Want to be loved part 13 p 115 - Page 46

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Posted: 12 years ago
😲kal toh update kiya tah me will update again when cherry will🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angel-ki-shona

😲kal toh update kiya tah me will update again when cherry will🤣


Lazy - Bones...😈
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Lazy - Bones...😈

I am just following Cherry's lead😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...ufff...maan not beleiving geet and ending up hurting her...poor heart broken geet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
(credit of banner goes to Tanya😳, Thanks so much)
Part 9
Both fell on the ground crying and screaming for the pain to stop. It was getting unbearable now for both of them. Geet couldn't handle to see disgust in the eyes of the man she loved more then her life and Maan didn't had it in him anymore to hurt the one he loved.

Tu hi mera liye abb kr dua,
Tu hi is dard se
kar de juda,
Tera hoke tera jo main
na raha😭

Geet was totally drenched she stood up and dragged herself to her place and when she came home she hit the shower instantly. Maan was still sitting on the ground broken when his Phone rang. He took a deep breath wiped his tears and picked up the call.
''Hello''
''Hi Maan your voice sounds heavy, like you have cried. Are you okay''
''Haan Sam I am totally fine, you tell any special reason you called''
''Nahi Maan I was just thinking maybe we could go to the disc together''
Haan Maan thought Maybe he should do that, that will make him forget what happened in the morning.
''Theek hai Sam I will pick you up''
''Briliant so see you at 8''
''See you at 8 bye''
''Bye''
Maan hung up and took a deep breath he told himself he needed to forget there was ever a girl named Geet in his life. He kept tellinh himself to concetrate on tonight, he would have fun with Sam. Yes he would. At the other side a broken Geet just came out of the shower still feeling defeated by fate. Just then her Phone rang it was one of her friends who called her to remind her that tonight they would go to the disc. OMG she totally forgot. This was briliant she thought tonight she would party and forget Maan's harsh words. She needs to feel okay again and going out seemed the perfect idea to get over it.
Geet and her friends entered the disc Geet wasn't really feeling like dancing. She needed nto come into the mood she told herself but then again she was never the party type. She sighed. Just then Maan walked inside with Sameera. There eyes met. Maan was shocked to see Geet here. Well so she likes going to discs he Always that she wasn't found of him, but then again she is a liar he told himself.. Geet was shocked to see him and again she saw his eyes looking at her, those eyes who only hate disgust in them. She looked away from him, lost in her thought she grabbed the drink from the table. Not realising it was a bloody Marry and not strawberry lemonade. She drunk it in one go. With out even realising the bitter taste. Geet who had never drinked in her life before was now fully drunk. She stood up and walked up to the stage.It was tonight a open mic night. So Geet climed the stage and took the mic. Maan who got seated near the bar next to Sam looked at Geet wondering what she was up to. Just then Sam asked him.
''Isn't that Geet the girl who is working with you on your next project''
''Hmmm''
''Seems like she is gonna sing''
''I geuss''
Just then Geet started singing.While singing she pointed with her finger at Maan.
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gi5F3PGd1WU[/YOUTUBE]
You, with your words like knives and swords and weapons that you use against me
You have knocked me off my feet again got me feeling like I'm nothing
You, with your voice like nails on a chalkboard, calling me out when I'm wounded
You, pickin' on the weaker man
She remembered Maan's harsh words he said in the morning. How he called her a S*** indirectly. Everytime he would just break her into pieces with his harsh words. He Always made her feel so low about herself, while she was so innocent.When she sang those words while pointing at him Maan glared at her, while Sam was to busy texting to pay any attention to what was happening arround her.

Well, you can take me down with just one single blow
But you don't know what you don't know

Someday I'll be living in a big old city
And all you're ever gonna be is mean
Someday I'll be big enough so you can't hit me
And all you're ever gonna be is mean

Why you gotta be so mean?

She said the last line making a puppy face. Maan felt guilt creepy inside his heart but he ignored it and looked away. He wasn't mean he told himself she was lying about his fiance, he couldn't let her lie just like that about Sam. he needed to make that clear he told himself repeatly while he knew from deep inside he was wrong and nothing else then wrong.
You, have pointed out my flaws again as if I don't already see them
I'll walk with my head down trying to block you out 'cause I'll never impress you
I just wanna feel okay again
Geet walked with her head down towards Maan while singing these lines. When she came close to Maan. She punched the table next to him singing the next line.
I'll bet you got pushed around, somebody made you cold
But the cycle ends right now 'cause you can't lead me down that road
Maan just smelled she was drunk. Oh so that was another thing he didn't know about her.Sam's voice brought him back to reality.
''What the hell is she doing Maan''
''She is drunk Sam''
''Oh''
Geet grabbed Maan by his collar. Sam's eyes popped out while Maan glared at her and tried to shoved her hands away but Geet just hold him tigther and drew him more to herself and sang:
And I can see you years from now in a bar, talking over a football game
With that same big loud opinion but nobody's listening
Washed up and ranting about the same old bitter things
Drunk and grumbling on about how I am cheap
Maan was taking back by her last sentence he could feel the anger and pain in her voice and sam was again busy texting her BF was bothering her about something so she was way busy to pay constent attention on Maneet.
But all you are is mean
All you are is mean and a liar and pathetic and alone in life
And mean, and mean, and mean, and mean
Maan couldn't take the accusations anymore he harsly shoved her hands away.
''ENOUGH. Let's go Sam''
Sam looked up dahm she needed to go to her bf.
''Maan, geet seems drunk why don't you take her home''
''What no she can take of herself''
''Maan what are you saying she is drunk''
''But what about you?
'' Maan I am not drunk I can take care of myself'
Maan nodded. Sam left leaving Maan to handle a drunken Geet.
Precap: Maan and a drunken Geet with a broken heart😲
Edited by angel-ki-shona - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res!!!😉

EDIT!!😉

Haayyyeee!! Feels like a dream!!!😳

First dream!! You updated!!!😲

second dream- Me came first after ages!! Yipppeee!!!😆

Third dream- My net is still alive??? 😲

Simply loved the update dear!!👏

It was so painful yet beautiful!!!👏

Could feel goosebumps rising imagining Geet's pain!!!😭

Sigh!!! Maan please please just try to understand once!!!

Really hoping that all gets well!!!😕

The pre cap is again painful but still giving me hopes!!!😳

Loved the song selection shona!!!👏

Awesooommmeee Update!!! me dancing that my shona is BACK!!!!😃

Love you sooo much!!!😳

P.S.- Me had gone to talk to Mom in kitchen that's why late ho gayi edit karne main!!! Sholllyy!!!😳
Edited by ruchs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
tud Mel fainted
Yaad aagi meri😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congratulations...!!
as finally i m here

so its party time
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angel-ki-shona

@Nishu stop being a ghost :P

company acchi nahi lagi😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

Congratulations...!!

as finally i m here

so its party time

😆Oh please jaldi gi nahi aagi normal you come when I update the last part , to party😡😆

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