geet..because of deir son deir daughter is not wid them...bt arjun requested dem not to say nething to maan...
From dat day he keep a close check on deeps..nd he comes to know everything abt deeps nd her plan nd gets a full video of her doings...
On the otherside..maan parents are avoiding him nd not talking to him..he thinks dat geet is responsible for dis...nd hates her more...
Whereas in london...geet is totally heart broken...maan not even once called her...only arjun nd deir parents calls her...geet health is tota;lly getting declining as deir is no one to take care of her...
One day arjun reaches to maan house nd sees maan sitting in the drawing room whereas maan parents are sitting nd talking wid each other nd not even talking to maan...but when maan parents sees arjun dey becomes happy nd maan angry ...maan says to him to get out of his house...bt arjun said first see dis nd den he will go...
After seeing the whole video maan becomes numb nd tears r flowing from his eyes,.,,,nd he silently goes to his room..nd maan parnets thanked arjun for dis...nd arjun goes happily to his home...
Maan decided to go to london only geet will forgive him...he goes to londoon widout informing neone...nd takes every information abt geet whereabouts fromn arjun...nd he goes to geet pg..nd rings the bell...when geet opens the door geet is shocked nd happy bbut after thinking abt her past...she becomes sad...but maan becomes sad nd he hates himself by seeing geet pale face nd her health...he hugs her nd started cryiong nd said sorry for his behaviour..nd tell him everything abt deeps...nd geet becomes happy one side...but after thinking of past she becomes sad nd angry nd told him dat deir friendship is soo weak...dat some 3rd person can come nd create misunderstnading between dem...geet said to him to go away from her...
After dis maan is totally heart broken nd he realises how badly he behaved wid her...he decides dat he will stay in london..till geet not forgive him...he always use to follow geet...nd send sorry cards...nd heart shaped ballons...but geet used to ignore it...one day when geet is cumg back from college...she collided wid car...nd maan who is following her takes her to the hospital..docs informed him dat she required complete bed rest as she is very weak...maan started staying wid geet...nd takes proper care of her...slowly slowly geet heart is melting...its been 14 days dat geet is staying wid her nd she is noticing dat how much maan is repenting his deeds...nd she even saw him crying one day...soo geet decided to forgive him as she still loves him...
Its maan bday today...sooo geet baked a cake nd write I FORGIVE YOU ND I LOVE YOU...maan goes to his room nd see cake nd becomes shocked happy nd runs towards geet room nd hugs her nd started crying nd said I M SORRY ND I LOVE U TOOO...nd said its best bday gift nd kisses her cheeks..forhead..eyes nd sees towards her lips...nd geet blinks her eyes...nd maan kisses her passionately//...
After completing her course...maaneet
goes to INDIA nd thanked arjun...nd Maaneet gets married...nd become one.
END
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amita5 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Cute Love story
Loved it
please keep on writing


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Posted: 12 years ago
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i think ye dips sameera ki behen he jaha jati he MU hi karwati he ...superb os neek ...
Mituag thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I will read and comment soon
amrinderdhami thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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tooo good
lovely concept
loved d way maan realised geet's importance in his life n the truth

Mituag thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi dear cute stoty
no no love story
ye dips naa really chip girl
i m happy maan relise geet importance
and truth also
u r good writer
continoue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome dear...i read the older version of this story on RishBala... but this is lot better coz its more clear...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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its an sweet os...😊

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