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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#891

So sorry for getting late ...I was bit busy coming to update its awesome what to say neatly and emotionally written...and thank u for this much long update

plz update soon

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#892

updated the bak bak on 125😊

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#893

Oh Nisha

I love ur writing , ur comments and even ur reply to my comment😛

thanks dear for ur wonderful reply

and what happened to u dear

read some comments abt ur sick ness

how r u now dear

pls take very good care of ur health

and what a wonderful and EDUCATIVE update it was dear

l love ur characterization

in this story of urs everyone took my heart away

first it was dev, then miri then brij and now pari

pari was really brilliant and her acts

OMG

Pari and miri's mission tail was awesome dear

and that sweet little pirate with one glass off from the sunglass was too cute to imagine

and all actions of miri and her song was too too too good dear

u must be a very very naughty kid Nisha or i should say u r still now

how do u think abt such amazing ideas and that too with a perfect song

the song oh oh aaja for msk the sheru's tail

even aasha parikh could not do it better than our cutie miri

and i think ki u r after my dear maan haat dho kar nono naha dho kar mere dear maan ke piche pad gayi hai uska popat banane ke liye

but i loved all the antics of pari and miri

and then the super cop avataar of pari

was superb

no no it was super se bhi upar

and dressed to kill our pari was really terrific

though some words were really beep type

loved the sholay punch

now a days basantis are capable of protecting their izzat without the help of dhanno or viru

( may every girl be as brave as this pari )

loved the connection of maan as spcl trainer

again a very brilliant idea dear

so our dear maan is in awe of pari's physical and VERBAL power

and soon he will be bewitched by geet's mental strength also

and then maahi maahi😆😆

story is really getting intersting dear Nisha

and i think u have a mission of turning each and every negative character of the show into a positive and adorable one dear

but pls humare already adorable , maan par daya karo

( though no complaints i know hamare msk ke jaadu se Nisha bach nahi sakti and she will make him even more adorable . right dear Nisha😆

my comment has become an os now

but it's all ur fault

who told u to write such wonderful update that i cant stop commenting

but do keep writing such awesome updates and i will keep pakofying u with my long comments dear Nisha

lots and lots of love dear🤗

Edited by gudmeet - 12 years ago

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piya27

@piya27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#894

Loved it amazing especially those cuss words and the way those goons were aressted

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mayashri

@mayashrisawant7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#895

omg di parinda godbole inspector wow ab to bohot maja ayega msk ki to band baj gai yar nice update dear jo b pari ne kaha aur apne narrate kiya m totally agree with ur point . hope maan ki galtfami jaldi dur ho jaye

thanks for lovely update and pm

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#896

I had read the chapter the day u posted it but mera stupid keyboard...so ahd to wait till I get time on my office laptop...

what an update sirji...mazaa aa gaya...

well there were clearly two parts - First one beinh hilarious with Miri again looking for the tail. ow even I feel "Poor Maan"...he is such a big man and no one...i mean no one would have humiliated him as much as Miri did...well he deserves it all for heaping insults on Geet and worse being taunting her about being mother making her take miri in lap...but still it was hillarious...

now coming to next part...oh i loved inspector parinda ghodbole...u know i somehow feel marathi surnames are such toph names...wakade, godhbole, deshmukh, shinde...list can go on...I was instantaneously reminded of Durendra Bhatavdekar from Rang Birangi.

Pari is such a sweet name with an image of a sweet girl but then parinda...well I think i can so imagine pari in a smart police dress...

Loved it so much...and the profanities she barsaofied on Maan...give him taste of his medicine. Never judge a person by his/her looks...and here he just judged the whole family by a mere few words of conversation. I wonder how he trusts "Brij" anymore...

awesome awesome update...

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Susegad

@Susegad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#897

Originally posted by: palindrome
"By God maja aa gaya"...!!!
Its a punjabi phrase which rarely escapes my lips..Last time I had said it when "Real Identity" of Rancho{aamir khan} was revealed to "Chatur" in the climax of Three idiots..and your "pari" made me say this once again...

