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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
hey nice concept yaar..defo wanna read further, pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: GurtiArti

Amazing Super Fantastic prologue and Maan and Geet totally two different character...One is forced to sleep with him and other one slept b'coz his agony...Very interesting start...!!!

But i have one question how can geet is prostitute b'coz she gets physical with only one man...!!!

Me little confused with this line???


i know jaldi samajh aayega thoda wait karlo sweetheart 😃 lekin for prostitue ke liye first time hoti hai haina??
Edited by dreamyharika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
CONGRAST ON NEW STORY

NICE CONCEPT

DO CONTINUE SOON

THANKX FOR PM


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely Prologue

Waiting for the Update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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TEASER:


Geet stumbled with her steps walking towards the bed as maan was closing the door. She sat on the bed closing her eyes squeezing the eye lids hard against her eye balls unable to take the tension. She cud feel maan sitting on the bed beside her, holding her through arms maan made geet to relax on the bed. Both of their hearts thudded against their rib cages wildly.

this is a teaser fot the first part hope ull like it i see a poor response on the prologue 😭

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
nice prologue
diff concept do cont it
thnx fr d pm buddy
but tht means thy r involved in something like this fr d first time ...
Edited by pixelflower620 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yar don't worry abt respnse u will get it
and i is tremendous
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
didu mujhe ab sirf update chahiye
yeh teaser vesare chodo
jaldi update dedo
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
waiting dont worry ull get good response with first part😎
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
lovely teaser.eagerly waiting for part 1 .plz update soon

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