(MG-OS) RISKY LOVE THREAD 2 (COMPLETED OS)

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d_sonia

@d_sonia

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#291

Awesome os
Loved it
Different and amazingly written...
Enjoyed every bit...
Pls pm me when ever you update...
Continue soon
Waiting

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#292

Lovely part rose...I liked the story line...diff concept ...you can extend it too SS than OS...I loved this one from of other FFs of yours...

Poor neha ...geet ke vajah se jaldi uthan pada...lol...

Thnx dia...tumhare vajah se hi maan geet ko akele me shooting sikhayega...dreamy...

But poor geet ...have to keep running as her punishment

I loved maan here...one moment he is very strict and other moment he is indirectly helping her...all the time he is judging her

TFP

Cont soon

Eagerly waiting for his personal tutorial for shooting

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renjini263

@renjini263

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#293

Lovely update dear!!!
Hmm so Dia pushed Geet deliberately!!!
Poor Geet she got punished... wat is Geet going to do nw???

Maan also felt bad 4 punishing Geet!!!!
Precap is interesting..plzzz cont soon

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

part 5
awesome...
so Neha and Raj have collided...
jald shuru hogi in dono ki kahani...
Dia grrr poor Geet...
and Maan gadha...
cont soon dear...

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#295

Dia is such a cheap girl...she don't deserve to be an Army officer...

Maan gave so harsh punishment to her...

for such a small incident this is very harsh punishment...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#296

Hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! Well written! Geet determined to impress Maan! Bt Dia notices Geet's reaction wen she sees Maan n pushes her! Maan punishes her! Geet upset! Neha tells Maan wat happened! MAan goes to Geet! Geet does nt want to eat! precaps r interesting! update soon

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Is Dia ka dia to main bujhati hun. K***** kahin ki n y is geet in Maan's cabin nw.

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#298

awesome..superb update...loved it very much
awww pood geet..maan punisha her
argh hate dat dia...oye geetu chodna na use acha sabak seekana...Jalkukdi ko
neha s reallu so sweet...thank god she told maan truth
intresting precap...continue soon
thankx for pm