MG OS#13: Kaise Unhe Main Pukaroon-Complete/pg1

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pingu-tingu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Loved it ! Continue soon !

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Teju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Nice one..Waiting for next part..

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

fabulous part

i just love the way u write... it seems so realistic yet dreamy too... and am too love with the arranged marriage scenario...

continue soon

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Hi dear..thanks 4 another rocking OS! Hmmm u updated from ur mobile so will look out 4 further updates! Awesum song choice ! So far amazing start! Loved it! Maan n Geet meeting was beautiful! Superbly written! The eye lock was fab! Update soon! Waitin

thanku so much khwaish...
i loved this song so much...my all time fav...
am glad you liked that part...my fav too...
updated just now😳

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
fabulous part

i just love the way u write... it seems so realistic yet dreamy too... and am too love with the arranged marriage scenario...

continue soon

thanku so much lakshmi...
i like to write easy to connect scenes...
aww...me too luv arrange marriages😳😳

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Hi thanks 4 da pm! Awesum update! Beautifully written! The restlessness, n feelings well portrayed! update soon n do try n pm! Thanks

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sonu4ever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Lovely part dear 😃
I was left grinning and blushing 😳 😆
Awww i simply loved it. 👏
Needless to say that it was beautifully written. 😉
Wow it oozed romance yaar 👏
Loved that sweet silence when they were sent to talk. 😳
Aww Maan crossed his fingers when she was about to say yes 😳
Naughty annie and nandini lol
Will maan gift her the black saree ? 😉
The perefect kodak moment. Having chai on the beach
😳

I simply adored it. Felt content reading it 😃
Cant wait for more 😳 👏