Pt5/6'Forbidden Fire'(A Devil's Tale)Pg5/40 - Page 24

awesoome upd. loved it fab...

nice update

oh god wat is this maan made up of yaar

i mean he is just making us to fall in love with this devil again and again

poor geet

Originally posted by: muskanp

To think abt it... Apple is really interesting...guess a very rich symbol

Symbol of temptation.. Greed..salvation..peace😳

Ur attempt I. Writing ur updates like novel 👏

Originally posted by: anshra

yeah its a forbidden fruit😉 represting lust temptation

Originally posted by: drrose31

la la la la la la...

am smiling after reading this part

the whole drive while geet was trying to understand him i was thinking on "how is she going to the date in her night dress"

but this DEVIL was kind enough as he took her to an empty place...

must say the dancer stripping plan was good one

but uff !! geet and her big mouth...

she made Devil angry and he was just going to demand her that thing ..

so she accepted that she will herself do that thing ...

as far as your question is concerned .. i will say

am waiting for the next part 😉

love yaa

oh your head hmm... doctry advice doon kya !!😉

Awesomee Awesome...this devil is unpredictable...Superb update aniee...your wonderful writer...

Originally posted by: muskanp

Ur attempt I. Writing ur updates like novel 👏

Wonderful

Actually u r doing remarkable job

Actually phelen bhi Bahut aacha tha.. Guess now it totally gives a book like feel

Only problem is Muskan wait for t next part😭

Originally posted by: muskanp

First think hit me in t banner was t fruit!!!

Simply amazing 🤗