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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Congo mel...Loved the prologue

do comtinue soon

thankx for pm

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Bhanu

@Cherishh

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Hey self-called innocent girl😉😆😆...or say my Shock booster...congo for the new one dear...

The prologue is just very nice.

MSK and fun-loving..now thats the first jhatka..hmmm interesting..and here he is already lost in Geet's smile now thats cool...chalo hope he becomes a good frnd to her.

Geet..omg poor dear...craving for love...arre following orders from her parents and wearing their choice of clothes was like..sad.sad..but still okies..but asking her mother to make frndship...was way tooo muchhh...me wondering how this bigii bili will be sherni as I know that will happen in Maan's sangat

Looking forward to it.

And now..u better start giving updates including this real soon...nahi toh...nahi toh...pleaseee...request ke alawa kya kar sakte hai...humpphhh.

Waiting dear...do update soon

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Ruchi

@ruchs

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

aww that's really a sweet concept!!

Geet leading an almost robotic life!!

A monotonous life following orders, wanting and waiting to be loved!!

Just an apt title dear!!

And our Maan….

Lattu on first sight!! he he!!

I was actually shocked when she texted Maan's full name to her mom!!

Gosh!!!

She even can't make friends or talk to anyone without her mom's permission???

Guess Maan's entry in her life is going to change everything!!!

Loved the concept as well as the first part a lot!!!

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

wonderful dear and loved as it is very different. continue soon.

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Cherishh
Hey self-called innocent girl😉😆😆...or say my Shock booster...congo for the new one dear...

The prologue is just very nice.

MSK and fun-loving..now thats the first jhatka..hmmm interesting..and here he is already lost in Geet's smile now thats cool...chalo hope he becomes a good frnd to her.

Geet..omg poor dear...craving for love...arre following orders from her parents and wearing their choice of clothes was like..sad.sad..but still okies..but asking her mother to make frndship...was way tooo muchhh...me wondering how this bigii bili will be sherni as I know that will happen in Maan's sangat

Looking forward to it.

And now..u better start giving updates including this real soon...nahi toh...nahi toh...pleaseee...request ke alawa kya kar sakte hai...humpphhh.

Waiting dear...do update soon

😆what I really know myself isiliye I gave myself that name😆

Gosh feels good to see your comment. It makes me smile like always

I will update tum sirf mero ho so no need to give dhamkis cause I already got dhamkis😆

you know when I was typing that Maan says he dad is so strict and he isn't me felt like laughing. Am I the only one who found that funny😆

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: ruchs
aww that's really a sweet concept!!
Geet leading an almost robotic life!!
A monotonous life following orders, wanting and waiting to be loved!!
Just an apt title dear!!

And our Maan'.

Lattu on first sight!! he he!!
I was actually shocked when she texted Maan's full name to her mom!!
Gosh!!!
She even can't make friends or talk to anyone without her mom's permission???

Guess Maan's entry in her life is going to change everything!!!

Loved the concept as well as the first part a lot!!!