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Posted: 12 years ago
part 25 was awesome
aww so sweet of Maan so actually Maan has arranged the re education for orphanage girls & of course for Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 26 fabulous update love it

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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww lovu awesome update...sorry for late comment u know why ...pata nehi ye geet ko kya hua kkhana asse q bana rahi h kabhi saulty coffee kabhi sweet bitter curry😕...hmmm ye sab love ka asar😉...ab din raat maan ji ki bare mein sochegi toh assa toh hona hi tha😳...hayeee maan geet ek dusre ko khilaya😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏awesome ,sweet n lovely😛 updates dear ... lovely dinner of maaneet they feed eachother with their hands veryyy sweet😳😳😳 ... story going very beautifullly😃 eagerly waiting for next part cant waittt
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Posted: 12 years ago



PART 27


Maan n Geet finished food happily. Maan started to took out tray when geet stopped " maanji I will do ..give me'' she started to stand when maan stopped " no.. you sleep, I would do myself'' he went but came back in few minutes. Geet was ready to sleep when, " geet.. before sleep take this pill '' maan handed over to her. She was amazed with this special care and was doing, what maan was saying, without any denial. She ate and lied down, covering with sheet. Maan left after satisfying she is fine and slept.



Morning



It was the day which geet had been waiting since she stopped dreaming about it. She was a brilliant studier but fate took away everything, she wished for. Her school, her study even her books and a single pen, she dint have. But today, she was going to achieve her want.. a desire which was untouched till now, hidden from everyone but now, someone touched her heart and stole her Untouched Desire... to complete it.




She was excited. She was in hurry. Like all normal girl she was not at all worried for , what she should wear cause she had never had any choice in life ever. She had limited options in life and she never thought of any alternatives. She was going to get ready when maan said to bring water. She went kitchen and came back with glass and gave him. He drunk and left to his room. Geet went her room and started to be ready when her eyes caught same packet , wrapped in diff paper. She understood who kept it and when. She smiled thinking how much happened because of this gift. She wore his gift and got ready.



She came out and went to leave when nakul called her form back. She saw, He had something in his hand, a packet which he handed over to her. She took it with surprise and asked what was it. Nakul smiled and requested her to open . She unpacked and her eyes went emotional , seeing two notebooks and a pencil box.. where two pens ( a red and a blue ) a pencil, a rubber and one cutter were in it. She was filling with happy tears inside but did not show. Instead she bend down and touched, nakul feet , for give her brotherly blessing. Nakul shocked first but then composed himself and touched her head, blessed her, blessed his small sister, for a happy and successful life ahead.



Hence, geet was all ready to go.. to go out and turn her dream into true. Maan was coming down and his look, caught geet. She was standing with nakul in hall when maan saw her, wrapping in His Gift. She was looking so pretty, carrying a sweet and most beautiful smile n All ready to leave. He admired her, kept looking her , purely colored in his color. His lips made satisfied gasp and came down. He passed her, from behind. She looked to him and shied , seeing approval in his eyes. She understood, she was looking good. She smiled...



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Geet was on road waiting for auto when maan car appeared before her. He ordered her to sit but geet denied, saying it wont look good. But maan was not willing to listen her and she had to agree. Geet hesitantly sat on passenger seat. In 15 min of journey to orphanage both was mute. Geet was lost in her school thought and maan was too excited for her, looking her excitement. Car stopped on orphanage gate. Geet came out and said thanks to him. Maan nodded. Geet turned and was to enter inside when heard " best of luck geet '' she smiled and turned back to him . " thank you maanji'' she said. Maan smiled also and left.. after few minutes geet too left with her friends.



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It was a decent building. All group of girls entered looking around with big eyes. It was adult school where re education had been being conducted by an NGO in several academic programs. such like basic education, job training, fine arts education, computer education, business training and many more. So it was a place where all girls could chose their like of field after getting some primer knowledge of all programs. (These info has been taken from RE: START school of adult Education). So now geet was in the world of education where she could compete with this world, independently. She got schedules and info of all her classes and around noon, she left for km , back.



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Geet reached km all happy and smiling. She went her room changed and looked watch. It was lunch time. She asked nakul did he send lunch to maan . Nakul nodded no. " hey babaji.. nakul bhaiya aap bhi na '' she rushed to kitchen and made some food for him and sent with driver. Then got busy in house chores. She was very excited to tell someone and started narrating nakul, who was looking her with blank face, not getting a word but showing as he was understanding all. So thus geet spent her time till maan comes..



Precap: Geet In Khurana Constructions 😉

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Edited by geet.lover - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow ...
I am in Love
I am in Love
I am in love ... with ur FF :) 😳😳
First MAAN feed her & then give her medicine too 😲
He he he Lol , aab MAANJi ka partime job mil gaya
Geet ka khayal rakhna 😆😆😆

Omm calo Accha hai GEET ko lift deta hai
I am sure kuch din baad MAAN GEET ka Driver bhi Ban jayega😆😆😆😆

Yeh ISHQ , Mohabbat ki chakkar mai na Janne MAAN kya kya karega😆😆😆😆

I loved NAKUL & GEET portion ..
Somewhere GEET needed a guardian like NAKUL
& Nakul proved himself as a best brother

Iss RE_EDUCATIOn ki chakkar mai MAANEET ko dur dur na rehna pare bas😳😳😳
I hope this will bring them more close 😳😳
Update soon 👏👏👏
Edited by URME - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
wowww amazing update yar,loved it a lot.
interesting precap,eagerly waiting for tmmrw's update😃
Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww lovu lovely update...awww kitna caring hai maan chooo chweet😳...haila kitna cute gift di nakul ne ne geet ko pencil box ...scul ki liye first gift...
maan ki suit pehen ke gayi geet.wowww sooo romantic😉...hayeee geet khana leke jayegi KC mein😉
Edited by raingurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
tat gift did reach geet and she w0re it

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