Pt5/6'Forbidden Fire'(A Devil's Tale)Pg5/40

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RavishinRavzy

@RavishinRavzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#721

tumko kisi
ne dhamki hai ki agar hasna band kar
dogi to oot pe bitha kar nadi mein
chhod di jaogi...Oot tumhe doobne
nahi dega aur nadi tumhe neeche
nahi utarne degi

di what is the meaning of this?

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

next thread jnj
ussko bhi aaj maar dalenge

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lazy-sleeper

@lazy-sleeper

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Posted: 12 years ago

#723

the end ho chuka hai chalo dtp pe 😉

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#724

hey anu aajao hum log jnj pe jane ki baat kar rahe the

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lazy-sleeper

@lazy-sleeper

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Posted: 12 years ago

#725

dona di hyperlink karo na mere mobile se nai hoga

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JeevanaP

@JeevanaP

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#726

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3298541/jatt-and-juliette-4aja bache

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#727

Plz update soon...

again you are making us wait.. you can't do this, make us wait to meet our devil

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priyanka

@doublecross

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Posted: 12 years ago

#728

the apple on fire!
hmm thats interesting
the apple symbolises the forbidden fruit in the garden of eden and its on fire, because our forbidden apple for this ff Maan Singh Khurana is so hot and sizzling!😆

jokes apart 😉

apple surely symbolises the forbidden fruit in the garden of Eden, here the forbidden fruit is love for both the protagonists and the apples on fire as it depicts te current situation of both Maan and Geet, both are burning within
both have their sets of issues
one is scared of love and the other doesn't know if there's something called love at all!
so both are jostling with their dilemmas

now the update, what can i can say about it, i have run of superlatives!
its great! full of passion
Maan's gaze not only has geet squirming but has we readers captive holding on to each word and drooling and pining for more
get's daredevil act got her into more trouble, as mr hot singh khurana now in full devil mode is hell bent upon making get realise that its not just her body but he wants more and that includes all of her, her mind her soul

waiting eagerly for the next one
apaologies for commenting in late
but what to do health hazards
please continue sooonnn

Edited by doublecross - 12 years ago