Maaneet FF - Bandhan Thread 1

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gill123

@gill123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#501

Wow... Just loved it but geet ko kisne mara kahi vo dev to nahi geet ne mana kiya ho aur usne mara ho jaldhi se next update dedo please

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p.maan

@p.maan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#502

Oh who beat geet:) so small girl her pain:) maan knows his limits:)

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#503

Anu.. must say this is the first time m reading something so pure and innocent... cant thank you so much..

It indeed was so serene.. his care. his pain,.her innocence and the unnamed bandhan between them made it more serene..

Something touched my heart after so many days..

can know wat this story will be and m eagerly waiting to see how maan will take this bandhan and get her out of her misery

Thanks for such a beautiful update

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#504

That was an awesome update...

Very painful but beautiful emotions...

They dont know what they share, but for sure its something so serene... full of care and affection and deep and true...

Loved the way maan is trying to open her up with him,.. his care and affection is definitely a bliss for her since she is deprived even of smallest happiness...

and whats with the wounds... its so sad that she is not in a condition to tell him what happened... his caring and pain and her pain and reluctance were beautifully written.. it was so intense !!!

Loved it anu.. eagerly waiting for the next!!

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#505

amazing
so emotinal dear
oh god who beaten geet dear

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kavya.sravya

@kavya.sravya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#506

wonderful update ! loved how she trusted him and came to him even in that painful situation...and how he cared...beautiful written...the pain he felt seeing her scars...how he was tracing them in trance like state and suddenly realising the situation...and the little girl ...all confused but trusting him...very sensitive...did she go to her father and got all that beating...

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divya22

@divya22

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#507

it was a painful part...
evn.m thinking ki who beat her... her mom ki maan k ghar se kisi ne...
last day u mentioned ki door was not closed properly... toh kya kisi ne dekh liya???
n v understand... to depict d real situation n the pain u hv to show such things...