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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AIMAMSK

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

Superbbb dono ko same dream aaya...apne past k bare me thoda thoda yaad aa raha hai... Lets seee what will happened next... 😊




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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

phew!!!!!!!!!!

finally read it

aww i so much love this story🤗

plzz continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update. both maan and geet were having the same dream.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran_rati

waiting eagerly dear

update soon



will update tomorrow
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
THANK YOU GUYS FOR READING MY FFs...
here is the next part









PART 15

Recently discovered that the theme of life ok's savitri is same as my SS ….

these updates are specially for my fb sweetheart PRINCESSNIKITA ... she was the only one waiting for this ss

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Geet : " rajkumar divyam kahan hain aap'' jaldi aayiye'.darshan kar lijiye maa sa aapka intzaar kar rahi hain'.."

Geet was so lost in her dream'. A sweet whisper came from her mouth'" RAJKUMAR'.."

Here maan was seeing the same thing'. But his pretty and innocent princess'.

Maan heard someone saying'

" rajkumari meenakshi jaldi aa jaiye '. Aarti shuru hone wali hai'.. aapki prateeksha ho rahi hai'.."

For the first time in his life after his mother's demise'.

Maan smiled seeing that dream'.

Somehow he couldn't relate that to meenakshi'he can only see the glimpse of geet 'and whispered " meenakshi.."

May be life is so cruel like we thought off' geet and maan were so lost in their dream which was actually the revival of the time there souls were connected '.

The impact of this sweet dream was actually very sweet and good on geet'not to forget maan.he was in a good and vibrant mood'. Neither sulked ..nor got angry..his staff was actually spared of his anger and glares..but surprisingly geet was thinking of her Mr ARROGANT'

Geet : first time I saw something that was pleasant that had not scared me' I am so relieved today' she for sure didn't knew the reason but was very happy and enchanted'.

Geet st: what to do' I need someone to go with me.. I want to visit that palace again..last time I had lost my conscious but this time I wont'

Geet was thinking of every other possible way .. to get to the palace..but she knows only one person can take her there ' that is her MR ARROGANT who was not that much arrogant today' actually he was kind of soft like melted seeing the beautiful sight of a prince and a princess'..

It was almost six when maan came back..vicky to surprised to see maan back so soon when he usually comes late at night'. He actually blinked twice to confirm that its his dear brother''

Vicky: it is definitely a illusion how can I see bhai at this time.. Vicky get yourself checked in the next appointment with doctor' you are definitely having some eye sight problems' I think I need a specs' no lens would be fine'

Maan who was standing beside Vicky just glared at him looking at his stupid brother who was making his own logics about maan's early arrival'. He looked at the servants who were also totally amazed what they saw' even daadima came and saw maan..she was happy yet surprised seeing her grandson home'.

Daadima: maan you came' go and freshen up..i will sent your black coffee ..but maan was maan..he just nodded smiling a little'. And went..as he was about to enter his room he turned and told daadima'

Maan: daadima I am coming down will have my coffee with you and this idiot Vicky'

Vicky gulped hard..he looked at his daadi for help' Vicky in a meek voice like a scared lamb'.

Vicky: daadima ..

Daadi could not help but chuckle at Vicky who was looking so cute with his scared expression'..

She smiled a bit'.

Daadima: Vicky why are you so much scared of Vicky..he is your brother only'..

Vicky looked at daadima like trying to know what she is trying to say'.

Vicky: daadima you know na bhaiki personality hi aisi hai and moreover when he show his big big eyes to me I just want to hide into the safest place'.

While Vicky was saying all these to his daadima.. maan who was descending the stairs .. heard all' he just looked at his brother'

Maan: VICKY!!!!! His voice was enough to see a scared Vicky..

Vicky like a small baby'

Vicky : see daadima what bhai is doing see isn't he looks like a Dracula with two of his canines coming out'see daadima..dhyaan se dekho'.

While daadima wacked his hand..vicky himself imagined his dear brother'

Maan: Vicky tu ruk let me show you how Dracula drinks blood'

Vicky shouted and ran for his life'.

