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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 33:


read at ur own risk dont be mad at me with the content!!!

moi SIA is back fighting with a disease i dont want to reveal this update is for you jaan love you and god bless you meri umar bhi lag jaaye tumhe now i believe god cannot be so cruel 😲

Geet: aap galat samajh rahe hai maan its... Toh sahi kya hai?? the truth is that u are playing with my feelings


Geet: main aapki feelings ke saath khel rahi hoon?? Khel toh aapki mom khel rahi hai maan its she who is responsible for everything...GEET!!! maan's hand almost rose to hit geet, she closed her eyes, but stopped kyun ruk gaye maan?? I deserve this slap, I do deserve it ruk kyun gaye?? Maariye ab toh aapka haq hain after all I am your wife


Maan: u filled my mind with all this and it was your fault, when I came closer you shoved me away, and now you are giving me lame excuses. Isme mom ki kya galti hai?? kyun unko beech mein laa rahi ho?? Is it that dadima has said something to you?? Issi liye tum aisa keh rahi ho?? He said walking away you can do whatever you wish for geet lekin mom ke khilaaf kuch mat kaho. She is everything to me


Geet: aur main kaun hoon?? Main kaun hoon boliye?? She fell down crying boliye who am I to you?? It was your mom who said its risky for your life if we consummate that's the reason I was running away.


Maan turned back yeh kya bakwaas hai?? she was the one who told me we can make a move to the next level of our relationship and you are accusing her for something she doesn't even know of it??


Geet: ya right!!! She mocked getting up onto her feet your mom doesn't know anything, khair chodiye unke baare mein hamare baare mein sochte hain, did you ever say I love you to me?? Nahi na?? sirf main!!! Aur mera!!! Tum sirf meri ho!!! Jo main kabhi thi hi nahi. You have taken me for granted hamara rishta ab lagta hai it was just a compromise. Your ego means everything to you... geet!!! just shut up geet this is the limit now kuch bhi bole jaa rahi ho?? He pushed geet onto the wall slamming her, so with this you proved me right you feel I lust you haina?? She looked away not responding to his baseless talks bt still tried to voice out, agar aisa hota toh mujhe aapke saamne nange punge khade rehne ki jaroorat hi nahi padta maan all I was telling is... No you will not speak anything, we had enough. JAB TAK TUM MOM KE BAARE MEIN YEH GALAT BAATEIN BAND NAHI KARTI TAB TAK MAIN TUMHARE KAREEB NAHI AAONGA!! with that said he walked away


Geet(st): thik hai if that was your challenge meri baat bhi hai jo ki aapne nahi suna. From now on I wont try to come close to you aap khud aayenge mere paas breaking your own words. Ek waqt tha jab mujhe laga ki main besharam banongi lekin nahi ab yeh besharmi ka khel khatam. Ill get into a wrong track to get you


Next day, Geet left for the college having her sargi in the early morning. She was damn excited as it is her first karwa chauth.


Pinky: kya baat hai haathon mein mehendi lagta hai aaj karwa chauth ka wrat hai she asked chirpily


Geet: I wanted to ask you something pinky baaki ke baatein baad mein, geet said dragging pinky to a lone corner


Pinky: kya hua?? Why are you behaving like a despo?? And then geet narrated the whole convo of hers with maan


Pinky: yaar geet teri aur maan ki problem kuch hadh se jyada hi badh rahi hai... that's what I was telling now, you remember you said


Ur first step SEDUCE HIM!!! Phir use dur chali ja khud tere peeche aayega

Ur second step JEALOUSY!!! Iske liye we will use someone


First step mein ab main nahi jaane waali toh second step use karna hai


Pinky: tu pagal ho gayi hai geet?? your plans never work they only back fire. Tu kuch mat kar aaj sham ko maan ke saamne say sorry to your so called sasumaa then the things would get normal. Sorry kehne se thodi na kuch ho jayega?? You will win maan she finished happily


Geet: idea toh achi hai, you are right sorry kahongi aur problem solved haina?? That was the plan for now finally!!


@NIGHT:

As maan came back from the office he didn't find geet in the room, the whole mansion was decorated he knew on what occasion it is but he was least interested. He did not even feel like having food so just retired on the bed hell angry on geet for not being in the room after he reached back. Maan himself did not know when he slept as the tiredness took over his senses.


Geet was waiting for maan on the terrace, all the other ladies left after the karwa chauth but geet was still with a hope that maan will come. Dadima called him but he didn't pick up as he was in a deep sleep and nobody knew that maan was in the house, in the room. Pammi who was enjoying the plight of geet could hold back her happiness, she went to geet


Pammi: woh nahi aayega geet I know my son, after what all you said do you feel he will come?? My maan is a mama's man aur tumhe bohut mehnat karna padega she said with a confident tone


Geet: oops!! Aur aapko lagta hai ki maan will remain a mama's man?? Hmm so u heard our fight of last night?? Koi baat nahi hai aunty let me tell you something dekhiye yeh mehendi ispe mere pati ka naam likha hai which shows we are bonded for a life time and you can never separate him from me I know how to make up to my husband, aur yeh kangan{bangles} they are glass bangles haina?? Kal subah ko you will find them broken on the bed!! Isse bada hint main aapko nahi desakti as I know about my husband, geet threw a challenge which made pammi to fume in anger but she was too damn confident that what geet is saying right now can never happen!!


Pammi: geet bte tumhe nahi lagta ki tum kuch jyada hi ummed kar rahi ho?? you will only be left heart broken. I did not give birth to maan but still I am the woman who brought him up. Agar mera pyar sahi hai toh ... uff aunty that word pyar doesn't suit you coz I know your intentions of loving maan. But let me tell you something aapka yeh jitne bhi trials hai na apne paas rakhiye because now I have decided I want to become a mother, aur isse aapka kya hoga?? She laughed looking at the lost color of pammi


Pammi: toh tumhe sach ka pata ho gaya how can I forget savitri devi is with you after all, but I wont let you become a mother this is my challenge. Chalo subah ko milte hai in your room she winked, setting geet's gajra in the hair pammi left!!


Precap: kaun jeetega?? Geet?? or pammi?? The most awaited part girls!!! Hold your breaths now!!

Next update after 240 likes strictly coz i gave the precap question karke hi😆


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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
~~edited~~

nice update didu
akhir ho kya raha hai
geet maan ko sach bata rahi hai
nd maan is being maan's man nahi mama's boy
koi baccha bhi aise nahi karega
maan bada apne apko bolta rehta hai ki MSK hoon humesha sahi ka saath deta hoon
thik hai manti hoon maan ke pallu se bandha hai but use geet ke baare me bhi toh sochna chahiye
geet aisa gatiya jhoot kyun bolegi
nd she is the one who want to be with him forever nd ever
but nahi maan toh sirf
"mama is a good girl, mama is a good girl" ka mantar pad raha hai
upar se maan geet ka first karwa chauth bhi bhul gaya
but love geet challenge

update soon
waiting
waiting
waiting
waiting

Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

they will just keep accusing each other
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Posted: 12 years ago
I truly hate pammi. Such a witch
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan is completely foolish...

but i loved geet pammi confrontation
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n intense update! Poor Geet! Maan does nt believe her! Geet chalelnges Pammi! HAte Pammi! Well written! update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
cant wait to c who will win...

continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous update dear:)

i think geet will win :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
dear,, update was too short...
nice update dear...
but i don't like when there is no understanding between them...
geet thinking of jealousy plan..shukar hey she dropped that plan...
thanku for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear.
i hate that pammi 😡😡😡😡😡😡
hope geet wins
continue soon.

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