Pt5/6'Forbidden Fire'(A Devil's Tale)Pg5/40

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Anshru, you very well know that i simply love every ounce of your updates and i am being honest, always. But this devil, bow down.
Do cont soon and do PM me.

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ElienoreMG

@ElienoreMG

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Amazing update..
Loving dis devil...
Dis devil is really unpredictable
Wow the last line was mindblowing...
It's better to rule in hell rather then be nothing in heaven

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Faiza

@DreamyPrincess1

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Aniee H Anshra Amazing update.. 👏 👏

this Maan is very very diff.. I like him 😉

I love the most where maan Keenly watching her as she was thinking about her inner where he enter so smoothly... She was hell scared as he was some enigma, who never understand his acts & words..

Most intense dialog of today "Do you know, your one glimpse ignites something precarious, something forbidden inside me, it's painful but still I want to see you all the time? Punish me more,"

after ruining his dinner he just through DATE directly, that was unxpected but HE ROCK with his words & action 😃❤️ ❤️ ❤️

then telling her to DROP THE IDEA MARRYING AGAIN.. again he left with COnfusions.. hehehehe

& that "I hope you know what a couple is supposed to do on a date?" 🤣 🤣

Would be supposed one kiss here???😆 😉 ☺️

haye Can't wait for NEXT!!!

In full secruity MSK reached where he should be ;)

then bring her with him that to in Nite Dress .. hehehe

God!! What he was thinking or planing yr.. Aniee its Mindblowing ...

I m Falling more with this DEVIL!!!

Thnx for updating...

P.S: & yes after joing English Classes, U r going so fast in vocabulary as I m using Dictationary while reading chapters!!!

BEST OF LUCK DEAR !!!

Edited by DreamyPrincess1 - 12 years ago

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Asmi13

@Asmi13

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

He carried r in her night dress...poor Geet,couldn't get time to change also

Awesome update

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Hasini

@bubblygal1711

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

OMG...This Devil is sooo HOT...precap awww...
Update soon...Superb Part...

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Awesome one and waiting for more.

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deepthich

@deepthich

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

di... this is so different!!!

MAAN didnt yell yet her... rather saying her his heart a little...

the first shock i got is when MAAN dropped her back home!!!!😲
n asked for date!!!

n then he came inside the house of GEET...
n second shock i got is... h want her to love him... n that too in his conditions!!!!

again carried her... n now date is in night dress!!!😲

i loved one line again... that is

"It's better to rule in hell rather than be nothing in heaven,"

precap!!!!! again😲
waiting for next... update soon...