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Posted: 12 years ago


Maan has a past and Geet also...

very interesting insight into Maan's life...

waiting to know more...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Diwal greetings, wishes, animated pictures

HAPPY DIWALI RITZY

fabulous start ritzy . Maan ki zindagi ke kuch lamhe humne dekha . Veerani zindagi mein,halki si thand ki dhoop ne dastak de di hai 😊
Ek Ladki Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga
Jaise Khilta Gulab
Jaise Shayar Ka Khwab
Jaise Ujali Kiran
Jaise Bun Mein Hiran
Jaise Chandani Raat
Jaise Narmi Ki Baat
Jaise Mandir Mein Ho
Ek Jalta Diya...
Ek Ladki Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga
Jaise Subhon Ka Roop
Jaise Sardi Ki Dhoop
Jaise Beena Ki Taan
Jaise Rangon Ki Jaan
Jaise Balkhaye Bael
Jaise Lehron Ka Khel
Jaise Khushboo Liye
Aaye Thandi Hawa...
Ek Ladki Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga
Jaise Nachata Mor
Jaise Raesham Ki Dor
Jaise Pariyon Ka Raag
Jaise Sandal Ki Aag
Jaise Saulahn Singhar
Jaise Ras Ki Fuhaar
Jaise Aahista Aahista
Barhata Nasha
Ek Ladki Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga😊
Agree with palindrome ,tellyme and shruthi ,lakshmi ,cia ,mishthi u r magical with words ritzy👏👏👏👏👏 . Loved it . continue soon . cant wait for more .
will try to give lyrical commnt . 😃
Edited by hermoso - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

I m speechless and in trance.. like something is holding me in this update not to come out of it... I mean this is just the start and Pehle hi update me aapne mujhe speechless kar diya di...

I have never read this much amazing start of the story... and The song selection was just superb... I was soo lost in the update... and I was actually loving the lyrics of the song and the situation u was decribing... It was just perfect...

The way u started with Maan thinking of Dev' words then breakfast silence... Dadi's painful thoughts.. was just wow... It was like so real.. as If I m seeing it infront of me...

and then the way u started with song and rain and that girl... Uff I was Like Yaar why Can't I see it... I was enjoying reading but wanted to see it also... The way Maan felt seeing her and the song lyrics were going just amazingly...

and then last the rear view mirror and his ST... Hats Off di... I owe u a big thank u and would like to give standing ovation for this part... I means yes I have read lots of FF in this forum and none has that start which u did.. and As I m emotional person I was just in trace by reading it...

👏Wo kaun thi jo aise saamne aayi
Yu dil ko bekarar karke chali gayi..
Nazre uspe jaa ke hi ruk si gayi
?
Waqt ki ye baujhar jaise tham si gayi...

Uska wo chanchal roop dil me bas gaya
aayine ki tarah uski aankho me dekhna chaha...

Par dur chali jaa rahi thi mujhse wo
kadve mere atit ka fir khayal de gayi wo...👏

I don't know if its gud or not but just felt to pen it down by reading the update... and Ya SORRY for late comment... was held up...

and A Tight hug to you for this update... Luv ya... Muuaaahhhzzz

absolutely beautiful words ritzz ,loved it .
chandan sa badan chanchal chitvan
dhire se tera ye muskana
mujhe dosh na dena jag walo
ho jaau agar main divana
chandan sa

ye kaam kaman bhave teri
palko ke kinare kajrare
mathe pe sinduri surat
hontho pe dahkate angare
saya bhi jo tera pad jaye
aabad ho dil ka virana
chandan sa badan chancal chitvan😳
Edited by hermoso - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
sweet 1st part
i loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Happy Diwali thank you so much for this update amazing start
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one well what a 1st part geet enter nai hui only maan intro MSK was nice rain osum so maan ne geet ko dekli i love these line

"Have you gone mad Maan? NO…you are Maan Singh Khurana….MSK….not a fool to run after a pretty face senselessly. Yes she looked innocent standing there and struggling but she is a girl and MSK does not care or go after a mere chit of a girl. What the hell is wrong with him? Probably it has been long since he got laid and needs a diversion tonight."

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update di...
so something happened in past with maan, , that's y he hates girl..
ohhh dev is again a jerk here...
ohh wow, , simti huyi si, , loved the song...
finally maan had seen her,and become lattooo over her...
loved it...
and his monologue... awesome...
continue soon di... and sorry for late feedback...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hermoso

absolutely beautiful words ritzz ,loved it .

chandan sa badan chanchal chitvan
dhire se tera ye muskana
mujhe dosh na dena jag walo
ho jaau agar main divana
chandan sa

ye kaam kaman bhave teri
palko ke kinare kajrare
mathe pe sinduri surat
hontho pe dahkate angare
saya bhi jo tera pad jaye
aabad ho dil ka virana
chandan sa badan chancal chitvan😳



Thank u anu...

and Hayeee ye song I love it...

and Ritzy di waiting for nxt part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful start...
loved the way u described geets entry...
maan already mesmirised bt her...
waiting fr dere next meet...
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Posted: 12 years ago
am stalking this thread too... and also vivah... 😆

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