~FLAVOUR OF LOVE~ MG FF #5 IMP NOTE ON PG-151 - Page 80

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Posted: 12 years ago
Maaneet's first kiss... 😳 😳 😳
Poor Geet..afraid due to the intimacy...
& Maan not able to understand her state..
Yaar Dev ko bhi abhi aana tha...

What will happen now???
Waiting for nxt di..
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Posted: 12 years ago
kya se kya hooo gayaaa...

reading the first half i was so lost in their cute yet hesitant romance but u burst the bubble at the end... dev???? y does she always end up hugging him???? and he y he is tapking between our sweet maaneet???? ridhima kam thi jo tum dev ko bhi laayi in dono ke beech mein...

ridhima loves maan ans she is bf of geet... dev loves geet and he is maans bro... maan and geet loves each other but never confessed... 😲😲😲what all twists u r planning dear????

waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 12 years ago
aaj kal gf main kam dikhayi de rahi ho... kya hua????? busy?????
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Posted: 12 years ago
update was nice really loved it but feeling bad for maaneet m/s hope nothing gona wrong yar
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Posted: 12 years ago



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Posted: 12 years ago
update next part soon dear
waiting eagerly
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Posted: 12 years ago
updating teaser for now...n will update in few hours😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mahimaneet

updating teaser for now...n will update in few hours😊

will be waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago

~TEASER~

Geet looked at maan with her longing hazels, was she hearing it right, was he just confessing what she guessed...but then why he stopped, or may be she is wrong, in even expecting him to love her back...
Her thoughts where halted with a panting voice that jerked them both..."maan...geet" dev called standing behind them, boring his questioning gaze on their close proximity...He stared at maan's hands which were still holding geet closer...then looked away hiding that burning jealousy that took over his senses..."dad is waiting for both of you in the car"...dev spoke still looking away from them..."tumhara phone nahi lag raha tha maan...so came here to search you both" he now looked at maan's stern face, then moved his gaze on geet...who he now noticed was clad in maan's shirt..."geet tum yeh..." he aggressively forwarded towards geet, hating to see her in maan's cloth...then looking at geet scared face, he realized his action and calmed himself..."I mean...we are getting late...chalo yaha se" he grabbed geet's hand, and pulled her with himself...But before he took take any step away with geet, maan grabbed geet's other hand and pulled her back...He protectively took shivering geet in his arms, and stared at dev in rage...who stood their stunned with his sudden move...
"maan..." dev spoke in utter rage...but maan stopped him, saying..."she first needs to change...aap jao mai geet ko le aaunga" his commanding words left dev with no other choice...as he angrily stood gazing at maan's retreating back, who carried geet again to that isolated house...
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Updating both FOL n FOD...till then enjoy this teaser😳
Edited by mahimaneet - 12 years ago

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