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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

thanks for starting a new FF😊
will be waiting for the update

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

great start

loved the emotions depicted by the poem

waiting for it

winter sonata the name itself create a urge in reader's mind ,a desire to look what this new saga contain;

this will also be special like others two written by u 👏👏👏

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

I m speechless right now di...

I really don't have words to describe what I felt after reading prologue..

Ok.. Firstly Congrats for this New FF... Hugsss...

Now the story... Aahh Its very different from whatever I have read till now...

It feels like it has pain.. longing of love.. togetherness..

Sometimes need to cared and be there to show u path in ur life...

And when I read geet's lines or say poem.. I had tears in my eyes...

Whatever u wrote in starting was so real and true...

I mean most of girls who have suffered alot thinks in that way only...

And Maan's prologue was too good as well...

This winter sonata started in winter season as well...

And I m very egar to see how this story will go and unfold all the emotions to us...

I too wanna sing a winter sonata for maaneet with this FF...

And I got something new to write for my poems...

I really wish when Story start I could write a poem for this one...

Tough It would be as I m not that good to match it with this beautiful story...

It is indeed something different. and now can't wait to start it..

Luv ya sooo much... and hugsss... TC...

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disha

@Conqueror212

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

u render me speechless...

its beautiful...😊👏

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

spellbound and speechless ritzy . Indeed a very beautiful prologue and poems were so etheral cant b describedc in words .

Winter sonata sounds so serene and depicts d mood of story and pics depics the journey of protoganist .@ash :) Lovely name

waiting for ur new creation to unviel and to take us musical l journey of maaneet

Open thy mind walk alone
Be not afraid, walk alone
Jodi tor dak shune keu na ashe tbe kla cholo re
Jodi tor dak shune keu na ashe tbe kla cholo re
Tbe kla chlo, kla chlo, kla chlo, kla chlo re
Tbe kla chlo, kla chlo, kla chlo, kla chlo re
Open thy mind walk alone
Be not afraid, walk alone

Jodi keu ktha na ke, ore ore o bhaga
keu ktha na
Jodi shbai thake mukh firaee shbai kre bhe'
Tbe pran khule...
Tbe pran khule...
O tui mukh fute tor moner ktha kla blo re
O tui mukh fute tor moner ktha kla blo re

Jodi tor dak shune keu na ashe tbe kla cholo re
Tu ru ru ru...
Tu ru ru ru...
Jab kaali ghata chhaye
O re ho re hoye
Jab andhera sach ko nigal jaaye
Jab duniya darr ke aage sar apna jhukaye
Jab duniya darr ke aage sar apna jhukaye
Tu shola ban jo
Woh shola ban jaa, jo khud jal ke jahaan roshan kar de
Ekla jolo re
Jo khud jal ke jahaan roshan kar de
Ekla jolo re

Jodi tor dak shune keu na ashe tbe kla cholo re
Open thy mind walk alone
Be not afraid, walk alone...
(geet's pov)

(maaan"s pov)

waiting anxiously ritzy .plz continue soon .

Edited by hermoso - 13 years ago

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meena..

@meena..

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

congrats on new ff

awesome prologue

its sounds as different concept

loved it

continue soon

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anjali

@anjucool

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Congrats for the new story 👏

interesting prologue

continue soon

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

on ur new ff di...
and the prologue was just so beautiful!!!!
and even i didn't realize the title will come so beautifully...

"

Will this snow melt and will this ice thaw

Will a Winter Sun shine upon my soul

Will I ever feel the warmth and love around

Will birds fly and bees buzz around

Will my entire self drench in that one voice singing out

My own Winter Sonata

Wondering still somewhere in corner of my heart

Will you sing that song which will fill me with light

Make me strong so that no Storm will wither me

And no sorrow will touch my sight

Do in my destiny, I have that song

My own Winter Sonata.."

just the most beautiful lines di..and it really did depict that pain and longing for hope..to break free from the ice that caged them...to feel the warmth after ages of coldness...

and cherry blossoms are one of my fav flowers..though u hardly see them in India..but i love them like anything!!!!!

"to see thy smile...i shall break that ice...

to see thy love..i shall lay my life...

breaking free from that iced cage...

i shall make thy fly high away...

live and love...

smile and laugh...

cry not my love..

the winter shall end...

and the sun will shine...

i shall break you free till your song is heard...

winter fairies shall dance and to thy shall sing the bird...

shining shimmering till all you long...

Cry not my love...

the winter shall end...

'tis all my love that i can lend...

dance and sing...

and spread your wing...

for thou shalt play your sonata...

Your own winter sonata...!"

okay this was random and i just wrote it because i was very much touched by ur poem di...and yes poem may sound a lil stupid coz i never ever write poems...😃 coz am very very very bad in poems😆 but i was so awed that i couldn't stop myself from writing it!!!!! my heart is still lost in those lines!!

am eagerly waiting for ur first part now di!!!!!!

Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

on ur new ff di...
and the prologue was just so beautiful!!!!
and even i didn't realize the title will come so beautifully...

"

Will this snow melt and will this ice thaw

Will a Winter Sun shine upon my soul

Will I ever feel the warmth and love around

Will birds fly and bees buzz around

Will my entire self drench in that one voice singing out

My own Winter Sonata

Wondering still somewhere in corner of my heart

Will you sing that song which will fill me with light

Make me strong so that no Storm will wither me

And no sorrow will touch my sight

Do in my destiny, I have that song

My own Winter Sonata.."

just the most beautiful lines di..and it really did depict that pain and longing for hope..to break free from the ice that caged them...to feel the warmth after ages of coldness...

and cherry blossoms are one of my fav flowers..though u hardly see them in India..but i love them like anything!!!!!

"to see thy smile...i shall break that ice...

to see thy love..i shall lay my life...

breaking free from that iced cage...

i shall make thy fly high away...

live and love...

smile and laugh...

cry not my love..

the winter shall end...

and the sun will shine...

i shall break you free till your song is heard...

winter fairies shall dance and to thy shall sing the bird...

shining shimmering till all you long...

Cry not my love...

the winter shall end...

'tis all my love that i can lend...

dance and sing...

and spread your wing...

for thou shalt play your sonata...

Your own winter sonata...!"

okay this was random and i just wrote it because i was very much touched by ur poem di...and yes poem may sound a lil stupid coz i never ever write poems... but i was so awed that i couldn't stop myself from writing it!!!!! my heart is still lost in those lines!!

am eagerly waiting for ur first part now di!!!!!!

Ash , awesome job and ur words added a little more flavour to winter sonata . 👏👏👏👏👏

Halki si dhoop badlon se chupa chupi khelthi aur zindagi ke har pehlu dikhati . Thand ki dhoop zindagi ki garmahat deti wahi sard hawaien zindagi ki raat ko aur gehra deti . Cherries ke phoolon har rang bhar deti ,tumse se tassavur karati

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

first of all congrats for starting a new story...

and yes its very different form ur earlier works... the prologue though depicted sorrow and hurt but the HOPE and longiness was touching...

both the poems were just enough to make me spell bound ... and they are so captivating that waiting for this amazing ff abhi se shuruuu...

a tight hug for u for bringing another maaneet creation to us

i forgot to mention... name... winter sonata... this name itself creates some sensations and an urge to be a part of this musical saga...

will be waiting for the song to reveal...