Pt3'Her 7 Deadly Sins' Thrd2 Pg1

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maangeetforever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: PariNain
pooja i am missing u yaar

hey me too

wise tum kaha ho sunday

i searched for u in all threads

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

hiii

alll

edited

check page 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70159419

Edited by anshra - 12 years ago

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

pehle kehna tha na update page 1 pe hai

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drrose31

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

what to say

this story of yours is actually gonna be best for me ...

coz this is sweet,simple yet very touchy one ..

and the more am reading it, the more am loving this

coming to update

geet's greed .. she is like a small child ,doing mistakes like greed etc and then repenting also...

but what's the point the sin once done is done..

but the main thing is she is realizing her sin and accepting it ..

in front of the person for whom she did... though not telling him yet the actual greed which has been done by her..

but guess, she will tell or he,himself will come to know sooner or later...

maan tried to protect her and not help her was a deep one ...

plus his response to her greed quez was also superb

loved the update

am loving this sin ...

do cont ..

love yaa

Edited by drrose31 - 12 years ago

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maangeetforever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: dona86
pooja tere waha ki power board ki toh 😡

ha di ab mai kya karu

usko kuch nahi hosktha

me 😭

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

awesome update
maan tried to help her protect her
he didnt want anybodt to see her in her messy state
geet is so innocent
aww she asked maan abt his view abt greed
loved it..

Edited by dona86 - 12 years ago

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maangeetforever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

k now time to go

good night to all

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Faiza

@DreamyPrincess1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Edited~

U r going awesum... plot & tempo of story is going superb as still some mystry is there for Y MAAN WROTE GMK oN HIS NOTE BOOK etc etc...but with this curiosity I want to read more & more... & for that still read twice one same time 😉

I would say u have to write for me for us for Maaneet, & this make ur written skill more beautiful & extraordinary in all ways.. as I m already seeing IMPROVMENT in ur style tooo...

So Best of luck for that... & than for updating Both updates today 😊

Now Back to Greedy Geet!!

She made new sheet of pair in this semster... hmm Lalach kuch bhi karwa sakta hai.. 👏

One more thing I found in this Geet, as she is innocent, as she think if she commit sin in other way God punish her & it remind me sum1 😉 & u know WHO 😛 😆 On other hand she was stubburn too, as she forced Maan to not help her...

But like how Maan help her from the situation of more embrassing infront of college, as she is drench in water!!! 😳 😕

One more myestry of MAAN, his loneliness in Khurana House!!! what was that as he change the topic!!! but I will know in future 😛

Maan's joke on God's punishment that GREEDY people will drowned in Ocean LOL!!! 😆

but I really not know that GREEDY MONSTER would YELLOW EYED hahahaha... How u found that 😃 😆 👏 but greedy se Green yaad ata hai as G se Green & Greed 😆 😆

but yellow yellow dirty fellow hai na so its going with it ...😛 😛 😆 😆 👏

Edited by DreamyPrincess1 - 12 years ago