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Posted: 12 years ago



Part: 34

"Break free or set free"

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But she fought with all her might for a couple more seconds. "I pray that the next janam and every other janam . . .i will be only yours. . I am sorry Maan. . . plz forgive me" her eyes close and her hands falls lifelessly on the white rose, her blood trikling on his petal, filling it with RED.
"BROWN EYES"!!!
******
He was walking, feeling the sand slither between his toes; feeling the frisky morning breeze twirl around his skin. The sky was still dark, sunrise just slightly peaking over the waves, the cells in his muscles tightening in response. As he walked along the beach he could see a myriad of footprints in the sand. Big ones, small ones, crooked ones, straight ones. . .They all had a story behind them. They were all made by people filled with dreams, hopes, desires, fears . . .

What part did his story play in these footprints in the sand? In this great story we call life, how did he fit in? Few people are truly satisfied with living what we would call an average life; a life without some greater goal. And to someone with great hopes, the idea of being just another footprint in the sand is intimidating, but the reality of life.

The beautiful sun rose high above the sky, stretching its light rays across the waves, hitting him on his bare naked chest. He looked like a Greek God sent from the heavens, but he looked lost. His mind catapulting him to exactly one year back!

*******

"There is no time to take her to the hospital. We are losing her. Her heart is failing" one of the paramedics yelled.

Paramedics tried resurrecting her, but her heart lifeline becomes a straight line.

*******

He jumps inside the crashing waves, letting the cold frisky water calm the fire in him down, letting the water wash the haunting memories away. All his efforts were in vain.

*******

He saw them cover her lifeless body with a white sheet.

"What are you doing!" he shoves the paramedic to the side.

"She is still alive! She can't leave me!" removing the sheet away from her face.

"I'm sorry Mr. Khurana. We tried our best" the doctor says with eyes on the ground, not being able to meet his eyes.

"Try HARDER, or I swear I will put you in this state doc" he held him by his collar, raging with tears escaping his eyes.

"M-m-m-ist-err K-kk-runa'na" the doctor chocked as Maan's grip around his throat got tighter.
"MAAN" a familiar voice and grip around his shoulder, made him let go.

"Vicky" he mutters, but his eyes watched the paramedics shake their heads as they put her body in the ambulance.

"Her love was blind, but now she is free. She set herself free" Vicky hushes to Maan, trying to comfort him.

Nothing could comfort him now, not after watching the love of his life slip beneath his fingers because of him!

*********

He brings his head out of the water to breathe! He had lost count how many seconds or minutes he was under water.

He took a deep breathe and just let his tensed muscles loose. Let himself just float as he closed his eyes letting his mind wonder with what Vicky said " Her love was blind'"

