MG FF - Winter Sonata - Thread 1 - Page 3

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

first of all congrats for starting a new story...

and yes its very different form ur earlier works... the prologue though depicted sorrow and hurt but the HOPE and longiness was touching...

both the poems were just enough to make me spell bound ... and they are so captivating that waiting for this amazing ff abhi se shuruuu...

a tight hug for u for bringing another maaneet creation to us

i forgot to mention... name... winter sonata... this name itself creates some sensations and an urge to be a part of this musical saga...

will be waiting for the song to reveal...

Originally posted by: hermoso

Ash , awesome job and ur words added a little more flavour to winter sonata . 👏👏

Halki si dhoop badlon se chupa chupi khelthi aur zindagi ke har pehlu dikhati . Thand ki dhoop zindagi ki garmahat deti wahi sard hawaien zindagi ki raat ko aur gehra deti . Cherries ke phoolon har rang bhar deti ,tumse se tassavur karati

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

thank you so much di... and am really bad with poems so i feel it a lil stupid!!!!
and u r fab di...ur lines are mashallah...👏

in sard hawaon ko chaav mein hi shayad humari ulfaton ki duniya besegi...

jahan tum hi tum hoge

dhoop ki narmi mein zindagi ki tasweer ubhar aayegi...

aur un tasveeron mein humari yaadein saajengi

raaton ki gehrai se kya darr hain...

bahaon ke aagosh mei darr bhi sunhari dhoop si lagti

jab jhoot kahoon tho sab kuch hain mere paas...

jhoot kya sach kya

par sach bhi tho yehi hain ke bas tumhare saath ke alawa
ab kuch aur nahi humare paas!!!

jab har rooh mein tum hi baste 😳

wah di..dekho mein phir se poetic mode mein aa gayi...
aapka asar ho raha hain dii😉

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

ritzy dear

u have just posted ur musical prologue and see the flow of poems... what else do u need as an inspiration now to post the 1 chapter...

@ kawaii... just wanna say... beautiful title... loved it

Originally posted by: hermoso

thank you so much di... and am really bad with poems so i feel it a lil stupid!!!!
and u r fab di...ur lines are mashallah...👏

in sard hawaon ko chaav mein hi shayad humari ulfaton ki duniya besegi...

jahan tum hi tum hoge

dhoop ki narmi mein zindagi ki tasweer ubhar aayegi...

aur un tasveeron mein humari yaadein saajengi

raaton ki gehrai se kya darr hain...

bahaon ke aagosh mei darr bhi sunhari dhoop si lagti

jab jhoot kahoon tho sab kuch hain mere paas...

jhoot kya sach kya

par sach bhi tho yehi hain ke bas tumhare saath ke alawa
ab kuch aur nahi humare paas!!!

jab har rooh mein tum hi baste 😳

wah di..dekho mein phir se poetic mode mein aa gayi...
aapka asar ho raha hain dii😉

aishu , hum dono ek naao mein sawar 😉

Originally posted by: hermoso

@kawaii_geet

sahi kahan aishu , hum khud likhenge aur padenge bhi 😃😃😃