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Tyro

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

maan wanted to confirm his doubts...lol...

continue soon...

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singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Love it...😊

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nida6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Nice part dear eagerly waiting for maaneets first meeting cont soon

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Cynthia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

OMG... Maan was dreaming abt them ... Lol..!!!

Bechara bahot insecure hai Geet ke maamle mein...

Lvd d way he was sweetly interrogating RK...!!!

Ab tumne kahaan hai toh maan leti hoon ke RK is harmless for Maaneet...

Precap : Eagerly waiting Dear..!!!

P.S : You are coming to Goa... M so happy 2 knw... Enjoy Dear..!!! n Do visit all the beaches here...!!!

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

part 3
awesome part...
this RK is a brat...
he he he...
cont soon dear...

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Mdworld

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: keerthi90
Nice update!!!!
Bechare maan itna darr gaya ki abb sapne bhi dekhne laga rk aur geet ke baare main...and indono ki chakkar main padhna bhool gaya and chaar baje padhna shuru kiya usne...omg...
The way he was asking rk..haha...bechara darr gaya tha ki rk bhi sapno main geet ko hi dekh raha hoga karke...lekin yeh rk toh kuch aur hi nikla...katrina ko dekh raha tha sapno main...haha...
Toh abhi ke liye maan ki line clear hain...
Continue soon...Waiting for next part...

Have safe trip to goa dear...

glad you liked it dear!!!!😃
thanx...

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Mdworld

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: zariya123
aww poor maan's nightmare i hope it would not come true but that was an early morning dream
waiting for nex t update as it is their 1st meet

i didn't think like that...😆
ya ...aisa kaha to jata h!!!!
so lets see what happens next!!!!😉

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Mdworld

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: crazydream
Lovely part.

Maan having dreams opps nightmare abt
RK n Geet. He has gone crazy since that
Incident.
Wants to take class of RK.
RK in dreamland. Thankgod it was Katrina
Not Geet. Maan relieved

Interrogating RK n asking abt Geet. Gud that
He is not aftr her.

Eagerly waiting for Precap.

finally everyone relieved that RK is not after her!!!😉
but you guys never know what happen????😆
anyways glad you liked it!!!!😃

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meravigiliso

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

awesome start and indeed avery different maan . continue soon

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Mdworld

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

**CREDIT FOR BANNER@--Rashu-- **

**PART 4**

maan shook his head...go get ready fast...you are getting late...
RK noded...maan was about to leave when he heard RK calling him back...
waise bhai how did you know about this??? RK asked...
wo yash...ha yash was in your college yesterday...so he told me...
maan answered without turning back and rushed downstairs!!!!!

MAAN SAW EVERYONE SETTLED ON DINING...
HE WAS ABOUT TO LEAVE WHEN DADI CALLLED...
Maan bete please have the breakfast before leaving...
he stopped and turned towards her...was about to say no ...
but having a look at her face he couldn't deny her...
he went silently and sat on the dining table...

he served himself the sandwich...when pammi came
and served him a glass of juice...
maan just stood up with immense force making the seat fall back...
he threw the glass on floor...
Dadi heard the noise and came running outside!!!
Maan whats all this???she spoke getting angry at maan's behavior...
Daadi how many times i have told you i don't want these outsiders to serve me!!!!
we have servants at home...they can serve me...
and moreover even dadi is there!!!!!
then why all this......he spoke while leaving...
beta please have your breakfast...
beta at least take your car keys you forgot them on the table....Pammi tried
but Maan left without even sparing a glance...

RK rushed down listening to all this...
he tried to go behind maan in order to stop this but pammi held his hand
and shook her head in order to stop him...
he turned towards her and spoke...
but Maa till when will you take all this...
it is wrong...it was not your faul whatever happened.....RK spoke
ebracing pammi who was now sobbing...
Sawitri came and patted her...
Beta i ask forgiveness on his behalf...he is not that bad from heart....
just not ready to give his mother's space to anyone...

nahin maa...i know maan...he s a gem by heart...
am just waiting for the day when he will call me maa.....pammi spoke...
sawitri smiled...

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Geet was waiting fopr a metro feeder from last 15 minutes...
but as usual no bus!!!!
firstly she was already late ...
and above all her mother asked her to go by bus as a punishment...
Geet used to hate travelling by bus..as by this time its actually overcrowded...
and thus no seat...poor soul then have to take a metro...
which in turn nowadays also started to get crowded...
Rano knowing the fact asked her to travel by bus as this was the only
way to make realize the importance of time...

