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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet

awesome part

the way she finally realised her love was awesome
n that dev n naintara hope they rot in hell
n poor maan

waiting for the last part n hope geet will be fine if a miracle really happens


thank you for pointing that out. . i really want to make the way she realize her love special and impactful.

I would include Brij in that list of rotting in hell.

my eyes want to ball out tears for Maan. 😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

OMG!!! I believed Dev when he said he got CANCER. But you precap sounds very tricky. So I was in doubt on Dev's intention. Here the revelation is really so frustration. He sold Geet just for 5 damn Lack!!! How damn that could be!!!

I respect for the Maan's deep love for Geet. He didn't think a second to give away his company when Dev asked for it. He is willing to give away his life for geet. That is a wonderful dialogue.

OMG!!! Naintara's entry was totally unexpected. Why didn't she just let Maan go away. If she had, Maan would have flew away and Geet wouldn't be shot. But am curious on how Geet was able to search where Maan is"? Where is this place actually?? Dev's place I guess

The last was so filmy style but I love the scene. Geet on Maan's arm, soaked with blood, declaring her love for him, her bleeding thumb print on the divorce paper, Maan filling her maang with his blood and finally Geet recalls on her true Humsafar.

Why is Dev getting so over emotional on seeing Geet dying. I so hate him. I want him to die

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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Tyro

Congrats on the new thread...


so she finally came to know what was in her heart...

cant believe that this SS is going to end now...


thank you!

yes finally she comes to know. . she finally wins and breaks free from the shroud of blinds over her eyes.

I know me neither! 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Lovely update...
finally geet found who her love is...
but as always it was late..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Loved it

H geet will be saved but how?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Mrs.ZSK


omg i can't believe this is u mariam. . reading your comment i have such a big smile on my face 🤗

but also i am so sad for making you cry. . . i even teared up writing this part. Where she finally finds out who she loves, she is fighting for her last breaths to finally tell him that 😭😭

It's such a winning moment for her though amidst everything else. She finally rids of the shroud of blindness over eyes and comes out a winner! She proves how her pure love for Maan conquers all, by taking that bullet and saving Maan instead of Dev. She saves Maan, not knowing the truth that Dev married her because Brij sold her to him. . .so there was no bias in her decision. . . just true love, which not even her supposed blind love that she held on to all this time could stop her.

That's the aspect i really wanted to portray here.

WHen i started this story. . this concept of blind love. . i have experienced and still experience, it's been 8 years and i still love that person . . .moving on its not an option. Have tried, but one glimpse of him and he effects you more than he had ever had before. You melt and your heart just surrenders. Maybe i am putting myself in Geet's shoes here, at least she broke free. Even if she dies ( i still don't know if she will) but at least she breaks free.

Somestimes there are beautiful sad stories. . in real life there is never always a happy ending. But i promise before i make a decision i will think of every possible option i have and make the best decision.

It's not easy writing painful parts. i feel it too. Hopefully i will make the decision that gives justice to this story and concept. . and i am not just saying it, i honestly mean it to !

I hate so much, that i don't want Naintara being the one to make him pay for everything. It will either be Geet or Maan or both depending on how i choose to end this SS.

Is it just me or i have been so attached to this SS, that i'm upset over the fact that its ending 😭
Love ya for ur long comment🤗



