Pt3'Her 7 Deadly Sins' Thrd2 Pg1

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Khusluvsmaaneet

@Khusluvsmaaneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Nice update..geet tempted by greed..

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

already in his house.. great going Geet.. nice update..

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

M so much in love vd it...yellow color of greed n her diary too is yellow...

Her conscience is nt letting her feel gud abt the greed thing bt she can't help it...loved her inner turmoil n reasoning...

Maan likes her I feel dat way...don't knw if he has some assignment too...

Don't knw bt feel d intensity already...she asked him n he gave his opinion abt greed n all...he finds her innocent...

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abinash079

@abinash079

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

awesome updae
loved it
loved the way maan explained everything

congrats for new thread

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Kittya Cullen

@Kittya_Cullen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#345

I usually don't comment on FFs and OSs but since you've taken the time to do this in novel quality, I'll say a teeny bit.

This is fascinating, Geet's descent into "wickedness" and Maan's understanding of how to put man's dark nature to use. It's my favourite out of all of your work that I've read so far. Particularly because this isn't based on the audience's desire, but molded to the characters in a way that makes it wholly and solely Maan and Geet's story. There's no OTT romance but rather a story that actually allows us to see the character's growth while being railroaded by intense feelings they don't understand. My point is, I love it.😃

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piya27

@piya27

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#346

Never tempted by greed but wen angry can commit any sin

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Arthi

@ar_art

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

I am curious how do u plan to depict all the 7 sins... Yaar pls give a briefing of the 7 sins for dumbos like me...

Y do I feel maan is not as wat he seems? 😳

Geet does sound naive though wat was she doing telling him abt the greed part... And the punishment was also cute thinking...

Nice update pls do update it is a diff concept dot b disheartened so soon 👍🏼

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PujaShree

@PujaShree

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#348

awww grll i juzz luv this story linee ...:):)
thanx Annie for the update...:)
aahaaa so our geet was in delimaa whether to replace that list with new one or not thn finally c replace it with new one...nw c has commited 2 SIn..;)
that scene was funny whn Geet slips on tha muddy water n c thinks that its the result of her sin..:P:P...
sachhi Geet u r innocent...