Her Love was Blind, but so was his? There was only one difference. She wasan Addict! It's when the dependency to one person gives you a sense of purpose, a sense of meaning and self-worth in the world. Love addicts are driven by a fantasy hope, that the drug of choice, a person, will complete them. She accepted the flaws and tragedies as one with life, when she had every reason she needed to let go of Dev, but she didn't.
His love was also blind for his brown eyes, and always will be. The heart holds no judgment that is completely out of 'reason'. We tend to see our judgment as logic, or as the truth. Even when love started pumping into his veins, he let his heart be his eyes. He saw the world as if he was blind, not letting societal norms and rules stop himself from falling and chasing after a married woman. You can base true reasoning rather than first impulse reasoning, but the best kind of reasoning is found through intuition, not always through logic and thought processes.
His mind stops roaming, his eyes flutter open feeling a pair of hands snake around his chest, and legs wrap around his torso flipping him around in the water.
"thinking about me" she giggles running her hand up his thigh with a naughty glisten in her eyes.
"Not at all" he rolls his eyes grabbing her by her sleek smooth legs and throwing her up in the air.
He couldn't hide his smirk as he swam back to shore, hearing her scream, ""SEXY HYPO!!" in utter irritation.
" You Ullo ka patte, ghade, idiot!" she angrily huffs in the water.
Yes, that was his woman! To others he was a Greek God, but to her always a Sexy hypo. A smile creeps up on his lips. Because of his blind love, she was with him today. Or else he would have never had the strength to fight for this crazy woman.
**********
"NOOO!" Maan shoves Vicky away from him and headed towards his brown eyes.
The paramedics just stepped out of his way, there was no way they were getting in the way of his blind love.
"Brown eyes please. . please don't leave me! You can't leave me!
Who am I going to tease and fight with? Who is ever going to see that I am actually a sexy hypo! What am I going to tell your pyaari George?? It's my turn to rub it in it's face that you chose me!
"It's my turn to make it jealous, and here you are leaving us both? He will never forgive you haan, and I won't let him forgive you!" he chocked as a tear streamed down his eyes.
"Open your eyes, Brown eyes. I can't live without you!
"You finally accept you love me, but then you decide to me leave! I won't forgive you!
Come back and manofy me Brown eyes'Come back and give me the chance to love you more than you'll ever know".
He waits for an answer. He drops his head on the side of her body, holding on to her as tight as he could. He wasn't going to let her go anywhere. He just wasn't! Vicky came to take him away, but after hearing his confession, he didn't have it in him. Wiping a tear that escaped his eye he just walks away.
Soon Maan feels something wet fall on his hand. He looks up and sees a trail make of a tear from Geet's eyes which were still closed.
"Brown eyes! She is alive I told you! She is alive. She is crying!"
The paramedics rush in!
"Baby don't cry, just come back to me and I won't give you a reason to cry"!
*******
Maan comes out of the water, running a hand through his sleek shiny black hair. Remembering how the doctors termed it as a miracle. Two girls on the beach mouth watered in awe seeing his sexy Greek Body.
Geet charges toward him throwing a towel at him, and leaves with fuming eyes.
Maan quickly grabs her by her wrist and twirls her back into his chest " You look so Hot, when your angry"
"Acha-"
"and Jealous" he bites her earlobe knowing exactly how it effects her.
Geet momentarily forgets what she was going to say next. He knew exactly how to make her anger melt away.
"hmmm" Maan wraps his hands around her waste and crushes her closer.
"Maan.. .people are watching" she blushes shyly, bringing the gaze of her eyes down.
"toh. . .We are in France on a beach enjoying our honeymoon. People walk naked here and you are worried about me kissing you" he looks at her skeptically.
"I am worried about people seeing how plain I look when I stand next to you. I am the luckiest girl on the planet to you sexy hypo" she said with tears almost welling up in his eyes.
"It's the other way around. You could of left me last year on this exact day, but you didn't. I would have been a walking dead body, who nobody would look at twice. It's only because you this Sexy Hypo has to look good or else who knows you might leave me for that George of yours" he teases rolling his eyes trying to bring back a smile on his face.
"That's why you were all lost this morning. I am still here, not going everywhere" she hugs him.
She places a soft peck where his heart was, soothing his soul even more.
"But you know if I left this world, I would of left free. I would of left knowing I was no longer chained down by my blind love, or addiction as you like to call it".
"You couldn't leave, I had you shackled by my love, and so you came back".
He places a kiss on her forehead, "Don't leave me ever".
""Don't plan on it". She inches closer and takes in his lips, taking Maan by surprise. He responds with increasing fervor, locking his lips were her!
*********
"I don't want to leave. This angreezi place was growing on me".
"Tell me about it" Maan says squeezing her buttocks.
"Maan" she says exasperated.
"Don't fight with me. . you know you liked it" he winks.
She grits her teeth, but could feel her cheeks burning up. She wanted to be mad, but her body always cheated on her.
"I love it when you blush, but you want to be angry. It's not your fault. You have Mr. Maan singh Khurana as your husband. Cut your self some slack brown eyes. And if you wanna stay I am more than glad to extend this honeymoon trip for another month".
"Stop distracting me, as much as I love to take you up on that offer of yours. I got some unfinished business to take care of" she says almost scrunching the letter that was in her hand.
"Come here" maan pulls Geet and sits her on his lap. "You don't have to do this alone. I already told you that".
"I know, but I need to do this alone"
"But I don't know if I am okay with letting you go alone"
"Please for my sake. It's something I really need to do alone" she makes a puppy dog face.
"I will still come with you to the hotel, but you can go alone from there"
"Possessive freak" Geet mumbles biting his lower lip before pushing him away.
The Private jet flight attendant looked away flushed who had just came to ask if they needed anything. Geet just gives her the look and she knows to leave.
Maan touches his lips with his finger as he looked at Geet with a "I ' could ' just- eat ' you- right-now " look.
"Don't even think about it" she says a little too late.
Before she can yelp, Maan had already taken in her lips, feeling its every corner, savoring her scent. The moment he touched her she lost ever ounce of will to fight back.
Maan swiftly unbuttoned her shirt and threw it to the side.
Geet couldn't helpo but giggle, "Aren't you getting good and fast at this".
"What can I say practice makes perfect. So stop talking and allow me to get some more practice or else I just might have to punish you" her huskily whispers taking a bite at neck.
Geet moans with pleasure.
********
She felt nervous, had knots in her stomach. But she just closed her eyes, gathered courage and knocked on the door.