That wa the best climax ever, and I'm honored that you gave my character the same darja😳

I am dumb case honestly..I was reading the whole train scene and I was like a new "character" is going to be introduced very soon but not even once,"pari" crossed my mind and at the end when her identity was disclosed,I was hit with a big wave of excitement.😃.If mum was not there sitting behind me,i would have clapped too..{yes..I clap like babies when something excites me..😛}..Pari has alot of shades in her character..She is a drooling teenager in the vicinity of Brij..She is a mother to Miri..She is a sister to Geet..All together,she is wonderful..!!!!😊

I am glad I could surprise you with Pari's character. I had thought that somebody would guess her profession, before I posted it, but nobody did. It's tricky writing side characters though, you're not sure whether people will want to read about them or not. Therefore I am really glad you enjoyed that part.😃

Thank you very much pari for showering all those "shivis" on stupid MSK..
Miri,my darling,keep checking that tail on his back till he himself would be compelled to check in the mirror,"kahin sach mein toh pooch nahi hai mere peeche"..😆

🤣🤣
Logon ke par nikal aate hain. MSK is unique, uski toh doom niklegi

I loved this chapter parjai...
love ya...🤗

Love you more, more, more Pilli.🤗

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#898

finally read the first part
will go slow nisha di coz of colg...
but i just loved it tooo much.
miri is geet's daughter...that means geet is a single mother..then it also implies she had a past and am so eager to read that as i presume its in the upcuming updates

and brij..ha ha the chamcha of MSK and miri the cutie cutie cuddly cuddly varsu is geet's chamchi...just the cutest update ever!!!!

mohinder's 'dead' and 'dad' confusion was so cutely fuuny.
over all..a very beautiful update...each and every relation so beautifully portrayed. eager to read the next only when my chudail Data Structure teacher gives us a break!!!!

loved it a lot

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chhavi

@Shonameet

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#899

Hi nisha di!😊
first of all congratulations for ur superhit first story! And trust me, no one will belive that its ur first work on IF. And hats off to u for the length of the updates! It must be hard to type long chapters.
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i loved each n every character of handas n khuranas!

Brij...he is so shy! He even makes tea and hot chocolate for the ladies... Kash mera bhai itna sidha hota!
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Pari...she is a kind of friend..i always wish to get. I had one...but she is not with me now..mujhe nahi pata wo kahan hai!
Paris memories with rano are so beautiful. Their talks abt brij n fake taunts to eachother...i enjoyed every bit of it.
And in latest update..pari as a police officer..as a confidant, strong n indepenant woman.
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Miri...a naughty little devil! She wants to protect her mom from every pain n evil people. That sheru n his invisible tail..part was hilerious! And she actually checked it!🤣
that SPECIAL CHASHMA and our cutie belived it to be magical!
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Birbal...
Thats a perfect name for him!😆
ye bhi kuch kam nahi hai.. How he was taunting dadi abt her almost lost bettle to convince geet.
"kya keh rahi thi aap? DEVI BONAPARTE"
i was laughing so badly.. Imagning their boths expression!

And when at geets house he commented..that daadi was a nai navili, undekhi dulhan for the khurana kichen!🤣😆 R u sure..he is only 9years old!
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Devi bonaparte..
She is a darling! Han thodi nautanki hai.. Emotionally blakmail karti hai... Per sabka khayal hai unhe!
She n dev are a super good team! Maan ko charon khane chit kar diya!
When maan was addressing them as white head n black head...i just couldnt stop laughing. That whole chapter showing maans irritation n akelapan was so good.
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Geet..
She has faced a very tough time in her life.. Still she stood bravely and also take care of little miri... N has become an anchor of her life.
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Maan...

In a attempt to runnaway from his own feelings he is blaming geet without listening her side!
But he is a very good grandson and a loving n overprotactive big brother!
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and the best n new thing is MARATHI DAILOGS...
I just luvd the pronunciation in marathi language...spicy.. Thikha-thikha!
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suparhit story!😊

Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago