Pt4'Her 7 Deadly Sins' thrd3 Pg1

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tia

@Tia-AFreeBird

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#751

ahaha she committed her second sin SLOTH
i never knew sloth b koi sin hai
well me daily commit this🤣🤣
n maanu he is mysterious bt lvd him
lvd maaneet scene hayee shoo cute
lvd it

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#752

okay di i loved it

now only i browsed the meaning for sloth - it said laziness thank u di for the new word as i am in search of new words for my vocabulary

wow the whole chap was amazing especially the poem i think i should present u with a pic for those verses

so here u go and hope u like it di

waiting for next chap di

hope maan is waiting for geet😉

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

annie i would read your work be it FF or SS

since u wanted to do a different piece of writing, go ahead with whatever was your original plan

and geet all alone, just wish maan is there

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#754

why maan says all will hate him

y maan did not c back

is he in love with geet

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

Congrats for the new thread...

Would love to read whatever u write...b it a 30 part SS or a supernatural story...I love ur style which makes it unique...

Coming to updt...cutely romantic is d word...he loves her in specs...wow...dats very different n y nt he is MAAN...sloth is a sin...I never knew...readers will come to knw abt new sins...

She is left alone...guess maan will b der...lets c...pls updt soon