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Posted: 12 years ago
this devil is tooo dangerous ... superb update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
read it in one go
maan really a devil poor geet she is so scared

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hiii dear
oh no plsss dear reconcider ur decison dear plsss don't discontinue. im wid u pls rethink
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Part – 9(Start of END)


Geet was still hugging adi, and adi was getting some type of satisfaction. They broke hug when they heard a knock on the door. Adi looked towards the door and find one of the servant their, adi asked "what??", the servant replied "sir, sir is called you and geet ma'am for breakfast". Adi nodded and looked towards geet . geet was still very scared with all this and asked "who was that beast??". Adi quickly put his hand on her mouth and asked her not to say like this and said "no geet!! He is not bad, he is just hot head person, you shouldn't say anything like this about others. Now lets go for breakfast, he is waiting for us". Geet nodded negatively "mujhe rahul aur bakiyon ki yaad arahi hain, I want to talk to them , please". Adi was totally confused as he was not knowing what to say to her, he quickly said "rano maa has said to me that geet should not talk to others, as they are bad, but if you want to talk then its ok, here is the phone". Geet quickly said "rano maa has said that, then I will not talk to them". Adi smiled and thought "oh god she is so innocent , how she will handle maan sir's anger". Adi said "chalo lets go, and talk less in front of him ok". Geet nodded and they both went down

Here maan was impatiently waiting for them , he saw both of them coming. He was obsessive person, if he like something he is obsessive for it. For now geet was his obsession and seeing geet and adi close made him burn, but he didn't want geet to fear him, he want her to enjoy like she was enjoying with her friends when he saw her first. He controlled his temper. Both adi and geet sat on chair . breakfast was brought , their was absolute silence, maan was eating his breakfast, it was all continental food. He loved continental food, adi was eating fearing maan very much and geet, she hated such food, she was eating less and playing with it more and thought "hey babaji what type of food it is, tasteless, yuck..i hate it , but adi sir said to be quite". Maan and adi was noticing her act. Maan was getting irritated, adi saw this, he quickly asked geet to eat properly, but she made a baby pout to adi, adi was know confused, as he was not knowing what to do..!! while maan was further irritated by increase in their bonding and shouted "adi, go to office and complete mr mehta's project, I want it in hour". Adi didn't want to leave her, but he feared maan so he felt. While geet was scared and made face to adi, telling him not to go. Adi went away.

Maan with little low voice said "why are you not eating damit?". Geet was scared and said "voh voh". Maan was now very irritated and stood up in anger and thrown the plate from table, cracking it. Geet was very scared, tears started to slip from her eye. She was getting more and more scared. Maan reached geet and took whole pasta in the spoon and forcefully made her eat. Geet was having problem in breathing, but maan was totally lost in his anger. He was not able to see geet fear, nervousness. The pasta was finished, geet was still chewing the food or was trying to chew the food. Maan saw tears in his eyes and left in anger. While geet bent on her knees and started to cry. He was giving her mental pressure, she had never seen such violence in her life, her rano maa kept her away from all this. Suddenly she started vomiting and finally fainted.

Maan most loyal servant nakul saw geet and quickly called ambulance and then called maan. Geet was taken to hospital. Adi also came to know about it, he quickly left office.

Three people on the way to hospital. Let see what life has stored for them.

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Raj was very angry and was beating uncle badly. Raj asked "to whom you have sold her, come on tell me??" uncle told, whatever happened that day. Raj held his collar and asked "give me his number fast". Uncle handed the number, rajveer was calling the number , but it was switched off. He asked his police men to find in whose name this number was registered. The policeman went away

Rahul came out of the locker room and sat on his seat. Thinking about it all. Rahul came beside him and asked "raj, meri geet mujhe mil gaye gi nah??". Raj said "rahul we are trying our best, let see what happen, by the way where is her mother??". Rahul said "geet never told where is her mother, she just told me once that her mother left her with them". Raj while thinking said "hmmm…you all can go to your home for now, we will call you if we find something". Rahul and other seen each other . one of them said "no sir, we will not leave until we find geet". Rahul nodded. Raj stood up and said "I know you all are very close to her, but this will lead to nothing, I promise you all if I will get any information I will tell you..now go". All left, only rahul remained behind. Raj said "rahul so and take rest". Rahul said "no sir, no please can I stay here, I will not disturbe you". Rajveer was going to say something when rahul again said "please sir". Rajveer nodded. Rajveer smiled and thought "he really loves her, she is lucky". And seen geet's photo.

Love thought rajveer, it is crazy thing. He loved her but she left him. Tear escaped from his eyes . he quickly wiped it. And started going through files…

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Next- in whose name number is registered??

What happen to geet??

What you think adi feels for geet?? Tell me.

Any one each to know rajveer story??

hope you like it

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so hurry up and after seeing replies i will update next part

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Edited by angelwords - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohh just amazing nd wowww
i love ttt now i cant wait nexttt😳
Edited by maaniqra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh my my
things are not looking good for geet
and it can only get worse from here right
haila he is scaring the hell out of her and not helping matters at all
and bechari she hasnt seen so much anger and violence
parr ab toh inka zindagi main keval yahi hai
adi feels brotherly love for geet
well he must do after all he cant think any other way right as maan is obsessively mad for her
and it would be foolish to fall in love with geet knowing that
waah rano maa ka naam aate hi she listens to everything
parr how she gonna take maan
you said she is his obsession now does it mean in the future she wont be his obsession anymore
aarey if you want her to eat at least inki pasand ka toh kuch banwate
bechara rahul naa geet ke jaaye mein kya haal bana liya hai
and i wonder who raj loved and what happened to her
who could the number be registered for
guess hall know all this soon huh
cheers for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
I dont think Adi feels for geet,it may be jst a sence of protection towards her.

And Maan,itna daraiga toh Geet ki zindgi faint hote hote hi nikal jaayegi.

Kash ki Maan ko thodi akal aaye,but then maza kaise aayega,and devil will lose his charm.

Loved d update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
my sister has huge crush on rajeev khandelwal so i just started liking him bt his story should be with his girl aamna aka kashish
i really like rahul character poor guy
maan wat did u do with geet?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet so much scared of maan n maan j of adi he he! How rude maan, forcibly fed breakfast to geet n poor geet vomited all n fainted. Hope she's alright. N nyc to see tht rajveer n rahul r tryng their best to find geet. Wondering on whose name the no. Is bt don't think it will b maan's as he's so intelligent to hv nybody suspect him. N accordng to adi feels the brotherly love for geet n vice versa. Superb! Do ud soon

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