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ElienoreMG

@ElienoreMG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

U should understand that everyone is not a writer like u dear... Now I'll become a SINCERE silent reader of ur stories(meri likes or choti cmnts ki toh kisi ko qadar nehi hai)😭... Cz i can't give u big comments... Thank you..

Edited by ManeetGurtiMG - 12 years ago

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preet.harman

@preet.harman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

hello dear🤗

where is the update???😡

not fare😭

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

just I read update in pm...

yaar main to darr hi gayi thi ki update kahan gaya when I click link from fb...😕

then I immediately opened my IF account and saw pm there...😎

Daadi ne MAAN SINGH KHURANA in romantic mood mein pakad liya...

lekin thoda aur tease karna chahiye tha daadi ko jaldi chod diya...aise mouke baar -baar thode hi milte hain...😉

mujhe yeh scene read karte hue GHSP ka wo scene yaad aa gaya when Maan and Geet both were standing in Maan's room door and Maan was romancing with Geet and Daadi came from behind...Maan said Daadi main exercise kar raha hoon...Daadi---haan haan beta karo karo ,shaadi ke baad aapko sehat ki bahut zaroorat padegi...😳

but here u changed dialogue but scene was same and it came out very good...thoda teasing jyada hoti and baaki sab gharwaale bhi aa jaate to aur achcha hota...👍🏼

and flashback was so emotional when Maan lift her and bandaged her... when she hesitate then he said--now I have haq to touch u...hai sooo dreamy...

but issmein wo precap nahin tha...meri to saans hi atki hui hai ki why he will slap her...what she does that he has to slap her...yaar itna bhi kya gussa...what if MSK make mistake himself...he will feel good is somebody slaps him also...no body in this world is perfect...he can also do mistake...😡

anyway he did right or wrong I will draw this conclusion when I will get to know what mistake Geet done...may be I can say --ek aur thappad padna tha...😆

awesome update...👍🏼

ab next update jaldi do taake pata chale ki why he slap geet...and what punishment she got...haan I warn u punishment ab uske agle part mein mat pahunchana...mistake -slap-punishment...sab agle update mein hona chahiye...😈

thanx for pm...