Vicky: see daadima I told you bhai ki jagah bhoot aa gaya hai ghar par'. While maan chased him'.

Vicky: no please spare me..meri toh abi tak shadi bhi nahi hui hai' daadi why don't you say to this Dracula to spare me'.

While maan was quick to catch Vicky'.

Vicky: bhai no..as he saw maan was going to wack him'.

Vicky hugged him tight '.

VIcky: missed you bhai' I didn't know that my bro can still run this fast ..bhai I wonder what do you eat..except that boring pasta' tell me too It will help me to impress girls.. you know girls like macho man types'. He whispered in his ear..

Maan looked at his little brther who was all grown up'. He was tongue tied..know he knew his aloofness had actually made him missed his family..he did knew that Vicky went to school and college but never knew what he did'. About his schedule..his friends he missed his brother'.

Maan engulfed his little brother who was his only toy In childhood and very softly with guilt ridden voice'.

Maan: sorry Vicky'

His voice was chocking that Vicky didn't need to guess what his brother must be feeling..this is actually called blood relations which are more powerful than anything'..

Vicky reciprocated his long lost brother in a soothing hug'..

Vicky: bhai never ever go back to that nightmare again.. I don't want my maan bhai to suffer anymore'

Even servants and daadima looked at both of them ..she was having tears in her eyes' now she knew what guruji meant..may be this was the starting of ending of maan's miseries which has started with him being the owner of that palace'..

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So here is update


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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THANK YOU GUYS FOR READING MY FFs...
here is the next part









PART 16

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The evening was soothing with maan all relaxed even he filled up his lost data of Vicky 's doing all these years..and Vicky very enthusiastically filled his brother with all the juicy details of his life and even asked maan to settle down…

Vicky: bhai don't worry maine apne liye bhabhi bhi select kar li hai… know I want you to settle down … after all I want my little neice in my arms soon…

Daadima chucked with his demand..while his brother's blatant insistence left him in embarresment….

Daadima too supported Vicky….

Daadima: Vicky hum maan ki shaadi toh karwa denge par unke liye dulhan … zara hume bhi dhikhaiye ..hamari hone wali bahu..vicky was so enthusiastic..

Vicky: let me bring my laptop daadi.. you know bhai ke liye kitne dino se ladki dhoond rha hun main… I am having a long collection just maan bhai needs to select….

Maan frowned what is this going on..for a second he thought was this change acceptable and appreciable in his life when he is almost pushed into the dark world of nightmares from where it Is actually impossible to come out….

He was so lost in his thoughts that he didn't see Vicky who had came…Vicky was lost in selecting and finalizing the girls for his brother…. When he saw maan lost….

Vicky: bhai where are you lost have you already selected my bhabhi … tell me no.. I need to know…

Maan just gave Vicky an angy glare which he ignored coming towards daadi….

Maan: Vicky stop his nonsense.. I haven't selected anyone…

Vicky: fine… then let us select… waise bhai I know you wont like models..so I have selected simple and sober natured girls…. You know gaon ki gori types… coz koi princess aapko toh pehle hi reject kar degi she will straightly say that you are arrogant …..

Listening to vicky maan cannot help but to remember his princess who was no less than any sherni… she was the one who was clear in her motive and didn't even feared before saying anything to anyone not even she care what the person will feel but she respects what needs respect .. that was the unique quality that she had… maan chose to leave from the marriage bureau….

Maan: daadima i am going I am having a meeting to attend… good night ..saying so

maan left to his room…

HERE

Geet was in kitchen trying to make smething but to her dismay she was not getting what to make… all the chef even lata didi was standing infront of her while she was trying to make something….

Geet cribbed cutely….

Geet: didi what should I make I am bored of this rajasthani daily.. tell me something….

The chef tried to intervene only to get a angry and non interesting look..that was clearly saying that geet didn't want any interruption…

When something popped in her mind…

She quickly told one of the chef….