HELL TIME!!!! geet cursed time...
this was the only thing that made her run from morning to evening!!!!!
arghhh....she was frustrated waiting for a bus...
suddenly she saw a silver bus at a distance...
she sighed in relief knowing that it was a metro feeder...
she stepped down from the bus stop as she saw the feeder approaching towards her
but a low floor bus overtook the feeder and stopped before her...
thus the feeder went ahead of the bus and stopped at a bit more distance...

geet cursed the driver under her breath and ran towards the feeder before the driver
drove it away...
Madamji...zara jaldi...conductor spoke...
aur kitna tez bhagu...am not PT Usha!!! she exclaimed getting hold of the door
and got inside the bus!!!
Finally....she sighed...she tried calming her breath because of running!!!!
she opened her bag to take out her wallet to buy the ticket...
when the driver suddenly applied brakes...
before she could balance herself...
someone stepped on her foot accidentally...

What the hell !!! she exclaimed...
watch out dude !!!! she glared at the source of that foot!!!!
she shook her foot in order of trying to sooth it...
but the person in front of her didn't utter a word but was just staring at her
without blinking his eyes

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as maan reached near his car...he noticed that he wasn't carrying his car keys!!!
Damn....he spoke hitting his car's wheel with his foot...
Ouch...he yelped in pain...as it pained...
now what..... he wondered...
obviously bus....he had travelled by bus before...
but that was long back before...
he went to the bus stand and was waiting for the bus when he saw a
metro feeder coming...he got into it...
it was about 10minutes...when he heard a girl yelling at one of the bus stand...
just then the girl entered he saw the source...
oh god...it none other than geet!!!!!
she just entered and stood besides him...

he couldn't blink his eyes...she was just standing next to him...
oh god...she was so near to him...
she busy looking inside her bag...when driver applied brakes all of a sudden...
he was about to fall...
this was basically because of inertia...according tho inertia when a moving bus...😆
oh god...not now he cursed his brain...
and thus he accidentally stepped on her in order to steady himself...
he was guilty and immediately stepped back...

just then he saw her facing him...
and oh god!!! she s talking to me....he mentally did a bhangra!!!
but couldn't comprehend what she was saying...his
whole concentation was on her face...which was red by anger...
he saw her showing her finger to him as if warning her but he didn't care...
he was lovingly looking at her...
he saw her blowing her tendril in air that came beforfe her face...
he saw her lips that were moving ...
RK was right...she was full of emtions ki dukan...
Madubala s a right name...
nahin...my mishti s bettered ...he smiled...
misthi...just sweet like her...

just then he saw her waving her hand before him!!!!!
kahan???? here i am speaking to you dude....she spoke...
wo...wo ...am ...ssorry...
wo galti se hogggaya....he stammered out of nervousness...
he looked towards knowing that she bash him up...
but was shocked to see what he actually saw next...
she broke into laughter...she started laughing like anything...
her laughter was musical to his ears...he actually liked it...

oh god...do you always speak like this...or is it my effect....she spoke muffling her laughter...
wo its always like this...he spoke scratching back of his head...
always....she asked getting surprised...
hmm...he nodded correcting his glasses...
looks like you never talked to a girl before...she enquired...
kuch aisa hi samjhlo....he answered...
hmmm....before she could talk more...
the bus stopped and everyone started leaving...
maan got off and walked towards the station...

she quickly paid the conductor and saw maan walking ahead...
she quickly rushed towards him...
waise tumne apna naam nahin batya...
wo hi...am Maan Singh Khuranna...he spoke...
and am Geet Handa she spoke forwarding her hand...
he got surprised but then gave his hand and shook it...
oh god she shook her hand with me......he was overjoyed...
waise am doing graduation ...you...she asked...trying to take her hand back...
am doing MBA from FMS....he spoke lost in the touch of her hand...

arrey...then hm to padosi...am in KMC...she gleemed...
he didn't reply was just holding her hand...
wo maan station aa gaya....she tried...
hmmm.....
wo mai jau...she asked...
hmmm...
wo mera hath...
oh...sssorry.....he spoke embarrased...
its ok yar...waise ab to i got a partner till i reach college...challo will meet you upstairs...

and here began their journey!!!

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PRECAP: abi journey baki hai...😳

#the bus part s my experience
#now i think you all are getting to know maan's character...
he s just frank with his close ones or else he gets nervous...
#pms later

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Edited by Mdworld - 12 years ago

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