Want to be loved part 13 p 115 - Page 55

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vrinda22 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
geet stil living in maans memories..
he finally tried 2 find the truth
geet exposed sams truth to him
when he came back to her saying ilu also she thinks as pity
very emotional part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
as i said before not gonna comment 4 u
bt only 4 my MAANU JAANU
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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan here my comment
bt only 4 u
dont share with anyone
nhi toh u know how ur tia is
broom yaad haina😆😆😉😉

me feeling sad 4 geet
how can my maanu b so stupid
uff cant he do this before mean geeting info about her bt na
uff bt now geet too much hrt bt still showed the real face of that chudail good girl
umm wais maanu ne bhut tarpata na get ko
now its geet's turn
waiting 4 more
ab maanu ki bari😆😆😆

im still not so happy with u huh
chal maanu chalte hai
apna kaam ho gya

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Posted: 12 years ago



Feeling bad for Geet...😭
Now what...??😕
Both r heart broken...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome update dear
poor geet feeling bad for her she never got love nd when maan started loving her some MU came nd geet was alone again
all bcoz of ur khurafarti brain
hate it so much😡😡😡
finally maan got to know about geet innocence
nd geet to prove that sam is wrong
but maan is very late to apologize
nd geet is all broken
the line when geet says she is nameless again
that line touched me really
that doesn't mean i m not angry on u for separating maaneet again
i want them happy
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 10
awesome...
good Geet gave it to him...
what he did is not forgivable the way he hurt...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago



Waiting...


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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful part dear
finally maan knows the truth. he could have used his brain before hurting her so much.
geet is really very hurt with maan's harsh words. hope maan will able to get her back
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Posted: 12 years ago
This update is a Dedicated to Kiran di and Tia. 😳So sweet you made custard for me me luv ya.And Tia thanks for the ideas to manofy Geet 😳luv yaa maanu ki deewani😳😆
@ Di baap re baap itna gussa😆, but yoh bhi hain gussa toh right hain, haina. Di loved the way you commented😳
@ Tia , babes I did scrap you when I came online but you where offline by then me updates at midnight yaar😆. I knew you would comment for your maanu😆hayee tera pyaar. 😆Well Dreamy grab your broom cause he shared it with me😛😆Baba I am sorry before going away with Maanu, apni devil ko maaf kar deh nah😳.