Geet: get me all the ingredients to make pasta…. The chef who was already sweating with geets anger .. he quickly helped her what she told…

So the princess made pasta and took a big bowl of chocolate chip icecream for herself..and went to her room since no one was at home….

Sleep was far from both of them….

Geet was tossing on her bed..she was now getting annoyed,,,,

Geet : first those nightmares didn't let me sleep and now what else don't want to let me sleep….

Here maan who had finally drifted into a restless sleep… went to somewhere which seems to be known yet he cannot recognized it….

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Their was a kind of celebration going on everywhere the palace was decorated like a bride … there were different types of flowers which were made making the path so unique looking like it was just laid for welcoming some one..

Here comes a beautiful palanquin .. and a small feet came out of it.. a small girl..may be sixteen came out..dressed in heavy jewels her face was covered with a veil..maan could see her clutching the pallu … there were like ten to fifteen of her girl servants .. sevikayen with her..

Next he saw a rajasthani prince …descending from the horse..there was a big sword adorning with him… he was truly looking like a prince… there was a glow a pride on his face that no one can touch… both were looking like newly married….

A smile enchanted his lips..he was now feeling comfortable in his sleep… the restless was vanishing…

They were welcomed with great pride and honour..all the rituals were performed….

Maan was all the while seeing the things that were related in his life… but their was a sudden blankness that he noticed..everything now seems to be blurred … again he wanted to see all those but nothing was there..he was trying to locate the place but was unable… when a sudden light got illuminated…

Maan saw a decorated bed..there were red and white roses..the bride was sitting in the middle. There was still the veil on her face… there were several candles and diya's illuminated in the room .. the stars were twinkling the shiny white marble like curtains were flowing freely with the wind…. There was a big window.. where moon could be seen…

There was a clear picture of each and everything that was crystal clear to maan…

He could see the newly wedded bride curling her toes..even the sweet jingling of her heartbeats he could hear.. nothing was so perfect …so clear like transparent sheet before….


A few minutes later.. he saw the same prince in the room… now he was having no turban or sword.. he was having a gentle calmess on his face..knowing his love is with him….


The prince with his slow steps… came towards his princess.. and unveiled her face… there was the beautiful princess

MEENAKSHI….

His mouth whispered …


The bride just shied…and immediately melted in his arms…. He too hugged her.. he kissed her forehead… clearly indicating that she didn't need to fear till he is alive .. he kissed her eyes.. letting her know that know no tears can be in her eyes…. Slowly he took all the jewels followed by gentle kisses… she just melted like wax in his arms… his lips were worshipping her like a goddess while she surrendered her self to her husband….


RAJ KUMAR.. a soft moan escaped her lips… he freed her tears and made her lie.. down.. she smiled when he again kissed her forehead and very softly came to her supple baby pink lips….


She herself parted her lips…. They were passionate with their every move.. their was a longing in their moves that maan could see them getting lost in each other...

Next he saw… the girl was changed to geet…. And he was loving her… maan was all over geet .. he was kissing her shoulder … the blush that was there on her cheeks.. the contentment that was there in her eyes… was something that cannot be explained… he nibbled her lips..and entered her mouth… just to seek the sweet honey from his love… though he could see him and geet but he couldn't see her parting was filled with red sindoor and her neck adorning his symbol…

He could see him loving her carnally with geet just surrendering to his love..even she was moaning and he groaned when she scratched her nails on his back….

They completed their relation.. their was a pure estasy and bliss… when he made her his… marking her his from her soul… she was all his.. he hold he when she was about to loose her conscious… but there was a smile of contentment of her face…

Meenakshi: hum aapse bahut pyar karte hai rajkumar….

The declaration of her love ..

Maan abruptly opened his eyes only to see himself sweating….

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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
awesome updates...
dono ko ku6 bh yaad nh...

waiting for next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
love vicky nd maan moments
vicky saying maan dracula
maan seeing their past life marriage
nd after words he saw geet in meenakshi'd place nd himself as rajkumar
love it
update next soon

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