Nobody was answering, suddenly all she heard was yelling and screaming. Horrible memories starting flooding back to her, making tears well up in her eyes. She stopped her tears, broke the glass window with her shoe, and went inside.
Geet grabs his hand before he could hit her once more.
"Geet" he says in utter shock.
All he saw was her raging eyes spitting daggers at him, not the fear that used to exist for him in her eyes.
She throws his hand to the side, "You haven't changed one bit I see. And to think I came here to help you and your family. What did you say in your letter that you wanted to kill yourself from the guilt of abusing me, for selling me off! Yeah I can clearly see that!" she yelled at the top of her lungs.
"People like you deserve to be locked up not given a second chance".
Brij: Oyyye! Me and getting locked up because of a bitch like you? Oh please!
What so now you are going to send your new husband to torture me and lock me up like he did to Dev? Oh wait didn't he do suicide? That is why before letting my wife and daughter follow your steps, I punish them just like I used to do with you.
Geet: Dev the coward that he was took his own life. Couldn't live with the guilt of what he did. He wanted a death sentence, but that would have been too easy of a punishment for him. He took the easy way out and ended his life.
I will lock you up, before you sell your wife and daughter in the name of money like you did to me.
Geet grabs her phone and calls the police.
Brij: At least let me go to jail with honor. For killing a bitch like you! How's that?
Suddenly fear crawled up Geet's skin.
"I missed seeing the fear in your eyes. What happened? Where did all your strength go?"
"You want to send me to jail. I will show you your place bitch" Brij yanks her by her hair and shoves her hard against the wall.
Tears of rage threatened to escape from Geet's eyes. She had enough! Most of her life was spent fearing and getting abused by the person she kept telling herself was her brother.
Brij comes at her again, but Geet grabs the talwar off the wall and places it over his neck,
" ENOUGH"
"I am not the Geet you used to know anymore. I will and can kill you right now in the name of self defense and trust me I will get away with it".
"Go ahead. Kill me. Kill your brother! Brij taunted.
"Your not my brother. The day you sold me, you lost every right to call me your brother. It was the first time I was happy I was an orphan, and not related to an animal like you by blood"
"Still I came here to help you from losing your house. The house that I used to live in, but it's the house and the people in this house that need more saving from you" Geet yelled moving the talwar closer to his throat.
For the first time Brij saw the hate, rage, and fearlessness in her eyes and feared for his life, the sword pinching and piercing slightly through his skin now.
"Put the talwar down Geet before you regret it! , but Geet just inched closer.
Brij hissed as drops of blood started to drip from his throat.
Suddenly Geet drops the talwar.
"I am not like you. I will let the law deal with you" wiping the trail of tears marks off her face she walks out holding Brij's wife and two daughters out with her.
Brij's wife , " I can't leave like this. He is my husband. I love him even though he beats me, but its because his thinking is so backwards. It is not his fault"
Geet's breath hitches, she saw so much of herself in this woman. Her Blind love!
"trust me, you don't love him. He doesn't deserve you".
"You wh**e. . trying to kill me and take my family away" Brij hisses as he charged toward Geet with his talwaar.
The talwaar stops in midair. A strong muscular arm holds the talwaar's blade between his fingers.
"Maan" a whisper leaves Geet's lips.
"Geet get the wife and kids out of here. . GO"
"Oh so now the rich bachelor who sleeps with wives is here to the rescue? Don't worry my wife isn't a bitch like Geet! You won't have a chance with her"
With one punch to his jaw, Brij buckles to the ground.
"Go Geet!" Maan roared throwing a set of car keys to her.
Geet complies and takes them away, she looks at her rear view mirror and didn't feel a bit of remorse for him, but only for his wife and kids who were now crying.
********
Brij get's thrown in jail, while Daarji watches her in disgust. She didn't flinch once, only showed him her new found strength.
Geet convinces Brij's wife to move to Delhi and start a new life there with her kids. Maan willing to help pay the expenses for her kids, even though she kept on refusing.
With a long day's event Maan and Geet reach their hotel.
Maan watched Geet hold the side of her neck and go make herself a cup of chai.
"You want" Geet asks.
Maan nodes his head for a no, not taking his eyes off her for even a moment.
"What? What is it? Why are you staring at me like that?"
"Why? I believe I have the license to stare at my wife with or without clothes" Maan teases with a straight face.
"maan tum bhi na" Geet shakes her head taking a sip out of tea, when she feels his hands gently glide over to her neck and apply pressure on it.
"Oh and does he have a license to massage me too?" Geet places the tea on the table, turning herself around to meet the adoring eyes of her husband.
"Jokes aside, I am so proud of you Brown eyes. You are one strong woman! And yes I do have the license to massage her and make her feel all good after a long day's work" he starts to massage her thigh then goes higher and higher around her sensitive part, making her all wet and ready to have him.
She pushes him to the couch, "Not fair. You play dirty sexy hypo. I like it" she tugs on his tie, loosening it up and chugging it to the side.
"I am the woman today all because of you!" she whispers near his collarbone, as she rips the buttons of his shirt open.
"I love you" Geet mutters lost in his eyes.
"I fell for your forbidden eyes!
Now my eyes are Blind.
Without you darkness is all that lies,
Your love is the light for which I pine."
Maan recites his own own poem from his painting of her Big Brown Eyes.

