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Posted: 12 years ago
it was painful update...
tumne to isse mystry bana diya re...


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mannubhardwaj

it was painful update...
tumne to isse mystry bana diya re...



That wasn't intentional and thoda mystery rehna chahiye to make it interesting.😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mayyo13


I did feel like Tweesha lied about being in the cafe. Don't know why, though. Probably because of her hesitation in telling the name of the friend.

So, I am tempted to reply to your questions. To answer your first one... yes, as you said there was so much going on inside their heads that they both were suppressing what they actually wnted to speak and were speaking what they are supposed to. If given a chance, Tweesha would have pestered Geet to open the damned door since she was worried sick about how the hell had the girl got home since she was new to Delhi. But she couldn't do that because of the walls that they build between them. She wasn't lying per se about meeting a friend it's just that she wasn't keen about discussing the uneventful meeting when there were more raging questions in her mind.


"...wondering why was life throwing her at his mercy, time and again."
I'm not sure if I'm deluding or something, but this line doesn't seem like it's for these two times that they have met and Maan saved her. One of the said two times, she wasn't even in danger! So why did she think life is throwing her at his mercy time and again?

That was a twisted thought in my mind which I just observed becomes increasing difficult to understand if you don't understand what Geet feels about her supposed to be saving. It was not the danger she thinks she was saved from. Rather the thoughts she was preoccupied with both the times when he jerked her out of it. I have edited that line however to make this clear now.
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Originally posted by: mayyo13

But then I slapped my forehead when Vicky ne mauke pe chauka maara and Geet agreed! I guess, I did underestimate his flirting skills earlier!

I can see you going to develop a love hate relationship with this Vicky. You love him with his douchiness but when his flirting goes to Geet, you would want to hit him. Isn't it?😆


Just a random question. Is Ellie Smith the same girl who still calls Vicky and bites his ears off? 😆
Bingo. She's the same.



How did Geet find out about the place Tweesha was going to? I mean, Sam called her on her phone and then she left. Was there something in her bag? If there was then the meeting was preplanned, wasn't it?

I do not know if it was explained properly but Geet heard the one sided conversation through which she figured that Tweesha was going out even before she told, so it was just that she heard the name of the lane, through that conversation...



After reading this chapter, I think I know you really love writing about such brats and their thought processes! 😆

I do. Because it is relatively easy. You see only a Brat can understand another brat. But I tell you writing about a certain "Brat" is damned difficult.



Edited by TheBrat - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
She clutched her veil at her throat

LOT OF SUSPENSE ABOUT EVERYONE'S LIFE
ANOTHER CHARACTER - MAAN LOST
AND WHAT IS THE REFERENCE TO THE VEIL AGAIN
IS IT RELEVANT TO THE STORY
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Posted: 12 years ago
So I promised myself not to take as long to comment on this one as I did on the previous ones and here I am. 😃

The title of this chapter, though a very common word, still gave me a little strange feeling. It made a picture in my head which was dipped in shades of black and grey and that made me wary of what I'll find in this chapter. But this one chapter was like opening the door to a dark room where anybody seldom stepped...

Have we ever thought what lies behind that hard cover, those mean hurting words and the angry look? It's hurt, loneliness, and a sense of self-preservation from any further hurt.

A whole new side of Maan has been brought forward for us to see, and this has made me put myself in his shoes and actually feel what he felt throughout. The loneliness he felt, the guilt which wasn't very far from the surface, the longing for the important people in his life, the reminiscence of the days shared with his younger brother... It all was so well-written Shika. To write anything about this chapter, I have to stop and think how am I going to tell you how deep it has struck in my heart.

The pang that one feels at not knowing some of the important people in their life personally, rather having only some knowledge through the pictures and videos, is too hard to describe in words. I haven't ever had to feel something like that so maybe I don't understand it's real depth and the distress it can cause a child's heart and mind. Now I wonder what happened to Rajat, Daman and Sarani? Did all three pass away before the eldest son of the Khuranas could come to the age which he could remember something of?

And who's picture was he looking at? Was it his mother's? Or was it another person we don't know about? The guilt has something to do with this person. Does he believe he failed this person in some way? With every new chapter, there're a lot of questions coming up and the web is tangling in my head. I'm desperately waiting for you to untangle it.

Geet has caught on to the essence of the missing soul of this house, she's noticed the sadness that's wrapping its arms around the place...
Yes, Geet has become an eavesdropper but that isn't intentional. Catching a man in his most vulnerable state in not she'd have intended to do, or peeking into a mother-son moment, for the matter. So I want her to believe that since it's all opening up in front of her, perhaps it's a signal for her to know that she's going to be a support in wiping away the sorrows of the place and bring about the liveliness she witnessed between the son and his mother, to the whole house.

So I've said I don't know what in this post and I don't know if it even makes any sense but all of it sums to one thing. I loved the chapter Shika! Thanks for updating! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Can I say that I am so bowled over this chapter that I couldn't keep away?

Getting back to the update. You have created an almost Darcy-ish Maan here and am totally smitten. I adore these characters that are not typical of daily life. The brusque, the quiet, introspective, tough yet vulnerable, the standoffish person that you have created. Something about becoming a protector in that moment or something within that craves to nurture rises from such creatures who would just rather you left them alone. I am glad that Geet did not intrude because the reactions to her being the eavesdropper here would have been totally different.
Do continue soon...
Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 14
awesome part...
poor Maan...
but why this distance between him and Laasya?
the part so beautiful dear...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updated OTT comment Pg 111😛
Edited by Susegad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Shikha ...finally managed to read the last few chapters so the late post...sorry for that. Each chapter truly weaves a web. Its getting more and more complicated. The only thing that is definte is that every character in this story has a secret and "everyone needs to be behind a closed door sometimes". I love the way how you begin with the end...if you know what I mean😆.Have so much to say to appreciate your style of writing but you see I am not a writer and nothing more I write will be enough...so how about a tight hug 🤗 and a standing ovation 👏??? Thanx Shikha, can't wait for more!!

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