Untouched Desires#5 (Thread 6 Link @ Pg 152) - Page 49

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing n emotional update

Loved the way how Geet calm Maan in cabin 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww very very beautifully written update yar.loved it a lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey finally shadi k bat ho hi gayi i m so happy kitne dino se me wait kar rahi thi un ka i m missing so much update of ur
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bravo Geet.. first time she stood for herself without Maan's help.. Amazing.. she gave answer back to Sara... Maan, he was so shocked after listening her marriage proposal..His cute nod..😳 Amazing update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just read all the three updates...

I loved the jealousy thing and their cute bet... and the last update was fab... i loved both maan and geet's pov and their reaction and answer to all the people who spoke ill about them... very well written and it was a fab update...

thanks for the regular updates and am eagerly waiting for the 60th update... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb mind blowing update..loved d way geet answered sara wat maan meant 2 her...beautifully writen part...loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Precap tune kyun socha nhi. Beautiful update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow what a update Oh really secerd of maan and angry maan and sara 😡 wanted to kill her but thanks to her because of geet propose😉 maan for marriage what Dhamaka yar to good 😃 waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Okay, So now this FF has come to at End in few parts. I'm very happy with all love you all showered on it. Love you 😊


Part 60

"Congrats Geet!!!!'' A crispy voice attract his lost mind and he came back on earth from his nowhere land. He saw, pinky was hugging Geet and she was smiling, giggling like anything. It all was new, perplexing, different what he had been feeling till now. He looked, everyone was smiling and was happy. "Congratulation Maan Sir'' Adi came near him to wish and a red hue crept on Maan cheek. Seemed, he was smiling, one last he looked Geet who, was circled by people and turned back to be disappear in cabin.

Geet saw him going back. Soon she came to know what she did and this thought, made her extremely shy. She till now, was in a spell of her emotions, her inner commotion , did everything in trance, but when she got her normal self and remembered she proposed Maan, took her half courage to face him. "How will I face him now'' shivered her body with the thought. She became Chinese doll, red, flushed and timid. With soft fist she knocked cabin door, entered. Her head was looking ground, lips were carving sweet smile and body was becoming melt, trembling, vibrating.

Maan was not facing to her, was stood near window. He could hear her meek step, she was coming nearer was caused his heartbeat loud, hear-able. He clutched his heart, making not to beat loud. " What if , she hears''. What the feel it was, unrevealed, unexplored, nameless. He waited her to speak something, to say something like she had said before, in front of all. His smile was becoming wider and hue was darker, which he could not show her. "Woh kya sochegi'' he was fearing.

Geet stopped back to him with same feeling, he had. She was fiddling her Duppatta, tried to relax herself and when he didn't speak a word and even didn't move a bit, she spoke. "Woh!! ''

Maan ears went more firm. Heart started beating in anticipation. "Maan.. '' her sweet voice dropped in his ears, he closed his eyes to calm himself. "Maan. Woh.. you didn't say anything.. '' She wanted to hear, his confession eagerly.

"What Geet!!'' Maan turned to her. She was looking more beautiful with slight pink shade all over her skin. "Is it because of me?'' he smiled, stepped to her, cupped her face, and made her to see him. She could not look him. "Look at me Geet'' he requested. She tried to but failed. Her lashes became heavier with coyness.

"Geet'' he whispered, she looked him somehow. "What you want to hear Hmm!!'' his husky voice was making her light, feather-like light.

"Woh when I said then you didn't say anything'' she managed to utter

"But I didn't hear anything Geet'' Maan , was in his teasing mode, seeing her complete blushed, flushed

She looked him instantly. "Really he didn't hear anything?'' she thought. "But he did have nodded, I saw'' .. "You are pulling my leg na'' she said innocently.

"no Geet, really I didn't hear. I was there stood lost in what you were replying to them. By the way Geet, what did you say, tell me? This time I will surely give you reply''

"Nothing'' she got irritated. Here she was dying with blush and in shy and he, didn't even listen that I proposed him. Babaji, what I do now to him'' She cribbed silently, looking up to her babaji, made different faces.

"What happened?''

"Nothing! Just leave!!'' she turned to leave.

"Geet one minute!!'' Maan stopped her, came nearer, hugged from back, keeping his chin on her shoulder, whispered in her ears "Won't you hear what I want to say hm''. His warm breath was falling on her ear, giving her goosebumps inner-ward. She nodded slightly.

"I will'' he breathed. "I will Geet, yes I will marry you. I will keep you with me, in my life , forever. I will keep you near me always. I will not let you go away ever, from me. Not even when your Babaji ask for your life , I will deny, i will fight with him. You will be always with me. Always Geet!!"

She turned back, faced him, could not control her rapid emotion, she hugged him, engulf in his embrace, not even wanted to be apart till eternity. "I love you Geet !! '' he was not stopping himself to shower his entire love on her. It was only for her. She was, the only owner of his everything. His body and his souls, his life and his death. His love and his hate. Owner of his every emotion and every breath. He was hers only hers ..

Precap: "Geet, wont you take this scholarship''

" I will Maan''

"Then why you did deny for it?''




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