"I love you too Brown Eyes. Always have always will" he huskily whispers caressing her cheek before sealing it with a kiss.
Yes love is blind, but you need to break free when the person is not worth your love.
You need to fight harder if the person is worth your love.
That judgment is up to you!
But certainly for Sexy Hypo's case, his brown eyes was worth the extra fight.


After a lot of thinking, I decided that a happy ending would get across the message and better portray the concept of this SS better. I hope you loved the journey of this story just as much as i loved writing it for you. I can't believe it's over 😭 Thank you for all the love and support🤗

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Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg...
speechless...
incredible...superb upd...
lov it...
finally u gave us a happy ending...
"I fell for your forbidden eyes!
Now my eyes are Blind.
Without you darkness is all that lies,
Your love is the light for which I pine.

these lines r wonderful...jst lov its deep meaning...

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Posted: 12 years ago
THANKS FOR HAPPY ENDING
IN STARTING I THOUGHT U MAKE IT SAD BUT AS I READ IT TURNED OUT TO BE HAPPY

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Posted: 12 years ago
love love loved it!!!! happy ending! yaay!!!!!

awesome story!

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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u very much fr d happy ending...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it tooo much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d epilogue...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part
When i read the 1st part ,thought it was sad ending ,thanks dear for making it a happy one.
Liked the way geet tackled brij
Loved brown eyes n sexy hypo a lot
This is the last part 😭
Edited by -padma- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me very emotional that knowing its the last part
reading the first quater i felt that maan lost geet
i m ready to cry and was angry on u😆
but as soon as i read the reast i wanted to hug u for this hayee
u made my day

want an epilogue zee and i hope after this u may start ISRTU soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was a speechless one..!!!
loved the strong geet...all thanks to maan..
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg.. it's end..😭😭😭 such a beautiful update & story...pls give long long epi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update. but first when i read i felt tat geet is dead but later a big smile on my lips. finally their blind love won. dev got his punishment and brig got his. now need a big lengthy epilogue

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