Pt5/6'Forbidden Fire'(A Devil's Tale)Pg5/40

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shruthiR

@shruthiR

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

It was a very nice chp. So he dropped her back home! Anyway,can't believe that the police didn't do anything and just saw him walking away with her.Looking forward to the next chp.Update soon😊

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

superb tooo gud di
maan taking geet forcefully on date
hmmm i m just loving dis devil alott
its simply mindblowing

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

kyun geet maan k saath panga lena...u knw na...he is a devil...den why...do as he says...

superb n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Awesome update di
Loved it
Omg is he that serious I mean police ko bhi Dara diya tu aab geet ka kya hoga
Poor geet going on her first date I night dress
Omg precap stripe!!!!
Cont soon

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Ohh god
how u mange to write such a devil
really inteligent and scary both

i m just fan of ur writing
but really scared to read precap

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Isolophiliac

@Isolophiliac00

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

awesome update

loving the devil...

continue soon

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seher

@love4all

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Awesome part dear
Loved it
O ge kya maan ne phir geet ko kidnap kr liya hehehe
cont soon dear

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

wow...simply awesome...i love this daredevil maan..muahh

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

oops.. this guy is dangerous for Geet.. and the precap.. poor girl...

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Divya

@april12

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

He just dropped her back? I'm too confused.

And his mind reading skills...must say way too good.(I get creeped out when my mom reads my mind, think about what it will be like to have a stranger do that)

And now he wants a date! An abnormal one.

How notnormal is he?

Waiting for the next update