Oye Zee aaj rolane ke hi irada hai kya tera
already upset with this everyting falling a part in my life and ur adding to it yaar😭😭😭😭😭😭
i understand how hard its to forget the one u love so much and break urself free from that pain, but alas it never let u break free in real life, and in real life no one has a happy ending, (just saying it on personal experence, don't know how the outside world is as I am still trying to fight with the personal experience) but the main point is, its not easy to break free urself but in this blind love Geet did, and like u said "
It's such a winning moment for her though amidst everything else. She finally rids of the shroud of blindness over eyes and comes out a winner! She proves how her pure love for Maan conquers all, by taking that bullet and saving Maan instead of Dev. She saves Maan, not knowing the truth that Dev married her because Brij sold her to him. . .so there was no bias in her decision. . . just true love, which not even her supposed blind love that she held on to all this time could stop her." Its very true, its better to die accepting the truth of whom u love then living with the person who doesn't love u, and Geet will not have any regret even if she dies coz the person loved the whole time, she finally confessed to him.
And I am sorry to hear that ur life is also related to Geet in this story, I just wonder, what do they gain from hurting the one who loves and cares for, rather then running after the one who doesn't, hope ur problem gets solved too yaar, don't mind but sachi kah rahi, jo tumhari kadar nahi karte unke liye bekar main khud ko kyun jalana, the more u will run after that person u will only hurt urself der, i know its hard to accept the truth but sach tu yeahi hai ke that person maby was not meant for u.
Ufff main bhi kya le kar beath gai, waise I am that same Mariam to give u this long comment, kya karo Zalim Sing Khurana ne update hi aisa diya tha ke khud ko rok nahi pai and whatever i felt i just wrote it down, and thoda sa socha ke tujhe maska laga lo thinking u will update soon, so u better to do that...
Aur haan like u said sometime their are beautiful sad stores too, tu I hope this stories will also have a beautiful ending, aab sad hoga ya happy I will leave it on u to decied as ur the writer, jo tujhe acha lage and that goes with this sotry wo hi likh na

Mariam
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: ajenn

OMG!!! I believed Dev when he said he got CANCER. But you precap sounds very tricky. So I was in doubt on Dev's intention. Here the revelation is really so frustration. He sold Geet just for 5 damn Lack!!! How damn that could be!!!

I respect for the Maan's deep love for Geet. He didn't think a second to give away his company when Dev asked for it. He is willing to give away his life for geet. That is a wonderful dialogue.

OMG!!! Naintara's entry was totally unexpected. Why didn't she just let Maan go away. If she had, Maan would have flew away and Geet wouldn't be shot. But am curious on how Geet was able to search where Maan is"? Where is this place actually?? Dev's place I guess

The last was so filmy style but I love the scene. Geet on Maan's arm, soaked with blood, declaring her love for him, her bleeding thumb print on the divorce paper, Maan filling her maang with his blood and finally Geet recalls on her true Humsafar.

Why is Dev getting so over emotional on seeing Geet dying. I so hate him. I want him to die


hey jenny! 🤗

Geet was adopted, but her adopted father passed away. She was used and hated by her adopted family. So he sold her off to Dev, which pretended to be in love with her 😡

It's the difference between Maan and Dev. Dev bought Geet's love while Maan is freeing her from that bough blind love. Maan is the one that truly loves Geet, willing to give up everything.

Naintara was an unexpected entry. She took her anger on Maan and Geet as well. It hurt her so bad hearing all the sexual comments Dev made about Geet! He had promised her that it was over between them and that they would get a divorce, but obviously he lied. . .not his first time now is it!

It's Dev's apartment! They are meeting in some dark stock room in the basement. Geet knew the guard would kick her out like last time so she tried to enter from the back way, and when she did, she sees Naintara with two guns about to fire at both of them. SO she had to decide who to save.

Lol i never no when ppl say something is filmy, if it's a good thing or bad thing 😆 but you say u like it so i will take it as a compliment.😳

Dev getting emotional has another reason behind it. As it turns out he did care a little for her. Yes using her seemed okay to him because she was alive, but to think her murder is on his hands, bothers him. but i still hate his ass, and he will pay sooner or later.

thank you for commenting 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Mariam94



Oye Zee aaj rolane ke hi irada hai kya tera
already upset with this everyting falling a part in my life and ur adding to it yaar😭
i understand how hard its to forget the one u love so much and break urself free from that pain, but alas it never let u break free in real life, and in real life no one has a happy ending, (just saying it on personal experence, don't know how the outside world is as I am still trying to fight with the personal experience) but the main point is, its not easy to break free urself but in this blind love Geet did, and like u said "

