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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#221

hie di...
finally u updated!!1🤗
ab 1st part...u know my response to the 1st part ryt???😉
do i need to give a long one???😕
but still...i shall reserve my comments for the time being...
and comment properly only after chapter 5😃
hehehe i know i am being mean but u already know my views di... abhi kuch likhungi tho dil se nahi likh paungi because i write what i feel immediately after reading the update!!!!! aur phir upari comments...i dun like penning them down!!!😳 i want to write with my whole heart😳...so will do that only sorry for the next 4 upcuming parts😃...but i shall keep it reserved!😉
hope u dun mind diii me lub u no...

Edited by kawaii_geet - 12 years ago

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

I m speechless and in trance.. like something is holding me in this update not to come out of it... I mean this is just the start and Pehle hi update me aapne mujhe speechless kar diya di...

I have never read this much amazing start of the story... and The song selection was just superb... I was soo lost in the update... and I was actually loving the lyrics of the song and the situation u was decribing... It was just perfect...

The way u started with Maan thinking of Dev' words then breakfast silence... Dadi's painful thoughts.. was just wow... It was like so real.. as If I m seeing it infront of me...

and then the way u started with song and rain and that girl... Uff I was Like Yaar why Can't I see it... I was enjoying reading but wanted to see it also... The way Maan felt seeing her and the song lyrics were going just amazingly...

and then last the rear view mirror and his ST... Hats Off di... I owe u a big thank u and would like to give standing ovation for this part... I means yes I have read lots of FF in this forum and none has that start which u did.. and As I m emotional person I was just in trace by reading it...

Wo kaun thi jo aise saamne aayi

Yu dil ko bekarar karke chali gayi...

Nazre uspe jaa ke hi ruk si gayi

Waqt ki ye baujhar jaise tham si gayi...

Uska wo chanchal roop dil me bas gaya

aayine ki tarah uski aankho me dekhna chaha...

Par dur chali jaa rahi thi mujhse wo

kadve mere atit ka fir khayal de gayi wo...

I don't know if its gud or not but just felt to pen it down by reading the update... and Ya SORRY for late comment... was held up...

and A Tight hug to you for this update... Luv ya... Muuaaahhhzzz

Edited by mishtiritu - 12 years ago

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

fabuls start. happy diwali to u too.

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known

@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

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Mahi

@MSK_4ever

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

This is called the perfect start of a story...
i loved the way you described maan's life...
but m more eager to read the next part...
want to know about geet's side of story...
and one question, is this going to be a dark story, full of pains n all????
plz do tell me...
waiting for d next part...

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gudmeet

@gudmeet

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

the first chapter of winter sonata

nice one dear

and i love the titles for chapters which u used to write in till death do us part

i loved the update

and geet's entry was amazing

and our hot MSK THE GREAT doing tai chi

oh as if going back in the memory lane

i am sure this ff is going to be a wonderful journey for all ur readers and for u

the poem was nice

will wait for the next dear

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

That's amazing... Loved it.. Plz continue soon...😊

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

wow I am sorry missed reading the prolouge earlier.. read both the prolouge n chp 1 now...pretty interesting...had gotten so u to reading Dev-Meera together that it felt a bit awkward to read Dev-Naintara in this one !!

Continue soon !!

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sanj1905

@sanj1905

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

Beautiful start...

🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳
loved the poem as it describes the thoughts of maan so fantastically...waiting for more updates...waiting to know the reason y maan is like this? wat is his past?...

UPDATE SOON...
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