Maaneet FF - Bandhan Thread 1 - Page 58

Part 4 - Maan is trying to come to terms with her helplessness and way of life...trying to help whatever way he can. But more importantly he is trying to understand that it is not her fault and if he wants to really help her then he has to be indigenious.

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Part 4 - Maan is trying to come to terms with her helplessness and way of life...trying to help whatever way he can. But more importantly he is trying to understand that it is not her fault and if he wants to really help her then he has to be indigenious.

Also, he noticed Dev's behaviour and was bvrave to confront Geet abt it. Harassment and assault under the table are probably one of the biggest side effect of this evil...

awesome Anu...Maan is in pain because Geet has been beated so badly. the way he was looking at her wounds and asking her question in concern, it was very well written. Painfull but a reality. did her father beat her like thta? Well i guess we will know in next update but a very close bond is formed between them...a bond which may not have name yet but is purely love...

wow such and brilliant update , its so strong emotional update

the story is simply superb
the pain you described the above scenario it was simply great
maan's taking extra care towards geet
somewhere he has taken an initiative to protect her from all the evils and vices and be her knight in the shinning armour
he even feels his pain and there's an unknown bandhan that ties him to her
geet is a naive kid
she doesn't know how to differentiate between good or bad
all she pines for is two little sweet words
she is either subjected to scorn or even when anyone's sweet to her then he or she has some lewd intentions like that of geet
wow
all i can do is applaud you for such an amazing concept!
continue soon👏

I am awed by your writing in this ff!!

gr8 parts..

i m speechless...one of the best concept i have ever read...👏

di my heart is still beating fast

waiting for next part di...