It's such a winning moment for her though amidst everything else. She finally rids of the shroud of blindness over eyes and comes out a winner! She proves how her pure love for Maan conquers all, by taking that bullet and saving Maan instead of Dev. She saves Maan, not knowing the truth that Dev married her because Brij sold her to him. . .so there was no bias in her decision. . . just true love, which not even her supposed blind love that she held on to all this time could stop her." Its very true, its better to die accepting the truth of whom u love then living with the person who doesn't love u, and Geet will not have any regret even if she dies coz the person loved the whole time, she finally confessed to him.
And I am sorry to hear that ur life is also related to Geet in this story, I just wonder, what do they gain from hurting the one who loves and cares for, rather then running after the one who doesn't, hope ur problem gets solved too yaar, don't mind but sachi kah rahi, jo tumhari kadar nahi karte unke liye bekar main khud ko kyun jalana, the more u will run after that person u will only hurt urself der, i know its hard to accept the truth but sach tu yeahi hai ke that person maby was not meant for u.
Ufff main bhi kya le kar beath gai, waise I am that same Mariam to give u this long comment, kya karo Zalim Sing Khurana ne update hi aisa diya tha ke khud ko rok nahi pai and whatever i felt i just wrote it down, and thoda sa socha ke tujhe maska laga lo thinking u will update soon, so u better to do that...
Aur haan like u said sometime their are beautiful sad stores too, tu I hope this stories will also have a beautiful ending, aab sad hoga ya happy I will leave it on u to decied as ur the writer, jo tujhe acha lage and that goes with this sotry wo hi likh na

Mariam


awwhh. . now u wanna take revenge and make me cry kya??
if you wanna talk through pm. . i am here for you 🤗no matter what it is you wanna take off your chest. .cry. . complain. . whatever i am here to listen🤗 My life seems so perfect to the people who know me since they think i am rich. . but having money does not solve your problems. . in fact i say it adds to your problems just as much as it takes away of your problems.

awwhh i am gonna hopefully update on the weekend :D because i found out today that my teacher moved the exam so now i have time to update and plus also thxgiving holidays too

thank you for understanding. Hopefully i will make a right choice.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

finally u updated... thanx... as u said it was an intense part... so many things happening...

salute to maans immense love, who didnt even gave a second thought to give his company to dev... and in the precap when u mentioned a lady with a gun yes the only thought was geet, as there is no one else in this ff but u surprised me with nt...

and geet got shot??? but am happy that atlast she made the choice and she save maan from shot... but how did she reach there???

and i loved all the dramatics too... her blood thumb impression on the divorce papers, khoon bhari maang, she seeing taweez, ...

again cliff hanger... yes like majority i too hate sad stories... so i too will prefer geet to fight back and live her life with her sexy hippo... hope u will make up ur mind soon and come back with the update SUPER SOON



yes love maan here so so much!
yeah i knew ppl would think it's Geet but surprisingly some ppl guessed that it could be some girl in dev's life.

It's dev's apartment, but they are meeting in some room in the basement. And since Geet knew the guard would kick her out like last time she tries to go from the back way, which is where she gets there.

awwh thank you.. .glad to here u liked it.

Sorry yaar. i already had written such a long update, couldn't' fit much more in.

i know i prefer that too, but sometime there is no happy ending.

will try to continue super soon . thanks again for spamming 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: paponecon

of course it should b an happy ending...varna...u know hw mch i lv this ff n maaneet...n they must b united after so many sorrows...one secret is out...brij sold her only for 5 lacs...omg...n y dev was getting emotional to see geet was dying...bravo maan ...he lvs geet so mch that he didnt hesitate for 1 sec to leave KC for her...she lvs maan so mch that she didnt hesitate for 1 sec to leave this world...hw u will tell so many things in last part such as y maan calls her brown eyes...hw he dreamt of her eyes...their formal marriage...their hnymn...their lv their nokjhok...their kids...


who would of thought that Dev could garner some feelings for Geet?? He didn't even know he did till she gets shot. ..and it also had to do with him eating his own words that he owns geet's heart and she would come back and ask forgiveness from him, but here the opposite happened and Geet ends up saving Maan. . not him!

This is the worst punishment to realize you actually love someone, who was always yours, but you were the one that pushed them away!

i know i love maan for that! not much men like him could be found who would do that! And Geet she finally wins her internal battle!

there is gonna be a last part if its a sad ending, and i wil ladd an epilogue if i choose to do a happy ending so i can fit everything. it's an SS, not an FF by the way.


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