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Posted: 12 years ago

PART-6 ( REAL DEVIL)



maan dangerously moved towards man, who was lost in his own world. the man came near maan and put his hands across maan's shoulder and said "i must say single piece of beauty and should be because it is maan singh khurana's choice" and started to laugh, he didn't notice the anger which was building in maan's eyes. the man was going to say something, when he was thrown on the ground. the man quickly stood up and said "Mr khurana don't you forget that we are signing 100 lakh contract". the man was shocked when he heard adi laughing, "SIR, 100 lakh means nothing to the maan singh khurana". man was going to say something when maan thrown him on the ground and started beating him, he kicked him in his stomach , on his face and where not, the man was begging for his death, when maan shouted "bring me hot water now".


The attendant quickly went and brought him boiling water, maan ordered " thrown the water on him". the attendant said " sir his skin will burn..". maan gave an angry glare, that was enough to stop him from speaking any other word. the boiling water was thrown on him, the man was hissing in pain. Unknown to all this , one person was very prettified and that was geet, who was crying and was not able to bear such violence, he quickly hid behind adi,adi felt very happy with the trust geet was showing on him, he assured her with his eyes, when maan again kicked him, geet was not able to bear all this and she fainted. adi shouted " geettt". maan stopped and moved towards geet, he took her in his arms and moved , but later stopped and said "never put your eyes on maan singh khurana's possesion , or you will see the worst, adi take him to hospital, but not for medication, but for pain, i want to see him begging for death, go..".


But adi didn't moved, he was worried for geet, as he knew how innocent she was!! and when she will woke up and see maan she will be prettified , some unknown feeling was taking place in adi's heart. But he couldn't say much as maan shouted"i said now, means now". Maan was not able to read adi's eyes, which was showing unknown feeling for geet, he left but his heart was there with geet, maan took get to his room and again shouted "go and call doctor now, i want them in 5 minutes or you will be gone". all ran for their life, the guard was seeing all this, the same guard to whom geet showed respect, he felt sorry for geet and prayed for her safety.

On the other side , rahul reached the dance agency , when a girl came in shouting " rahul, geet left the job". Rahul was hell shocked with the event and quickly ran to her house, he ran the bell, uncle came out and said " who is there??". rahul shouted "geet kahan hain?" . uncle shouted " tumse matlab " and closed the door. Rahul worst dream was coming true, the had a feeling that something wrong happened with geet. He ran to police station.

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Next- will police help rahul in finding geet?

what will be geet reaction, when she will wake up

hope you like it

do comment and hit like button

and yes big big comment needed

so hurry up and after seeing replies i will update next part

do tell me you are liking it or not?? plzzz

waiting for your replies...

i know it small but bear with it

Edited by angelwords - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i'm happy b'cause devil did right to that man😡😡,
but feeling bad for geet yar😭😭.
awesome mindblowing update😃
Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG first impression on geet of Maan is horrible
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Posted: 12 years ago
short n sweet
geet will be scared of maan..more
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG!!!! That ws Scary...poor Geet

she will get Zatka seeing Maan their

waiting for more...give us long update Isha plzz

continue soon...thank u for pm




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Posted: 12 years ago
Good part dear:-)
but kinda short
plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh,no nw geet will be geets reactin.Maan's vry dngrus,a real devil.I hpe he will nt scar geet mre,she is innocent.nice bt vry shrt update.waiting 4 a lng one.
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh dear lord this man is gonna scare the hell out of maan man
haila this is gonna freak her out
well duh of course she probably hasnt seen so much violence in her life so far
boy is he a devil or what
and adi left geet with the same person who scared her enough for her to faint
well what else could he do after all maan said to take that man away
waise who was that man
hope he dont come back though
and looks like rahul found out that geet is missing
but can he actually find her
even if he does would it help
am guessing not here
and what about when geet comes back to conscious state will she be able to take it seeing maan near her
so many questions and only you can answer dear
cheers for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
Maan did the right thing by punishing that moron...
Poor geet...
Adi is sweet...
Waiting for geet's reaction...
Do cont soon...

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