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TEASER:


Geet: are u out of ur mind?? Sab kya sochenge?? They will feel ke hamare beech mein kuch hai

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Sam: bday celebration haa… not bad geet u hve managed well to impress maan. I must say u are too good jaisa profeesion waise kaam. Skin show for modeling and u get money there yaha maan ko phasene ke liye u don't just think once……………. SAMEERA!!!


i need 14 more likes on my last update girls get to work!!!

PART 16

Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
sona-rai thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely teaser yar.
eagerly waiting for update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
teaser
is that Maan's voice?
Sameera is really so J of Geet...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice teaser
waiting for the update.
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updating
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Originally posted by: spvd

teaser
is that Maan's voice?
Sameera is really so J of Geet...
cont soon dear...

blue is for maan right?
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Originally posted by: sona-rai

lovely teaser yar.

eagerly waiting for update.

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PART 17:


Maan captures her lips into his setting their bodies on fire, caressing her spine with his palm madly exchanging saliva with her!!!

Geet attempted to stop maan who was going further down, moving his lips towards her neck, trying to stop him placing her hand on his chest. That made him come back to his senses. He got up immediately feeling guilty for loosing his control. He just cudnt look into geet's eyes, fearing that she might mistake him, bt to his utter shock she spoke, maan kalse we will start our preparation, we have only ten days left for exams

Maan: par kal toh maine kuch aur plan kiya, tumhara bday abhi shuru hua. Kal we have lot more things to do.

Geet: no enuf maan abhi bohut ho gaya, leave now its already late she said pushing maan out of the bed.

Maan: jaa raha hoon, lekin kal ek din, listen to me uske baad ill do wateva u wud say, he said

Geet: tumne pehle hi bohut kuch kar diya, abhi...abhi bohut hai tomorrow I have decided to throw a party. Hamare classmates bhi honge

Geet: are u out of ur mind?? Sab kya sochenge?? They will feel ke hamare beech mein kuch hai


Maan: jisko jo sochna hai soche, I don't really care party @ tomorrow eveng that's it!!! saying this he left

Maan still cudnt forget the day wen sam insulted geet in the pizza hut on her bday and its time for sam to understand that geet is a part of his life. He wanted to clear out that geet is nothing less than her, he wanted to say sorry to geet for that day and this is the best chance he got to tell her that he is sorry

PART 4


EVENING:

Maan arranged the party at the pizza hut the same place where sam was given a party last year, the same table bt with better decorations. He personally checked everything, all his frnds started to come one by one. Vicky, maan's elder brother too arrived to meet this special girl who maan has become a latto from head to heel. Of all this sam was seething with anger, literally burning with jealousy.

Sam stood beside maan who was least concerned, his eyes were only searching for geet who did not arrive yet. Pinky came along with adi was stunned looking at the hall and the arrangements. How can maan do so much for geet?? The whole college have a gossip that maaneet were dating each other since an year. And now all this were adding to her the talks which pinky was not liking, she didn't want all the ppl to say something bad abt her frnd

After 10 mins geet entered the hall elegantly dressed in a off shoulder gown which maan gifted her. Her figure got enhanced with it, nothing artificial with that she just left her hair straightened and a small pendant with a small necklace. She was still coming inside wen maan ran towards her to take her hand and took her towards the cake which was beautifully decorated with geet's name on it 19th birthday was written on it. Geet smiled while Vicky and adi took the charge of the snow spray and soon it filled the whole hall. Maan held geet's waist and gave her the knife, she cut it blowing the candles on it.

Geet fed the piece to maan and then maan ate half of the cake and smudged the remaining on geet's face. Sam was cornered, all the ppl were awed looking at the chemistry maaneet were sharing.

Maan introduced Vicky to geet and he cud guess that there was something beyond frndship between these two

Vicky: geet becoz of u aaj maan mujhe mila warna sir bohut busy hote hai, he winked at geet she shied... ek kaam kyun nahi karte ho tum dono?? Waise hamare office mein apprentices hai it wud be better if u both join as u are into civil engg it will help u for further and also thoda pocket money mil jayega aur yeh saabzaade line mein aajayenge he said

Maan: no bhai mujhe enjoy karna hai kamse kam holidays mein toh chodo mujhe iss maharani ko maine hamare textiles factory mein designer pieces ko promote karne model choose kiya woh bhi toh karna hai he spoke with an irritation

Vicky: haan toh tum dono pura din thodi waha rahoge?? Bus kuch ghante bt this apprenticeship will help u for ur further studies

Geet: Vicky I am ready aap bus time boliye main aajaongi maan ko aur bhi kaam hai he wants to play cricket with his frnds during holidays issi liye aise bol raha hai

Maan: oye geet shut up tumse maine kab kaha that I am planning for cricket??... I know everything for one last time are u joining with me or not?? She question with sterness

Maan: thik hai mam jaise aap kahe bt don't forget ull have to pay for ruining my holidays he warned geet.

Vicky knew he is a changed maan now, though he was upset internally knowing that maan is not the maan as he used to be Vicky cudnt do much bt this side of maan is just becoz of geet!!!

All this was adding fuel to the anger of sam, she was hating the attention geet was getting from Vicky and maan especially maan!!!

Soon the music started and all the ppl got busy dancing to the tunes eating the pizzas. So was maan and Vicky. Taking the chance sam dragged geet to a corner

Sam: bday celebration haa... not bad geet u hve managed well to impress maan. I must say u are too good jaisa profeesion waise kaam. Skin show for modeling and u get money there yaha maan ko phasene ke liye u don't just think once...SAMEERA!!! Maan came from behind overhearing wat sam said to geet, mujhe pata tha ull do something like this. I was trying to say sorry to geet for wateva u did that day here bt u neva change saying this maan took geet with him outside the hall in anger.


Precap:

Geet: I love him pinky I really do lekin main nahi chahti ki meri jindagi ki kaali andhere mein maan ulajh jaye. I signed thinking that will help my education lekin dev mera bachpan ka dost aise niklega maine socha nahi

Pinky: mujhe lagta hai maan too loves u so much uski ankhon mein nazar aati hai jis tarah tujhe dekhta hai


sorry for the late update girls sobia really sorry 180 likes for next update girls!!! hit a like atleast plz😭


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