@ Tamana stop crying baby, Maan hain nah he will fix it all😉

@ Cherry Happy you liked it😳 ajeeb pyaar hai tera Cherry😆Funny when I wrote that sentence you wrote I was like you are saying that😆you know me too well sweets😳I do but missing you a lot😳
@ Singh did you accept Cherry's buddy reqquest if yes me feeling lonely on your dashboard now😡(Cherry don't glare at me,😆)
@lovesia Hello kaam kareh Maan kassoor mileh mere masoom dimaag ko not done Sia😡😆awww how touchy that the line touched you😳but then again hum hai hi kamaal😛Oye me want them happy to and me didn't do anything huh😭
@Deepa I know but let's hope Maan can make it up for all
@dreamy don't cry that much
@Gurti30 his mind went on vacation it just came back😆
(credit of banner goes to Tanya😳, Thanks so much)
Part 11
''Then leave me.''
''Geeet.''
''Leave Maan.''
''I can't''
''I know cause you don't love me.''
Maan turned around and left. When he did Geet fell on the ground and cried sititng by the door. Maan went to his place he exircised like a maniac like he was taking all Geet's pain on him. Maan coulnd't forget the pain in her eyes. he had hurted her so much how could he. If only he had use his brains a few years back they would be married by now. Poor Geet had to go through so much pain all alone at such a young girl. he had promised to make her happpy but what did he do he just hurted her more. Maan kept excersing to forget what he did. And now his Misty asked him to leave her but he wouldn't he wouldn't leave her like he did each and every time, this time he would make her his again he promised. He was ready for any punishment by his jaan, but he wouldn't let her pusnish herself as he knew statying away from him would hurt her also. He would make it all fine again, he promised himself. The next day he was sitting in office waiting for Geet to come when she walked into his cabin he smiled at her.
''Good morning Misty.''
Geet felt butterflies the way he said it with so much love and he was giving her a dreamy look. But she decided she wouldn't let herself be effected by Maan.
''Morning Mr. Khurana.''
''Don't be that formal Jaan.''
''Mr. Khuarana stay in your limits.''
''Sorry.''
He said holding his ears. Geet ignored it and sat down in front of him but Maan being a deewana today came and sat next to her a annoyed Geet ignored him again. While working she felt Maan's heated stare on her. She looked at him he was looking at her in a trance. The trance got broken by a knock on the door. Maan stood up to grab something from his maid.
''Geet I made this in the morning.''
He served her breakfast on the sandwich sorry was written. Geet decided to ignore it again.
'' I already had breakfast.''
Maan pouted, Geet looked away no she wasn't going to melt not after all his harsh words she told herself.
''But I woke up really early just to make it for you, please just taste it.''
''Mr. Khurana can we concentrate on work and work only.''
Geet said though it panged her heart. Maan pouted.
''I even didn't have breakfast as I wanted to eat with you.''
Geet closed her eyes. She didn't know what to do. She sighed.
''Let's have breakfast then but only today I acpect from tomorrow on more profesional behaviour, is that clear.''
Maan nodded like a good boy. He was so happy.
''I love you Geet.''
He said while he was setting the table. geet's eyes wided.
''Excuse me.''
Maan turned to her. He kissed her cheek.
''I love you Misty.''
Geet stood up.
''Have you lost it MAAN. HOW DAR YOU TOUCH ME I HAVE TOLD YOU A THOUSAND TIME KE IN YOUR EYES I MIGHT HAVE NO IZZAT BUT THAT DOESN'T MATTER YOU TOUCH ME WHENEVER YOU FEEL. MR. KHURANA I EVEN ASKED YOU YESTERDAY TO STAY AWAY FROM ME.''
''Geet please I know your angry and I am sorry Jaan but please all I want is one more chance.''
'' Stay away from me Maan, stay away.''
''Geet I can't you asked me kal that If I love you I will leave. But Misty I love you so I will stay only cause I love you doesn't mean I will do as you say Misty. You know why, because I know you can't lve without your Maan too.''
''I lived without you all these years and I did just fine even now I will survive so leave me alone.''
''I won't. cause I can't live without you anymore. Call me selfish but Haan Geet I want you for me as I want collor back in my colorless life.''
''Still three days left maan then this project is over and I will be free from you and even you can ;t stop me.
Geet left from there Maan knew she was right he had to manofy her in these three days.Maan sat down he need to win her back and soon. He sat down thinking what to do when a idea striked him. Geet was sitting on her bed working on her laptop trying to forget Maan and the convo they had when someone knocked her door. She opened it to find flowers with a long note.
I love you so very much,
Even thou at times I do things that hurt,
I try so hard to hope that you always see,
How much you being in my life means to me,
I am sorry yet again for causing you pain,
that is the last thing I ever wanted to do,
Even when I am trying to look out for you and do the right thing
I mess up, I am sorry for that too.
I hope that you still know how much I love and cherish you,
Like nothing else in my life gives me the trill of being loved by you.
So I hope that you listen and see it in my eyes,
this sincere apology that comes with tears from deep inside.


Source: Apologize Poem, Sorryhttp://www.familyfriendpoems.com/poem/apologize#ixzz2aSboEeiS
Geet closed her eyes she couldn't melt no she was done with him. It was time for her to move on without him. She was about to go inside when she heard a child call for her. She turned around.
'
''Didi can you help me I want to learn to drive a bike.''
Geet smiled and walked over to the kid without closing the door, perfect the plan worked Maan thought. Maan sneaked into Geet's place without her seeing it. After a good two hours as the little girl didn't let her go, she entered back home to smell her fav allo ke paranthe. She walked into the kicthen to find Maan setting the table.
''How did you enter my place at and what are you doing.''
''Misty can't you see I am cooking for you Jaan.''
''Stop just stop you behaviour right now and leave.''
''But Misty me really hungry Maan said putting a hand on his stomach.''
''Fine take your food and leave.''
''But I don't like to eat alone nah.''
''Woh meri problem nahi Hai .''
''Well it will be as you have to give me company, Maan said while he got seated.''
''Maan enough is enough just leave.''
''But Geet I am hungry.''
''Fine enjoy your meal.''
Geet left the kitchen in anger. She heard Maan yelling behind her.
''Geet won't you join me.''
''GGRRR.''
She went to her room and sat down feeling frustrated.When Maan knocked on her door.
''leaveee.''
He walked inside.
''Don't you know what leave means.''
''Patha hai nah it means you want me to go.''
''Then why are you still here.''
''Eh loh Geet just cause you want me to leave doesn't mean I have to leave nah. Why should I listen to you?''
''Haan why should you LISTEN TO ME.''
''Geet why are you yelling I am not deaf honey.''
''Don't honey me.''
''Okay baby.''
''GRRR.''
''Baby why are you sounding like a bear.''
'Stop it Maan.''
''Stop what Jaan.''
''This the way your behaving, there will never be a us again.''
Maan looked direct into her eyes and said.
''There will be a us again Misty there will be.''
''You know what enjoy.''
Geet stood up and left the house and ofcourse Maan followed her.
Precap:Everything, come on how hard
Could it be, To make her love me?

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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan is on mission to manaoo geet loved it waiting 4 next

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