Pt5/6'Forbidden Fire'(A Devil's Tale)Pg5/40

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: sdlife19
nice update

oh god wat is this maan made up of yaar

i mean he is just making us to fall in love with this devil again and again

poor geet

hey thanksss

how are u?

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

loved the update

this maan is little bit difficult to understand

is that apple symbolic to show as forbidden fruit?

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: lovely_sweet
GREAT update... Thank you for such a long and intresting update... He can read her... That can be dangerous but on the other side its the greatest gift we can have.. Someone WHO can read is and know how we feel without us telling...
He really rules the hell... And i love HIM for it hihi:))
Please continue sooon

thanksss😳

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Muskan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: anshra

aww so sweet of my muskan

and u know

here I am waiting for diljale like fish out of water

😆

lain deen ki baat karain?😆

Seriously... 😆

I still be t person profiting 😳 more

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drrose31

@drrose31

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: anshra

hahaha

the stripping part comes next

I wonder how geet gonna escape now😆

anything can happen😆

yaar plzz give some advise for my head

its spinning

ae lo isi liye tou hoom am doc .. 😉

have vicks balm's massage/ painkiller like ponstan or SLEEP

after all you have thought a lot today ...

And yes am not gonna expect anything from this Devil .. he is way too much to expect any simple thing from him 😆

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Faiza Ghafoor

@SecretSapphire

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

I am fine kiddo
mera net grrr
tum hospital mein thi kiddo

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: srirad
Great update...👏👏
Amazing dialogues.👍🏼.Speechless..

Do you know, your one glimpse ignites something precarious, something forbidden inside me, it's painful but still I want to see you all the time? Punish me more, -Superb..👏

Maan is really different.full of insane.He tell her to be enemy..😆.

Omg...Devil gave penality to her😆...ordering for date...😲

Glad that geet families are understood her situation⭐️

Omg.😲.Maan came inside of geet house.. Geet is full of shocked when he confronts about her think..Geet came to know that he will read her mind..

Again he carried her that to with night dress..😲😳

Loved the line-" "It's better to rule in hell rather than be nothing in heaven,"👍🏼

Precap sound interesting

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting for next😊

thanksss

hugsss

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Muskan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: anshra

yeah its a forbidden fruit😉 represting lust temptation

Wonder if there is a punishment that would follow

Or will it be salvation itself😛

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: muskanp

Seriously... 😆

I still be t person profiting 😳 more

u r wrong on that part😉

and u cant imagine keh log bhi mujhe dua de ge

😆

so plzzz updateee

plzzz

I have chewed all my nails whiel reading DJ

only fingers left

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: drrose31

ae lo isi liye tou hoom am doc .. 😉

have vicks balm's massage/ painkiller like ponstan or SLEEP

after all you have thought a lot today ...

And yes am not gonna expect anything from this Devil .. he is way too much to expect any simple thing from him 😆