Pt4'Forbidden Fire'(A Devil's Tale) Thrd3 Pg23

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

ha kiddo hum to professional killer ban gaye

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RavishinRavzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

by 5:10 di,today,I'll stay here upto 7 ,no classes today.

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Dona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

upto 7 wow
good news kiddo
ye fai kab aayegi!!!!!!!!!!!

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RavishinRavzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

bye di,its time now,these people won't ring the.bell late for our bb. but when its time to go home,at 5 they take a nap and then fresh up. and for that leisurely.

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Rajshree12

@Rajshree12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

Awesome update di...
Poor Geet has to bear all the harshness of the davil Maan...
He is ssooo ruthless & emotionless...
Geet ne poora dinner barbaad kar diya...
Ab Maan kya karega???

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

great part
what maan will do now

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priya_ya1408

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

Awesome update
Maan is such a devil dont know which punishment now maan will give

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priyanka

@doublecross

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Posted: 12 years ago

#258

whao annie super super superb!
what a devilishly delightful update!
reading about the devil and the angel is always a treat!
forgive me for commenting in so late as as was really very ill, still recuperating form jaundice
but how could i stay far and way for the devil for long
he is like a magnet that pulls you towards it and you spin out a magical ff everytime you sit down to write
loved it
in love with it completely
will be waiting for some more
more more more more more
more
more more more
more more
more
more
continue sooonnn please

and i would like to dedicate something to you and this ff

do listen to this

its called storm by yanni

Edited by doublecross - 12 years ago

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SilentMelody

@SilentMelody

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Posted: 12 years ago

#259

congo aniee on 4th threadcongo on 400 likes...u truly deserve it...no much much more than this...congo to me i changed my co..finall-lll-yyyl...yeee...

bt thanx to u anieee...

now update ...

updateee..ahaaa

well well...

poor geet is badly trapped by devil... ...

damn man...this devil is in full form with his action & tongue...

he literally given gun to geet to prove her wrong...wow...wow devil...kya kehna ...

& then his lines..."Here we go. Humans! Big intentions, even bigger claims and a very small heart and even smaller courage.."

"Interesting, I don't know why you people exaggerate so much. All the time, you keep on saying so many things and the moment you get the chance to do them, you back out. Why you people lack courage to do what you say or mean?"

(bt devil ek baat ha...khud ko bht bahadur samjta ha na tu...agr sach ma geet ne fire kr dia hota to kya karta tu...bolo bolo tell tell...? kis ko dekhata apni DEVIL-GIRI 😉 )

aniee salute to u...👏

maan singh khurrana...man of words...wow...

"When I say something, I mean it. This is what makes me Maan Singh khurana,"

"Always do what you say or this world won't take you seriously and eventually a point would come when even you would also stop taking yourself seriously."

aniee i dont know how can u alwz potray such strong character bt the fact is that only u can do it...hatts off grl...👏👏

"Yes, I want to ruin you. But I want to ruin you more than that. Few minutes back, I could have ruined your body, anyone could have done that. And I am not anybody, I am Maan Singh Khurana. My desire is to ruin your heart, your soul, your everything. I want to ruin you to an extent where you will find peace nowhere but to burn in this fire along with me, on your own accord."

ufff loved te lines...

devil is falling for her...?

this devil is surely much much dangerous ...

OMG aniee this part was really awsome...

very well written...

awsome dailouges...

one the best-est updates...

infact all updates r awsome yaar...we cant point any one...

comendable job aniee...

love u swthrt...

Edited by ranjeeta1410 - 12 years ago