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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamyharika



jaan update @night thik hai love ya good mrng me going to work aur tum??


will be waiting for update
love u didu
good morning
me on shopping for diwali
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for the new thread👏
nice teaser
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for d new thread sis
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likes complete hugaye ...

update pluueeejjj
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for d update sissy !
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didu likes completed
ab update dedo
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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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PART 13:


Maan was studying her over the rim of the glass, as he was sipping the drink in the pub. The short skirt and the formal shirt geet wore was catchy. All the lustful eyes were plastered on geet as she was serving the food and drinks in a function. Ever since the encounter geet had with dev she started to avoid maan and also tried to lecture him on the topic of frndship and how bad it was on his part to avoid sameera. Maan understood that geet was trying to avoid him for sam bt y does she have to start work again?? Isnt the money she got from the competition was enuf?? Wat more was bugging her?? Then maan's sight fell on geet who was cleaning the ground as drink spilled out from the glass of the guest. His anger rose to peak, he just grabbed geet's arm harshly making his way out of the hall, while ppl glanced that a reputed businessman's son was taking a waitress out!!!


Geet: so u were staking me right?? She asked wittily finding maan in the party


Maan: geet yeh sab kya hai?? y are u doing all this?? Kya kami reh gayi thi meri taraf se?? agar tum yeh soch rahi ho ki isse main sam ka wahi purana dost ban jaonga toh tum galat soch rahi ho its nothing like that and it would be better if u get this!!! He gave an icy reply


Geet: sam?? Uske baare mein main kyun sochongi maan?? its nothing like that. I already have so much of burden on my head to take care of y will I take an extra burden?? Ull not understand my prblm leave me alone I have a job to be done now she remainded him, bt maan decided no!!! not anymore of this. He will have to help geet wateva it might be. He forcefully made geet to sit in the car..... maan no please!!! I got to go try and understand mujhe kaam karna hai, bt maan locked the door. Geet looked at him with pleading eyes!!!


Maan: I told u already u are not going anywhere not until u tell me wat is bothering u so much?? Tumhe paise chahiye na?? kitne chahiye?? Mujhe batao main donga bt don't u degrade urself working at such loathing places. This is not the right place for u


Geet: and y will I have to take themoney from u?? koi kisi ka madad aivanyi nahi karta maan and even if u gimme the money for no reason I wont take that's not my way. Main kuch bhi karongi lekin not a business ... wat did u say now?? He tightened the grip of the fist which was holding geet's hair... tell me dammit?? Wat business??


Geet: u need something for the money ull give me right?? Uske jagah mujhe bhi toh tumhe kuch dena hai?? wat do u need from me?? Those words stabbed maan so much. So she feels like everyone he was trying to help her for his lust!!! Still he remained quite nothing came out of his mouth after wateva they shared she still feels ... yes geet I need something from u and that is!!! Maan did not continue, in a fraction of moment his arms scoured around her drew her closer to his!!! Pressing his lips on hers. When she can accuse him for no reason, y cant he make it true. Maan thrusted his tongue into her mouth as geet started to get weak in the kiss allowing him to do wateva he intended for!!! Bt he was nowhere stopping so after a long time, She gave up understanding the fact that she was no match to his strength. She hit him hard with her lil fists trying to make maan come back to the normal world... maan leave me I am sorry she said with that maan left her and he shoved some money on her!!! this was wat u were accusing me off na geet?? keep this money with u


Geet: I am sorry maan!!! really I am and then she felt maan's finger on her lips... mujhe nahi pata geet ki kaun tumhe paison ke liye pareshaan kar raha hai bt trust me u can share with me


Geet: I do want to lekin mujhe thoda time milega?? I promise main sab bataongi bt not now I need sometime to compose myself she said looking out of the car


Maan: ill wait geet lekin can u change?? Main tumhe apni dadima se milwaana chahta hoon


Geet: lekin iss time peh?? No I mean mere kapde!!! Yeh thik nahi hai phir kabhi geet replied nervously


Maan: arey tum itna kyun dar rahi ho?? Ek kaam karte hai we will go to the outhouse waha tum change karlo phir dadima se milne chalenge. She is a sweetheart trust me he said winking at geet


KHURANA MANSION:


Geet was awed looking at the grand and royal look of the mansion. This is the place where maan lives?? She took a breath just to make sure she was not fantasizing things. As maaneet reached the hall there geet saw an elderly lady sitting on the lush furniture reading some book. Maan placed his hand on geet's waist..... yeh meri dadima hai chalo milwaata hoon!!! He guided geet towards dadima.


Dadima lowered the book from the level of her eyes and smiled at both of them naughtily..... hmmm!!! Maan toh aap aagaye geet ko leke?? Achi baat hai, saying this dadima scanned geet from top to bottom. She looked gorgeous in the salwaar kameez.


Dadima: toh yeh meri honewaali bahu rani hai?? she asked smiling all the while bt maan fell into the lap of his dadima..... aap bhi na dadima!!! She is my frnd geet


Dadima: mujhe pata hai and I want u to leave geet with me alone for sometime. T.V mein match aaraha hai aap dekhlena beta main geet ko apne saath lejaongi thodi der


Maan got up from her lap..... aisa bhi kya secrets share karna hai aap dono ko ki main nahi sun sakta??


Dadima: aap budhu ke budhu hi rahenge. Do aurat{ladies} kya baat karte hai yeh aap na hi pooche toh hi acha hai now move I want to take geet with me she got up making maan to sit


Geet giggled as dadima got lost in her innocence. Dadima had always been around with those rich spoiled girls and for the first time looking at a simple innocent girl she was over whelmed as the impression geet made in dadima's mind was something she always wanted to be in maan's to - be wife!!!


As dadima caressed geet's cheek her eyes got teary with the immense care dadima held!!!


Precap: a small sneak peak into maan's life!!!


Target 170+ likes girls get to work next one will have some romantic moments for sure!! Bare with me as I know the story is going on a slow mode


PREVIOUS PART:

PART 12


NEXT PART:
PART 14


Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was so sweet update

aage kya likho samjh nahi aa raha
aaj ke liye short comment
bade comment ke liye wait karlo didu
hell tired
Edited by lovesia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

didu aap toh
res for update ka board laga ke Mr.INDIA ban gaye
thats not fair
jaldi update do

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